Reviews For The Naruto Games
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/12 - 03:19 pm · For: Extra: Flashback
You updated...!!! :DDD MG!!! :DD
i thought u nvr would D:
wem u wernt updating every wednesday for like the third week... i like got worried... for a moment i thought did u delete the story altogether... i ws like NOOOOO!!!!!
than i searched ur profile n ur story and then sighed in relief... :P
now for the review...:)
woah... anothr story similiar to tht every tribute has to face... :L
hmm... cnt wait to see hw this is related to the story...
n absolutely cnt wait for trap number 7...!!!
Update soon... :D
n oh... ~~Happy New year~~ :DDDD
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I updated. And Happy New Year to you too!! I'll be updating later... I think I finished the next chapter, but I have to go back through it. I forgot to replace that chapter you mentioned earlier, but it's all fixed now. ;)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/12 - 12:17 pm · For: Scores and... The Games
umm just so u knw...
u edited Reymundo's score n made it 5
bt in this chapter it still is 3...
so i think u forgot bout tht change ^_^
Author's Response: :o whoops, I must go fix this...rnThanks for letting me know (:
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/02/12 - 03:20 am · For: Extra: Flashback
Aww, I don't know who these people are, but it's really upsetting... Of course I feel bad for Morita because he's going into the games now. And Shikori has to watch his brother leave him... This is so sad...
It's good to see you around, Konan-san! I've missed your writing. I can't wait to read more, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I've been busy, but after I finish my english rough draft I'll finish up that chapter. :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 02:59 pm · For: Nervous Start on the First Night
*face palm* Okay, yeah, you got Kaze's personality, but still, I can't believe my character just got everyone else in trouble. I'm not mad. Honestly, he was probably the one most likely to do something like that. His personality goes against the games, don't they? I just now noticed that. Anyway, this was amazing. I'm glad that there's no violence yet because that also means no deaths, a big fear of mine now that you've made them all so amazing. As for Ray and Aika, I wonder how that's going to work out. He seems curious about her genjutsu stuff and she seems ticked that he's been able to break it. Man, I really can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Haha, it wasn't just Kaze. It was basically everyone's refusal to fight. Yeah, I noticed his contradicting personality right off, but he's a great character all the while. I can't wait for the next chapter either, haha, since I have no idea what's going to happen either. I don't want to kill anyone yet... We'll see what Pein does soon...
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 02:29 pm · For: Scores and... The Games
That was awesome. All the reactions to the characters were so spot on. I liked how the higher score didn't make Toshiro cocky, and I laughed when Kaze bopped heads with Hanabira. I feel really bad for Mokuren and really hope that Kazuki cheers her up later on. And the wishes thing was really sweet.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you thought the reactions were accurate. Thanks for the review!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 08:37 am · For: Story Update/author's note
cn u add something for me plz....?
cn u add to rey's ability? that he cn summon squids... or krakens...
wateva u see fit... ^_^
thnx :D
Author's Response: Yep, no problem! Thanks for the summoning! It helps! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 03:42 am · For: Nervous Start on the First Night
Ah, the double update was wonderful :)
Oh, that's actually quite alright for the lack of violence. I liked that because it builds suspense. Especially with what Kaze did to Akahana, it leaves things up in the air, meaning nothing is set in stone. Anything could happen at anytime, so it's a lot more suspenseful than everyone killing each other right off the bat.
Gah, cliffhanger! How I loathe them... Eh, I wonder who gets caught in the trap... D: This is going to be epic, I can tell. I can't wait to read more! Great job, Konan! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't think anyone would want to kill each other right off the bat... they're all such great characters. That thing with Kaze and Akahana... I thought that suited Kaze and I found it funny in an ironic way. Sorry about the cliffhanger. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/09/11 - 03:32 am · For: Scores and... The Games
Ohmygoodness, the games are starting! I'm both excited and anxious about that.
Haha, I loved seeing all the kids react to their scores. Poor Hanabira, trying to make herself happy about the 6 ;) And wow, Hanabira praying to her brother almost made me cry... excellent work on that part of her personality.
Oh gosh, now I'm really nervous to read the next chapter... But I must! Fantastic work on this, Konan! Now I'm off to read more!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
Name: shadow (Anonymous) · Date: 27/09/11 - 10:26 pm · For: Scores and... The Games
awesome...!!
The games hv finally startd....
Nice way 2 shw their reactions....
Lol at rey sulkin.... xD
n oh... Kaz's speed cumin in handy....
Author's Response: Haha, yep! He sure got a good lead. Thanks for the review!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 12:50 pm · For: Final Grading Tests and Results
lol.....
awesome...!!!
i like hw u kept kaz's friendly nature.... :P
n dnt worry bout da ratings... ^_^
i know... u hv 2 b impartial inn this n al tht... :P
bt nice chapter...
n nw... its time 4 da games to begin, i guess...
Author's Response: Just barely... haha the games will officially begin in the next chapter yes, but no action yet... sorry. Haha
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 04:18 am · For: Final Grading Tests and Results
To tell the truth, when I first saw Mokuren's score, I was surprised. But then I saw Rikku's reasoning, and she's right. That could be a reason they're doing it. And thanks, I guess, for Toshiro's high score, though I'm sure the others deserved it more, but you're the writer, so...... I also enjoyed seeing all the things they did for the training sessions. I can't wait to read more of your awesome story and see what happens next, Konan!
Author's Response: The fact that Mokuren's going to be devastated made me hesitate about the score, but I tried to look at it from a gamemaker's POV. Which brings me to Toshiro... They grade the techniques, yes, but they also grade how well you use your technique, your smarts, interview, and the regular training too, so, I think Toshiro did pretty well.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 04:16 am · For: Day 2 of Training
First off, sorry once again for skipping a review. I read it, but then I'll forget to review it =P. It was a great chapter, though. Everyone was wonderful. I like how you have those little alliances starting up, unless you're going to change something with Kazuki and Mokuren. All the characters were great, and I can't wait to see just how they score. You're story is amazing, Konan. It keeps on making me want to try out a Naruto/Hunger Games crossover, but it'd never compare to the awesome way you've done it.
Author's Response: Haha, nope. I don't plan on anything with Kazuki and Mokuren... I guess I see Kazuki as someone who feels the need to protect her since she's the youngest and he's 17-ish. Haha, I don't even remember. I can remember their last names and a bit of techniques, but not their ages. Anyways, no problem about forgetting, but thanks for reviewing anyway. I've been so busy, I've read but never replied to reviews.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 03:29 am · For: Final Grading Tests and Results
I can imagine that scoring would be hard, especially when the characters aren't yours :P Don't worry though, I think you did a good job in ranking everyone. The tributes are pretty balanced on the list, I think. And I think it's just as Rikku said: the scores could be done because they are strong or because they want the others to underestimate them. So it could all definitely a fixed list made up by the gamemakers ;)
Anyway, good job on showing every tribute's attacks and fighting style. I could tell that you had difficulty with some, since you didn't write too much for a few people, but I think you did a good job just even referencing their attacks.
Overall, excellent job! The games are nearing, and I'm both excited and scared, for obvious reasons XD Keep up the awesome work, Konan! This story just gets better and better!
Oh, and don't worry about updates. If you're taking a bunch of difficult classes, it's hard to manage everything. No need to stress yourself out, we can wait for new chapters :D
Author's Response: Thanks! But i was sort of rushed because I had a buttload of homework piled up, but thanks anyway.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 09:31 pm · For: Day 2 of Training
Yay...!!
Tht ws cool....
Haha.... Its rey...
Lol.... Hmm...
He is in character.... Brilliant...
I'd been waiting 4 da update.... The whole week..... :P
n wow..... Grading of skills.... :O
nw thts gonna b fun...!!
Cnt wait 2 see hw u grade everyone.... :D
N wow... Hw u r keeping a check of al the characters n their personalities.... :)
keep up the awesome work....!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you look forward to this story. It motivates me to write. Thanks for the review!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/09/11 - 03:12 pm · For: Day 2 of Training
Wow! I loved the competitiveness of the situations going on here!
We're seeing more into everyone's minds, and all the competition is already getting to everyone. I really like how everyone seems to be scoping one another out while also worrying about themselves. It's so stressful.
And the thing about the allies... well, it still makes me worried about what will happen with everyone. The whole friend or foe thing is getting more suspenseful :P
You're doing great with the characters! And now things are really heating up, I'm so excited! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! It is hard to trust people when you're going to be fighting to the death. :/ I'm excited for the games, yet I don't want to kill off anyone, haha.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/11 - 06:23 pm · For: Training Center
Wow. Just plain wow. You did great with all these characters. I keep on hating it, though. I'm terrified it will be like the first Games and everyone dies. I don't want any of them to die. They're all just so amazing. You writing them so well and so realistically isn't happening. And that's a compliment, because it means I've truly bonded with them, showing just how well you've written them. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I know!!! I hate it too!! Haha, but I'm the one writing it so... I guess I shouldn't hate it. Oh well... Thanks!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 09:09 pm · For: Training Center
wahaha.... :D
n i enjoyd reading it....
Wow this chappie ws awesme givin mre insight to their personalities n abilities....
So aika is a genjutsu expert.....
N toshiro n kaze are wind naturd too...? It' b fun....:)
n lol..... Kaz's caring nature towards mokuren....
Bt lol he is fire natured too...
He cn actually mke fire right....:P
kool chapter.....!!
Author's Response: Yep! I was considering doing a Bingo Book for all these characters. But I think it's okay without it since I've already basically told everyone the pasts and I'm introducing abilities. About Kazuki, yeah, haha. He just did that to get Mokuren on his side Xp
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 05:37 pm · For: Interviews
Sorry for not reviewing before hand. I'm sorry about the horrible birthday. I'm looking forward to these updates every Monday/Tuesday, by the way. Now to the chapter. It was amazing. I loved learning how everyone saw things and I liked the trick question thing. I absolutely love your Naruto version of The Hunger Games. It's just down right amazing!
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! Erm... the next update (today) will be uploaded late. :/
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/11 - 07:25 pm · For: Training Center
Ah, another great chapter! I really liked how some of the people seem to be bonding, even if they don't want to. It adds depth to the story, knowing that they have created bonds but then must eventually fight to the death. The characters are amazingly in character, as always ;) You're doing fantastically with this story. Great job! Keep up the wonderful work!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's hard not to create bonds if you start to like someone, and it's even harder when you know only one person can live. But... we'll see.
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 07:18 am · For: Interviews
Nd uh.... Its locket... :P
necklace is basically worn by girls......i think..... xD
Author's Response: Ehh same-o same-o... But okay then
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/11 - 07:15 am · For: Interviews
Boring...? R ya kidding me..? Lol.. I rather found it ineresting... :D
u fit in the locket thing perfectly.... I lovd it...
N lol bout rey... Thats jst da attitude i hd in mind while making him.... >_< xD
n wow....!! Bout the way u shwd everybodies background n stuf... U wrote em as if they were ur own..... :D
that shws talent....=)
kool chapter....
Keep up the good work....
Cnt wait fr da action xD
Author's Response: Thanks, the locket thing just came on a whim, but im glad you liked it!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/08/11 - 08:24 pm · For: Interviews
Well, I don't think it was boring at all. I especially liked this one; it allows us to learn even more about each character's personality and background. It feels like foreshadowing for the games, and I like it XD Nice job! You're slowly building the suspense for when the games begin. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Well, I'll believe its not boring then, haha. Im really glad you guys liked this. The next chapter is really fun to write... Stay tuned! ;D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 21/08/11 - 03:37 pm · For: Stylists
Finally remembered to give you a stylist. Sorry about forgetting before.
Name: Shihiro Kazagu (totally made this up)
Gender: Male
Age: 28
Personality: He's nice and cares a little too much about clothes. Most people think he's shallow, but that's just a front and only people who care enough to delve past that does he allow to be his friends.
Author's Response: Hrm, no problem. Thanks! But yeah... I just got internet access back today. :)
Name: hulk (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 08:08 pm · For: Story Update/author's note
yep tis me.. shadow ^.^
hehe... but i dnt mind if u make him go all fussy bout nt wearin stuff he doesn't like... even wen he looks good in it... xP for some humour... :3
but if u finished with the mist village... its ok.. ^_^
n LOL xD funky food :P
urm.. i didn't quite understand... u said hw many yrs back they won... so wer the stylists victors too...?? O_O
BCoz daishi is a mentor... i mean i submitted him as one...
n oh.. any villageb u like :) thats urs 2 choose
Author's Response: No, I just wanted the years for the mentors. Thanks ;D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/08/11 - 03:48 pm · For: Stylists
I just saw the end note, so I decided to send in a mentor. Just wondering, are we allowed to send in more than one character, because if so, I was going to send in a stylist too.
Name: Rikku Yushigo
Gender: Female
Won: 4 years ago
Age: I'm not sure if you mean when she won or how old she is now but she was 16 when she won and is now 20.
Personality: She tries to cheer people up when they're down. She highly respects people when they volunteer since they're the ones who are brave enough to risk their own lives to save another. She was a volunteer herself for one of her friends. She tries to remain closed to the kids she mentors because she knows she'll feel pain if she has to watch them die. Despite closing herself off, she does everything she can to prepare the kids before they're sent to fight in the Games.
Author's Response: Yeah, that would really help if you sent in a stylist too! Uh, yeah, I wanted both, how long ago and how old she is. Thanks for the character!