Reviews For The Naruto Games
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 02:48 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
Name: Toshiro Sasaki
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Stone
Background: His life was mostly easy after his abusive father was killed in an accidental fire. He runs a small shop with his mother and is actually pretty nice for someone whose been abused all his life. A lot of people like him.
Personality: He trusts people with slight difficulty and is always trying to make people like him. His father would call him so many mean things and repeatedly said nobody loved him, so he goes out of his way to prove to himself that isn't true.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not mine)
http://www.freewebs.com/sky-ninja/boy.jpg
Fighting Style/Kekkei Genkai: He's slow to actually start fighting, but when he does, he is great at it. He can easily combine his chakra nature (dust release) with his taijutsu.
Special Abilities: He has the uncanny talent of telling when people are lying.
Weakness: His stamina isn't exactly high. He wears out easily but continues to push himself past his limit (and usually caused himself to faint afterward.....)
Other: None
Author's Response: Awesome! The last character! He looks awesome btw. :) Thanks for joining!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 02:12 pm · For: Konoha Tributes
*cries... a lot* Um... yeah, sorry... You're just... you're just a great writer. I started crying the moment Shoji's name was pulled. And then when Akahana's name came next.. Ah, it was so sad. Daisuke was just how I thought of him, and he's just a supporting character I added as an afterthought when writing Akahana's bio!
You did wonderful with Akahana and her family. It was great. Awesome job. Everything was so sad and amazing at the same time. It was brilliant, great job with the back story. And even better job with the description of the reaping and the name-pulling and the... yeah, just everything.
Awesome, awesome job. I can't think of a word that suits it, and this is only chapter 1. I can only imagine what else you have in store. Keep up the incredible work with this!
Author's Response: :D You're review made me so happy! Thanks! *can't stop grinning* :D I'm glad I made your characters how you wanted them. Thanks! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 01:57 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
Hmm.... I cannot help but REALLY want to add another character! It's so addicting, making new characters. :D
Name (First, Last): Hanabira Shirotori
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Village: Sand
Background: As a child, she was neglected. She had an older brother and older sister, both of which are extremely talented in their clan's kekkei genkai. Everyone in the clan and the village recognize her siblings, but not her. So she struggles a lot to gain attention. While she is good in ninjutsu, she's not good enough.
Personality: She is very hardworking. She is persistent and never takes no for an answer. She is stubborn and iron-willed. She is like this so that she can earn attention. But she is very serious as well.
Appearance (Pictures accepted):
http://s220.photobucket.com/albums/dd41/pattywolfkiel/?action=view¤t=The_Gaioh_Ninja.jpg&newest=1
Fighting style/Kekkei Genkai: Her kekkei genkai is poison release. She can create poison out of any plant with a simple hand sign. She can also use different poison-type jutsus. I'll let you make them up :D
Special Abilities: She can use her fan for extending the range of her poison, such as poison senbon needles in the fan, poison gas, anything else you can come up with.
Weakness: She's terrified of the water, so she can't swim. Also, since she's headstrong, it can get in the way of her judgement when in the heat of the moment.
Other Info (Ancestors, animal partner,
etc.): She has a black hawk named Sora.
If I need to change anything, please tell me! Good luck with this story!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah it's fun. :) Thanks for the character! I've uploaded a chapter just now. She will be fun. I have some plans for the games and she'll make the games interesting. ;)
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 09:42 am · For: Story Update/author's note
Name (First, Last): Reymundo takahashi
Age: 16
Gender: male
Village: cloud
Background: he hails from a clan which was one of the founding clans of kumogakure.....hence his dad was always busy in the village duties....as one of the elders....his dad hence paid the least attention to him.... all he wanted was respect..... so wen rey was selected as kumo's rep... he started paying attention to rey for the very first time... which confused rey... his mom was sick since he was young.... she hence couldn't give him a mother's love...hence he never got parent's love...
he grew up with a very cold personality.... calm loner, never interfering isn't nother's business... anyways his creepy personality always kept people a mile away from him...
Personality: Quiet, secluded, lone wolf kinda personality, he has awesome skills... but he was rather selected as a representative to b avoided i.e. away from the village rather than for his skills....He never trusted anybody other than his mother, n after her death... he forgot wat trust is....
Appearance (Pictures accepted): grey emo style hair...dark blue eyes, black long sleeves shirt with a grey sleeveless jacket, grey trousers n ninja shoes....
Fighting style/Kekkei Genkai: no kekkei genkai
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special ability: lightening release.... almost like a master in lightening technical jutsu, more often uses taijutsu coupled with some sort of lightening with it...
Weakness: never will he trust anybody, even if his life depends on it... never had a friend.....
Other Info (Ancestors, animal partner, etc.): nothing else i can think of...
tell me if u want to change anything
Author's Response: Awesome character. He'll be fun to write. Thanks for another character!
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 08:05 am · For: Story Update/author's note
Name: Kazumi Shiina
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Village: Cloud
Background: She's from the well known Shiina clan. Her father and mother want nothing but for her to become the best ninja in the Cloud Village, so she feels like she's being forced to win the games. She's always trained with her younger brother and older sister (you can choose their names). She's the best out of the three of them and a lot of people respect her.
Personality: She's cold to you unless you're her friend or she respects you. Then she's nicer (but not exactly super kind) and will do whatever needed to protect you. She is not, however, the type that is willing to give her life.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not mine)
http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs47/i/2010/336/6/0/new_naruto_oc__s_by_flowerpuff-d25shh6.jpg
She's the older version of the girl.
Fighting Style/ Kekkei Genkai: Her kekkei genkai is the ability she can copy and and all jutsu. She can even change her chakra so she it is like the person she's copying. Her eyes also mirror the person she's copying.
Weakness: She's afraid of death
Other: None
Author's Response: Awesome, another character! Thanks for joining! Now I have both cloud nins!
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 06:56 am · For: Story Update/author's note
Just to clarify really quick, so we can enter two ocs?
Name: Mokuren Nara
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Village: Mist
Background: She's kind of a rule breaker. Her brother was as well, and when he died from illness, she took his place. She's always pulling pranks that go against the Games, and people try and stop her, but they can't. It's because of her special abiltiy I'll mention later. Her mother and father have no other children and love her to death. Ever since they got a warning, she's made her pranks more harmless so she doesn't endanger her family.
Personality: She's quite innocent. Most of the time she keeps to herself or stays in a ruined part of the town to play around. She can be really happy and polite, but if you anger her, she'll find a way to get back at you without breaking the rules.
Appearance: (not my picture)
http://th00.deviantart.net/fs32/PRE/f/2008/223/a/9/a93972e465ed1fa8ffeccc9bc7eea37b.jpg
Fight style/Kekkei Genkai: She's uses the Nara clan's shadow technique. A lot of the time she uses taijutsu if she doesn't use her kekkei genkai.
Special Abilities: If she needs to hide, she can make her entire body blend with the shadows and make it so nobody can sense her chakra.
Weakness: She always has nightmares of previous games, so she rarely sleeps at night.
Other info: She can summon turtles
Author's Response: Yeah, you can enter two. Awesome how you put in how the games affect her. She'll be really interesting. Thanks for joining!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 06:37 am · For: Story Update/author's note
woops >.<
grandfather sorry...
mom's father :P
tying flaw
Author's Response: Haha, okay thanks.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 11:37 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
oh, i'd love to join,
Name (First, Last): Kazuki Ushiro
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Village: Kiri
Background: from one of the lowest clans of the mist.... he lost his father at the age of 2
so it is upto him now to take care of his mom n little sister.....
he does a woodcutter's job to keep his family alive......
his grandfather(mom's mother)was of the famous shinobis of the mist who were experts in fire techniques....he is Mei Terumi's nephew.....
Personality: fun-loving, talkative, happy-go-lucky attitude, slow to anger, but will do anything for loved ones...Anything!!
Appearance (Pictures accepted): Black messy hair, fair skin, Bright green eyes....
he wears a black sleeveless tank top(torn sleeves)
a lbright yellow stone for a locket.... which belonged to his dad....
Fighting style: fire & wind natured chakra,
Kekkei Genkai: can turn himself into wind..... but takes lots of his chakra.... so he uses it only in crucial situations....
Special Abilities: Very Very agile n quick on feet......due to wind chakra..
Weakness: weak against genjutsu.....
Other Info (Ancestors, animal partner, etc.): he has a pet tiger(any name u like...)which is a small cat usually... but turns into a ferocious tiger if angered or while fighting....
Author's Response: Question: grandfather or grandmother?rnrnPet tiger, huh? Cool! Thanks for joining. This story is going to be fun to write!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 10:38 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
Wow. I absolutely love the Hunger Games. I'm actually rereading Catching Fire right now. I wonder how this will be with a twist like this.
Name: Kaze Ushirama
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Village: Sand
Background: His family has always been poor. Because of this he has had to figure out how to survive. He was usually bullied and very few people liked him. This is because many people thought his family was a disgrace after his father went on a killing spree. Yeah, he was kinda crazy. He takes care of his three younger siblings, Toshiro, Shinosuke, and Sakurako. His older sister (Miki) and mom are always working. He's worked on his fighting skills because he has to protect his siblings from the bullies who attack them as well. Yeah, the kids in his neighborhood are jerks.
Personality: He's too trusting and hates to fight unless absolutely necessary. He wants to give people about a dozen chances before he excepts they don't deserve more. He wants to see the light in people before he sees the darkness. When the people he cares about are threatened, he can become extremely protective. He isn't necessarily strong, but he won't stay down. In order for that to happen he'd have to be killed. The only time he definitely doesn't like someone is when they're heartless. He can't stand them.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not my pic)
http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2011/154/0/b/commission__ozaki_uzumaki_by_shotlipglossnique-d3hxlfl.jpg
Fighting Style/ Kekkei Genkai: His chakra nature is wind. His kekkei genkai is a state of being where he simply controls wind. No hand signs or anything. I was wondering if during the games he could discover his kekkei genkai.
Special Abilities: can he be the sensor? Oh, and his surviving skills are good.
Weakness: He's too trusting and unwilling to kill unless he needs to. And he cares more about protecting others than the consequences to himself (that's a flaw in my eyes even though it's a good thing).
That's all I can think of. I'll tell you if I think of anything new.
Author's Response: Of course he can discover it later on. It'll help with his sensory skills. That's great! Thanks for joining!rnrnOh, and I love the hunger games too! It's the only series I own all the books to!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 09:12 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
Wow! Another joint story! *cough add it to the challenge cough* Ahem, sorry, it's a weird pet peeve of mine. Sorry to annoy you about that.
Huh, your chapter end notes are so painfully blunt. Glad to know my character will most likely die *insert sarcasm here*
Haha, but I'm going to join anyway.
Name (First, Last): Akahana Mitsuko
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Village: Leaf
Background: The Mitsuko clan is a small clan in Konoha that whose kekkei genkai is almost extinct due to the small numbers of members in the clan. The clan was reduced due to the wars and such.
Akahana was gifted with her clan's kekkei genkai, and she is expected to help revive the clan's kekkei genkai by mastering it and passing it on to others of the clan. Her father, Masaru, is the younger brother of the head of the clan, Haru, so he is constantly pressuring his daughter to excel in her abilities as a ninja just so he can show off to Haru.
Akahana is over-pressured a lot, and the only one who understands her is her older brother (does not have the kekkei genkai) named Daisuke, and he always cheers her up when she needs it. Being away from him will be a challenge for her.
Personality: She is hard-working and is always willing to please. She hides her pain to make others happy, because she thinks her worries and harships are not as important as those that belong to others. So she tries to act happy, but only her brother (and anyone else in this story who you think would work) is able to bring down her facade.
Appearance (Pictures accepted): Not my picture:
http://media-fanart.theotaku.com/125811-20090704003607.jpg
Fighting style/Kekkei Genkai: Her kekkei genkai is Plant-release. She is able to control the growth of plants, whether it be to grow them, kill them, as well as control them to make them seem alive. Any other jutsus you can think of will work as well.
Special Abilities: She's good with archery.
Weakness: Since her father pressures her so much, she places a lot of pressure on herself as well, causing occcasional (more often than normal) breakdowns. She also sucks with genjutsu, and her taijutsu is average.
Other Info (Ancestors, animal partner, etc.): None that I can think of.
Tell me if you need me to change anything. Good luck!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, added :)Some will die... :\ but I don't want them to, so... I don't know... when the time comes, I'll decide...