Reviews For The Naruto Games
Name: hulk (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/11 - 11:46 am · For: Story Update/author's note
name: daichi asato
gender: male
10 yrs ago
age: 15
personality: handsome, grave looking guy, has an aura of leadership around him, i mean wen u look at him... u feel he commqnds respect.. one feels tht he totally deserves it.. he has no pride... but he has the most pity on 15 yr olds.. since even he ws 15 wen he'd won.. but he'd won quite easily.. did need effort.. but he is a very talented shinobi...
Author's Response: Well, actually, forget the part about which village Tamako's from, I'll just fit that in myself with whatever I want... unless you have a request. Anyway, thanks for the mentor. I don't think I need any more mentors now! ;D
Name: hulk (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/11 - 11:22 am · For: Stylists
wahooo!!
that ws kool! n something different n interesting... :D
so now thanks to ur genious aunty... u'l b updating frequently? *puppy eyes*
i totally cant wait forr thee actiion >.<
bluue juice? mint juice?
Author's Response: :) I'll try to update more frequently. I'm excited for the action too. I'm already planning fights, though I'm getting way ahead of myself. I should be focusing on the interviews myself.
About the juice... I have no idea, haha. It's just something I came up with on a whim. The hidden rain is the richer village so they have funky stuff there.
Name: hulk (Anonymous) · Date: 01/08/11 - 11:18 am · For: Stylists
name: tamako ishigawa
gender: female
6 yrs ago
age: 22
personality: stern, strict, disciplined, mannered, but very helpful n caring....
nd oh... kazuki ushiro prefers not to wear bows or ties.... ^_^
Author's Response: Is this Shadow-san? If so, no problem about Kazuki. That's helpful information, although it's all up to the stylists to decide on his outfit. And can I get the village Tamako's from? Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/07/11 - 08:55 am · For: Stylists
Wow! Awesome job! I like how you started off with different characters, but we get to see the basic idea of what the tributes are going through. This was really good; I think the characters were great. Well done; keep up tue amazing work!
Author's Response: I finally finished introducing the characters! I'm glad you like the characters, although they're not mine. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/07/11 - 06:38 am · For: Stylists
They're not too much alike. They're both wonderful. Either way, they have close to the personality in their description, but that's not a bad thing. So if you feel like their personalities are close to being the same, that why. I bet you've already noticed that, but still. I feel the urge to point it out, too. I think how you have the chapter start where the other chapter ended with the other ocs is awesome. I can't wait to read more. I'm really curious to see what's going to happen. I absolutely love your story! It's becoming so amazing, it seems like it will surpass The Hunger Games in greatness.
Author's Response: Haha, it's far from surpassing The Hunger Games, but thanks anyway. Yeah, I noticed, but I tried to make them not too similar. If you and Silverwolf think it's okay, then I'm perfectly fine with it. Thank you for the review.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 03:51 pm · For: The Hidden Rain
I liked how you began around the place the other village came to an end. That was very nice. I loved every second of it. The characters are so well written it's as if they're your own. And since I doubt Sky-chan will read this because of her sudden lack of interest toward Naruto (I know, should be impossible), I'll tell you that you did a fabulous job with Mokuren. I can't wait to see what you do with Toshiro (didn't realize I used him as an oc and as a character's sibling until now). I can't wait to see how you'll do with him. Heck, I already know he'll be amazing since you're the one writing him. You rock!
Author's Response: Haha, I try not to go overboard with the characters, writing them to my own liking. Hm... I hope Sky-chan comes back around. Toshiro will be an interesting character to write about. Haha, I just now realized that too. Wow, I'm slow, haha. Thanks a lot for the review! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 11:58 am · For: The Hidden Rain
Wow! Once again, I like how you're not just sticking to the reapings. It's a great change of scenes and settings. It amazingly introduces the characters while also keeping the story moving so that it's not too boring or stuck in one place. I really like it, good job.
And I think the characters were perfect, once again! Nice job with introducing their personalities and such!
It's going good, I really like it! Yeah, I can see how it would be difficult to have a Naruto version of the Hunger Games, but just know that I think you're doing a fabulous job with it. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: *air punch* Yes! Phew, I'm glad you think so... on everything. :D Thank you!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 11:12 am · For: The Hidden Rain
oh i missed this...
stylist n mentor....
so will the tributes b receiving royal treatment or something like that?? ;P
n aww :( i 4got most (i not all) will b dying...
all characters r awesome... feel sad for em.... :/
Author's Response: Haha, basically, until they get into the games. Stylists help them get sponsors who buy them stuff to help them out throughout the games. The mentor is a previous victor who just coaches them.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 13/07/11 - 11:08 am · For: The Hidden Rain
wow wow wow!!!
That was soooo totally awesome!!!
Kazuki was just hw i xplained him 2 b...
friendly, jolly, carefree, he is gonna face the experience of a lifetime... still his attitude is s if he dosn't care... nor worried..... happy-go-lucky x)
even mokuren was nice n cute... the smallest girl?? poor thing :(
anyways AWESOME chapter!! :D
Author's Response: Yay!! Thank you very much! I'm glad I got Kazuki right. That's a relief. -_-' :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 07:10 am · For: Goodbyes
Great chapter. You did an awesome job with the characters. I loved this chapter. I liked how you started this one. We didn't really see what the parents said afterward before. I can't wait to read more of this. You make me like the characters so much with these chapters I don't want any of them to die. I'm going to hate when any of them does. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
Author's Response: Ah, I know! I'm starting to like these characters too!! I don't want them to die... Hehe, thanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 06:49 am · For: Goodbyes
Wow! Well, first off, I think you got the personalities completely right. They're not my characters, so I can't speak for them, but I do think the characters were perfect. Good job.
I like that you showed a different scene other than the heartwrenching reapings like the other chapters. It's a good transition to also seeing what happens after the tributes are taken away from their families. I liked it, good job!
This was a very good chapter, not as heartbreaking as the preceding chapters, but still sad enough where the readers can be empathetic toward the characters. How no one came to say goodbye to either of the tributes, how Kazumi was shocked none of her fans cared, and how Reymundo whispered those three awful words that no parent wants to hear; it all added to the sad feeling that comes with the games. Keep up the good work with this, it was really impressive!
Author's Response: Phew! That's a relief! Yeah, I didn't want to take a lot of time with reapings for each country, so I decided to alternate between points of view as the games got started. rnThanks for the review as always!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 04:52 am · For: Goodbyes
wahaaa!! cool!!
u put my character in finally...
nice! u made him just as i wanted him...
thanx again! :D
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. 8D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 28/06/11 - 08:50 am · For: Story Update/author's note
no not kaze...kaz as in my character kazuki :P
no dnt worry... though it was rushed... still it was awesome!!
Author's Response: Oh, ok. :) I just finished writing chapter four. I'll introduce him soon.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 10:18 pm · For: Suna Tributes
nice!!
yeah could see that it was rushed...
but still it was awesome!!
can't wait for wen kaz is introduced... ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks!! :)rnYeah, I felt like writing, but was short on time so I had to rush it... haha ^_^'rnYou mean Kaze? Yeah, he was introduced.... well.... at least I think.... haha, sorry, I'm exhausted and braindead XP
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 07:52 pm · For: Suna Tributes
T_T I feel bad for Shinosuke. When I read this, I think of how tortured he must be to know his brother just took his place. I love every second of it. I thought that both Kaze and Hanabira were amazing. I can't wait until you write more. This story is absolutely amazing.
Author's Response: Yeah, I hate remembering that this is the games and theyll be fighting to the death because I know their background and feel so bad for them... Thank for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 07:48 pm · For: Suna Tributes
Seriously?! I keep crying during this... These are getting so sad. It's only the reaping, for goodness sake! I'll be a trainwreck when the fights come!
Great job with Hanabira, by the way. That was a good feature you added, the fact that she was happy to be the tribute. I didn't think of that, but it really works with her personality. Good job.
And of course, Kaze and Shinosuke were the ones who had me crying. It was just so heartbreaking! I can't help but cry!
Excellent work! These tributes really have me all emotional and whatnot, but that just means that they are amazing chapters. This was another incredible chapter, really. Great job. Keep up the phenomenal work, please!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked how I did your character! Thanks for reviewing!!! :D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 06:49 am · For: Story Update/author's note
sasui-chan which story?
Author's Response: Darkness Unleashed
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 05:01 am · For: Story Update/author's note
Oh, in case I confused you like Shadow-san, I mean romance wise. You said whoever, but I want to be able to do someone you at least like.
Author's Response: Yeah okay I understand :)
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 10:05 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
@sasui
if by 'who' u mean who'l fight him.... Its umiko hoshikage.....
Otherwise i dunno :P
Author's Response: Cool, I hope itll be a good fight :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 07:08 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
Just to know, who is going to be with Kirako on Darkness Unleashed.
Author's Response: Ah, you can make it Tenten, but Kirako's fifteen so you can change his age since Tenten is around 17.
Name: ChibiItachi (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 08:58 am · For: Konoha Tributes
wow...
This is really well written! I love the story line and how you've made Pain's version of peace come alive
welll done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue reading this story! About Pain... well, I wanted to do a crossover of a sort like this and decided Pain's plan would fit in best with this. Thanks a lot!!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 01:13 am · For: Konoha Tributes
Wow!!
now that is some begining...
ok so this is mostly bout all the sorrow they'l hav to face....
so it isn't like a Happy story.. but more of a torturous one... but u are quite awesome in describing this stuff :D
keep up the good work .... :))
Author's Response: I guess you could put it like that... torturous... Well, I guess it's like that :) Thanks for the review! Thanks :D
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 05:10 pm · For: Konoha Tributes
Very intense at the end. The poor girl and her father was pretty heartless. This looks great so far, I can't wait to see where you take it from here.
And it's cool to read about Shoji since he's in my story too, that made me chuckle when I saw his name. =)
Author's Response: Yeah thanks! I used Shoji and Aika because those are my favorite OCs I made. :) After I picked them, I realized they were both from your stories, haha.
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 05:02 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
I would have joined, but you have all the characters you need. I'll still read it though.
Author's Response: You can create a character, though it'll be a minor one, maybe one who lives in the hidden rain or something, but you can still create one.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/06/11 - 03:07 pm · For: Konoha Tributes
This was awesomely amazing! I wanted to cry even though I already knew what was going to happen. I hate the fact that some of these people might die (I say might because I don't know what you're going to do with this story. For all I know, it could be like the Games in Catching Fire). You're a great writer. I can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: :) Thanks!! Honestly, I have no idea what I'm going to do either. I was considering something like the games in Catching Fire, but I don't know yet, aha. Thanks again!