Reviews For Prayer of the Shinobi
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 - 09:13 am · For: The Raising
MANY MANY HAPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY..... SASAUI-CHAN...!!! :DDD (belated T_T m always late)
24th nov is it...? kool u r just 2 days younger than my lil bro... um.. skippin the fact tht he's just 8 =_= xD
lol... eh nvm... me n my stupid talks...
anyways... :D
n Gratz..!!! u r rank 5 on top most Profilc reviews... :P
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 22/07/11 - 01:13 pm · For: Warning
Awww, that sucks... But great at the same time. Now, Sasaui'll be able to relax a bit more and possibly update her other stories sooner.
Anyway, about my character, I don't really care if you add him or not. I might use him for myself in the future, but I don't know. It doesn't matter to me.
Good luck, Sasaui!
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 07:53 pm · For: The Raising
That's quite alright. It's tough to handle many stories at the same time, so it's okay. Though if you don't mind, I might use the name of my character in my story.
But anyways, don't worry about it. At least you've made the decision now instead of 10 chapters into it.
To Sasaui: Don't fret because you've got a lot of other great stories to focus on. And good luck to those! :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 06:07 pm · For: Warning
Thank you.
No, I'm serious, I'm actually thanking you. Poor Sasaui has been under way too much stress, and as a friend (online, but it still counts), I seriously worried for her stress level. No fourteen-year-old should have to worry so much about pleasing others. She's barely reached high school yet, and she's been apologizing for not updating and worrying about stories and what to do.
I won't deny that I'm disappointed for not seeing where this goes, but I would so much rather see Sasaui be less overworked.
Hmm, as for my character, you can add her if you want. I'm really not that picky. You can make her whatever you want. I think her character description said she was between light and dark, so if Sasaui wants, she can use that to any advantage she wishes.
Sasaui, if you're reading this, here's my personal message to you (well, as personal as a public review can be):
DO NOT FEEL BAD ABOUT THIS!
I would have continuously told you myself to take a break and not overwork yourself, but obviously, Star of the Sky and Krina are way more suitable in convincing you than I am.
Okay, anyways, good luck in writing. And thanks for the heads up!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 11:03 am · For: Tale of the Fallen Angels
I loved how described the scene. It kind of reminded me of Blue Exorcist. :D
But this is great! Awesome start!
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't reply before. Thanks a lot for the compliment. I've never read the Blue Exorcist, but I'm going to take that as a good thing.
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 08/07/11 - 09:03 pm · For: Tale of the Fallen Angels
wow...this just BLEW MY MIND!
I love it so far!
I so can't wait to read more and have the characters added into it.
This was such a great beginning!
Fantastic!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I was hoping that this part would make everyone excited for what was coming up. I'll try to make them as good as this was.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/07/11 - 08:49 pm · For: Tale of the Fallen Angels
Hold on please. *makes some coffee.... drinks coffee... SPITS OUT COFFEE (which is saying something, because I have recently become a coffee-addict... quite the shame really)*
Yeah, that whole little episode was in response to Star of the Sky losing interest in Naruto. Seriously?! Really?! That is... that's terrible!
( But Yu-Gi-Oh is pretty cool :D )
Okay, anyways... this was a freaking amazing intro to the story! Great job, I loved it! I thought it was really cool, really historical and fantasy-like. So supernatural. Nice job! And the battle was epic! Seriously awesome!
Stories, eh? Okay, well here's my opinion.
Tainted Guardian (of course, I love this one)
Cursed Saint
Star Angel (are you still doing this one?)
Never Too Late (again, are you still doing this one?)
Darkness Unleashed (cuz it's your joint story, which should come first, I feel like)
Um... I'm not too sure about Star's joint stories. Are you doing all of them as well or just this one? Well, either way, it's difficult for me to pick anyway, they're all so interesting.
Well, I know everything will turn out well. Good luck! And please don't put too much pressure on yourself, an overload of stress can lead to a breakdown (trust me, I speak from plenty of experience), and it's not worth it just to please your fans. Your true fans will wait with the greatest patience ever! ;D
Author's Response: Yeah, I basically did the same thing when I found out (but I don't drink coffee. I think it choked on my tea and had to spit it back up in the cup) about Star-chan. I knew it was bound to happen, though. Her interests bounces around so much its crazy. I just hope it bounces back to Naruto. And, yeah, Yu Gi Oh is pretty cool. Yeah, the main purpose of this story was to get everyone to know about the war almost nobody remembers. It was also to show how the rift was re-broken. As for Star Angel and Never Too Late, yes, I am. I kicked myself in the butt a few times because so many people seem to like Never Too Late (it has the most reviews of the stories that aren't joint stories). As for Star Angel, I've come to a small halt because of just figuring out one thing while I have the whole rest of it planned after this chapter *face palms*. And yeah, I'm still doing Star-chan's stories. I couldn't let all the people who sent in ocs down. I think I'm too nice sometimes...... And, yeah, you can tell me a dozen times not to put pressure on myself, but I'll end up doing it because I'm an idiot whose trying to burying herself in pressure. Yeah...... I don't even know what to say about myself.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/11 - 06:38 pm · For: The Raising
Eh, just because Sasaui said you need her, I'll help you out.
Name: Izumi Tenshi
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Weakness: She wants to help everyone, even enemies at times.
Romance: Katsu Hiratomi (fleamichael's character)
Village: Eh... whichever village isn't under control of the Seken. I'm not picky.
Rank: Chuunin
Personality: She is very kind. She will not hesitate to help anyone when she feels they need it. Even on the battlefield, she has to remind herself which side she is fighting for so she doesn't help an enemy.
Appearance:
Angel or Demon: Angel
History: Her parents died when she was three, so she doesn't remember them much except that they were very loving. She was later adopted by an elderly woman named Mizuki, and from that point on, Izumi felt the need to help others. She feels that if she had the opportunity to receive kindness from Mizuki, everyone else should have the opportunity to be helped.
Chakra Nature: Water
Special Abilities: She's a medic-nin.
Other: none
Hope this helps! Good luck, and tell me if something needs changing!
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 05:38 pm · For: The Raising
oh and I am glad that my story kind of inspired you to write this one =D
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 05:36 pm · For: The Raising
Name: Kimi Nita
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Weakness: insects and she bottles up her emotions
Romance (optional): your character if you like, or whoever needs a romance. =)
Village: Grass Village
Rank: Jounin
Personality: Kind hearted, she would do things for others and never expect anything in return. She is easy to talk to and will listen to anything anyone has too say. However sometimes she is very blunt and will tell you the cold hard truth, no matter how mean it is. Appearance (pictures accepted): Yes this is Vanille from FFXIII, she's exactly how I pictured my character =D
http://fav.me/d2np0jo
Angel or Demon: Angel
History: Kimi was raised in a small family with her mother, younger sister, and father. She is very talented with weapons, since her father made them for a living. Her family however was murdered by a rogue ninja when she was fifteen, her sister is still alive, but is paralyzed from the waist down and lives in the hospital, since Kimi can't take care of her.
Chakra Nature: Wind & Earth
Kekkei Genkai: none
Special Abilities: she is an excellent marksmen.
Other (optional): nothing I can think of.
Author's Response: Sheesh. With all of these amazing characters, I'm having trouble not stopping Angel Society right now to write about them. But I need to wait until Sasaui finishes the latest chapter of Darkness Unleashed. That will be the last of the introductions and then I can get them introduced. Sheesh, I'm starting to feel bad about piling all of this on Sasaui. Oh well.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 01:09 pm · For: The Raising
Yay! I just checked and you have an opening!
Name: Kasai Tsuribi
Gender: Male
Age: 17 (Haha, everyone's OC is 17, so I made mine 17)
Weakness: does not have any experience with genjutsu and can't fight well without his sword though he's okay at taijutsu. Swinging around his sword weakens the flames so he's constantly putting more chakra into his sword.
Romance (optional): Your choice :) I don't care
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chunin
Personality: He is really arrogant and likes to hit on girls (who he never gets) but he has a short temper. He's really eager to fight and loves fighting, drawing his sword at everything.
Appearance (pictures accepted):
Angel or Demon: Demon
History: Kasai was always alone as a child. His parents didn't care and didn't notice when he just walked out when he was 13. He stole his father's sword and trained secretly with his uncle, the only person who ever cared for him. Kasai didn't care about anyone but himself and his uncle died trying to protect him.
Chakra Nature: Fire
Kekkei Genkai: Fire Release
Special Abilities: Can coat his sword in flames. Kasai is a really good swordsman
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): None that I can think of...
Author's Response: Kasai seems awesome. I just hope I can write him well. I love him, and the picture is awesome. The picture just seems to fit someone from this story. And this sword gives me an idea, but I won't tell you yet. Let's just say I like to make two people with swords fight.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 10:49 am · For: The Raising
change in kaz's history...
cut the taking care of mother n sister part...
make it
he was bored of the wood-cutter's job he had been doing for years...
so he left out on an adventure.... where he meets zakuru... they both become good friends bcoz of kaz's friendly nature... plus that both lost their dads..
does he fit in the 2nd catagory now?
romance: akako
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 10:25 am · For: The Raising
he can b the one that knws zakuru
Name: Kazuki Ushiro
Gender: male
Age: 17
Weakness: weak against genjutsu
Romance (optional): wanted but with anybody...
Village: mist
Rank: chunnin
Personality: fun-loving, talkative, happy-go-lucky attitude, slow to anger, but will do anything for loved ones...Anything!!
Appearance (pictures accepted):Black messy hair, fair skin, Bright green eyes....
he wears a black sleeveless tank top(torn sleeves)
a lbright yellow stone for a locket.... which belonged to his dad....
cargo pants... n ninja shoes
Angel or Demon: angel
History: from one of the lowest clans of the mist.... he lost his father at the age of 2
so it is upto him now to take care of his mom n little sister miana..... he does a woodcutter's job to keep his family alive......
his grandfather was of the famous shinobis of the mist who were experts in fire techniques....his grandfather was a student of mei terumi's late father....
Kazuki learned all fire techniques from his grandfather......
Chakra Nature: wind & fire
Kekkei Genkai: He can turn himself into wind.... uses loads of his chakra so he rarely uses it.....
Special Abilities: very quick n agile... due to wind chakra... but uses fire release
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): a pet tiger, loyal to kaz... but hazardous to anybody else... (any name)
Author's Response: Kazuki is amazing. He can be in any story and be perfect. I think he'll be just perfect to know Zakaru. And just because I'm lazy, I'll go ahead and tell you in this response that I'll make sure to change his history.
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 08:59 am · For: The Raising
I'd love to join in!
Name: Naturami Yugoshawa
Gender: Female (I love Kunoichi!)
Age: 16
Weakness: She can't lie which can get her and her teammates into a lot of trouble depending on the situation.
Romance (optional): She can be with your o.c. if you'd like! If not, you can ask me or pick one yourself.
Village: Getsugakure (Village Hidden under the Moon, if that's alright?)
Rank: Chunin
Personality: Naturami is consistently nice until battle. That is where she takes things seriously and has, I guess you could say, an alter ego completely opposite from her natural self. That alter ego takes over and is rude to her comrades and takes down her opponents.
Appearance (pictures accepted): This isn't mine, I found it off the internet.
http://www.theotaku.com/fanart/view/293460/kunoichi_%253Akungfu_pose%253A
Angel or Demon: Angel
History: She was born and raised in Getsugakure being pushed to become a Kunoichi. When Naturami heard the Seken's began to take over, she trained until she felt it was the right time to head out and help out the other villages.
Chakra Nature: Wind
Kekkei Genkai: Long Distance Hearing
Special Abilities: Great user of Senbon and Taijutsu
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): None for the time being.
Author's Response: Sure. She can be with Zakaru. I think she's an awesome character. I love her. I'm glad you decided to participate in this. I'll try my best to do her well.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 08:56 am · For: The Raising
Haha, I figured I would be seeing this posted after I read Sasaui's blog yesterday. Another joint story, whoo! Another to add to the collection in the challenge. Well, if this is anything like your other story that you posted for the challenge, this will be awesome!
Name: Akako Mayonaka
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Weakness: She'll be the character who is between light and dark. Because of this, she is hesitant and indecisive about what she is supposed to do, fight the enemy or betray her comrades.
Romance (optional): Um.... whoever is willing to put up with her, I suppose.
Village: Mist (hmm, tell me if I should change this)
Rank: Chuunin
Personality: Since has an internal conflict within herself, so she doesn't know what side to be on. She is very quiet, but not shy. If she is angered, she will not hesitate to yell in the offender's face and possibly start a fight. She is serious and calm any other time.
Appearance (pictures accepted):
http://themoonspack.webs.com/apps/photos/photo?photoid=113909877
Angel or Demon: Demon
History: Her parents and baby sister were killed in a Seken invasion. But she discovered that her older brother, her role model (his name is Ryuu), left after this invasion to join Seken. She joined the rebellion soon after, to avenge her dead family.
But since she loves her brother so much, she is wondering if she should follow him. He is not evil, but he feels that Seken will truly win the war, so he believes it is better to be safe than to die in vain. He is upset at his family's death, but he tried persuading Akako to join him before she is caught up in the war and killed.
After fighting for so long, she is debating whether she should join her brother.
Chakra Nature: Wind
Kekkei Genkai: She has the ability to control wind, with no hand sign.
Special Abilities: She uses two paper fans to help her control the wind and extend its range, even though she can use wind attacks without the fans.
Other (optional): None that I can think of.
Tell me if there is something that needs changing! Good luck!
Author's Response: Haha. The reason for why she's conflicted is like the one Sasaui thought of doing. Well, great minds must think alike. I love your character. I think she's great.
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 08:41 am · For: The Raising
Hard choice...
He can be from the Mist.
Author's Response: Okay. Thanks a lot.
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 08:29 am · For: The Raising
I guess I'll join.
Name: Katsu Hiratomi
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Weakness: Is often sick, and so he isn't as physically strong as others, but he makes up for it in mental abilities. (feel free to change any of this)
Romance (optional): There aren't any nice young lady oc's yet, so... I guess its up to you. (just as long as he's not paired with another guy)
Village: Kumo
Rank: Chunin
Personality: Quiet and polite.
Appearance (pictures accepted): http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/152/0/8/Raijin___Naruto_OC_by_hyarion.jpg (picture not mine)
Angel or Demon: Angel
History: He has lived in Kumo his whole life. When he was 12 his father died, leaving him and his mother to fend for themselves. He had to take a job as a ninja, but soon found himself enjoying the job when he wasn't sick. He joined the "Other Gang" after becoming somewhat famous for his mental abilities.
Chakra Nature: Water (and lightning)
Kekkei Genkai: Storm Release
Special Abilities: Because of all the time he's sick, he is constantly thinking of new jutsu and tactics, even though many of them he cannot perform himself.
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): Nothing I can think of... Feel free to change anything. Good luck with this story.
Author's Response: I really hate it when Sasaui's right. She said I'd forget to add something, and I did. I forgot to put that the other gang is from the Mist as well. Do you want him to be in the Mist or not be in the other gang?