Reviews For The Darker Future
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 10:33 pm · For: Storm Before The Calm
wow!!
kool chapter...
not much fight but the takeshie n kenshin cliffhanger is still as it is... i guess, right?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 02:46 pm · For: Storm Before The Calm
I feel like I'm cheating since I get to see what the characters are supposed to be like before I even write about them. Oh well. I love every second of it. You're writing is just plain amazing. I really want to know what will happen and what kind of character Raizen is. Some generals can be real jerks after all. I hope they don't realize she's lying. That would suck. I think that Sadao's kekkei genkai will be really handy. I love love love your story. Please update again soon. I can't believe people can write such great stories and it be legal. A lot of the stories on here are too good to not be illegal. Including all of yours.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/06/11 - 11:40 am · For: Storm Before The Calm
Aww, this is getting so sad! Sadao, poor poor Sadao. It's so sad about Manami (even though I don't know quite what happened to her, I'm still waiting for the end of that flashback).
And wow, I wonder what will happen to Megumi. Just the name Raizen sounds scary, I wonder how it will go for her. I'm so anxious for the next one already.
Keep up the great work with your story, it's really going well so far! I can't wait for more, keep up the awesome job with all your stories!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 03:31 am · For: A Swordsmen's Sorrow
purely awesome!!
wow... manami, eh?
kool!! hope takeshi fights well.....
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 07:13 pm · For: A Swordsmen's Sorrow
Okay, I officially hate cliffhangers. I loved this. I wish it wasn't over yet. I can't wait for the next update. I'll have to wait, though. Darn. Waiting sucks. I really want to read more. I can't believe you stopped the story like that. I wanted to see what happened to Manami. And what's with the demonic pets? Man, I so want to read more. I want to see how Kenshin and Takeshi will deal with the soldiers and demon pets. You rock, cvhoneybee.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 03:25 pm · For: A Swordsmen's Sorrow
Wow! That was an intense flashback. I'm so disappointed we couldn't hear the end. But it really helps to know a little more about Manami. It's very disheartening to hear the start of her sad death. But I still would like to know what else happened.
Demonic pets, huh? Wow, the evil guys just get better and better (in a scary way) each time you write about them. Keep up the good work with that, hearing about them really adds drama to the story.
Another wonderful chapter to add to the collection, Bee! Great work! I can't wait to read more, this was really great! Keep up the fantastic work!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 12:05 am · For: When All The Lights Go Out
awesome!!
one chapter better than the other...
:D
urm... wen'l u update 'the Shinobi games'?
plz... do soon...thanx
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 07:30 pm · For: When All The Lights Go Out
Ooh. I can't wait to see what will happen next. This story is absolutely amazing. The only flaws in it are the couple spelling mistakes. Other than that, it's perfect. I loved every minute of it and I can't wait until you write another wonderful chapter.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 05:16 pm · For: When All The Lights Go Out
That was so epic! And here I thought Kiyomi had lost her spirit, I was worried about her. And then she totally beat the crap out of Imura, even with her chakra levels so low. Great work with that scene, it was amazing.
And Megumi and Ryota are going on a journey, and I am very excited to see how that goes. Hehe, the action is starting, and I'm so filled with suspense for it!
Great work on this chapter, Bee. This is amazing. I really like where this story is going, please keep up the good work with this. I definitely can't wait for more. Now I'm headed over to your site to see what more you have up there :D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 07:13 pm · For: Between Right and Wrong
How could you, Bee? That just wasn't nice. How could you say them and not tell us who they were (or should I know and am just having a brain fart?)? The story was so good I kept on trying to find a next button even though I knew there was none. I can't wait to read more, Bee. It's just plain awesome. All of your stories are awesome. And just wondering, whose Kiyomi, because I'm nosy and went through all your ocs, but I don't remember seeing Kiyomi (again, I might just be having a brain fart). On last thing before I go.
This. Story. And. You. Are.
AWESOOOOMMMMMMMEEEEEE!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. Kiyomi is my oc for The Shinobi Games, lol. And They is basically the people Imura works for, I'll shed more light on them in the next few chapters.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 11:34 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
cant* wait for the update
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 11:33 am · For: Between Right and Wrong
oh!
OMG!! suspense....
the plot is getting thicker n interesting.... =D
dnt wait for the update........
but i as expecting an update for the 'sacred relics' or 'shinobi games'
well anyways...
keep writing u r awesome at this xD
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 11:18 am · For: Between Right and Wrong
Wow, an update so soon! Gosh!
I liked the scene with Kiyomi and Kaoru. It was a clash of burning will power and acceptance of imprisonment. It worked between the two, I liked it. And a huge plot opener was revealed by Sadao! I was surprised with what he said, it makes things so much more interesting and suspenseful. Great work on this, I really enjoyed this chapter. Keep up the awesome job with this!
Author's Response: I know, I'm on a roll with this story. Yeah Kiyomi and Kaoru are pretty opposite at the moment, but that will change in time. Yep Sadao spilled the beans on what's going on, but it's going to get the ball rolling. New update soon, I promise =)
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 06:33 am · For: The History That Was Lost
Another awesome chapter. The background story is good. Sad that there can't be any more ninjas but it's very interesting.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 06:01 am · For: The History That Was Lost
Another awesome chapter. The background story is good. Sad that there can't be any more ninjas but it's very interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you, yeah no more ninja's, but that's what this story about
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 05:52 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
Awesome! That's pretty cool that you're putting in all your OCs into this. Great idea! Cool how he just beat up the officer. :)
Author's Response: Yeah Ryota is my tough guy character =D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 05:01 am · For: The History That Was Lost
I don't know why, but when I read this, I imagine Final Fantasy 7. I can't get it out of my head now.... Oh, and I was reading this and I was thinking, and not that this story isn't original, but this reminds me how Angel Society is going to become after, well, I can't tell you.
Okay, now to your story. I went to your website and read your stories one and I loved the preview for this. You should have it be your summary. It's plain awesome, just like your story. It makes me think of how I used to write summaries. Maybe I'll write them like that again, but I might not. I can't wait to read more. It's an amazing story that I'm in love with. Please update this (or one of your other stories) soon!
Author's Response: It could be like Final Fantasy 7 if you take away the sickness it has and the crazy guy who wants to control the world lol, but how there world is comes into play for my story that's for sure =) I don't know much about y'alls story since I only have the summary and first chapter to look at. But I can promise it will be different from your joint story. And thank you for looking at my website, I'll finish it soon and have it all nice and pretty.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 04:09 am · For: The History That Was Lost
Hey hey!! the guardian of the swamp!
wow nice chapter....
so u introduced all u OCs already
only kaorou left....
keep up the good work
but lolz,
yer writing 3 stories alll at once...
dnt u get confused?
Author's Response: There are actually a few more characters that need to be put in. I don't know how I am doing it, but it's working so I think I'll just keep writing all three stories at once, haha.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 03:42 am · For: The History That Was Lost
Wow! This was amazing! Everything that is being explained is helping this story flow so well! And the intros to the other characters are coming in very nicely. Excellent work, I really do like this!
So I checked out your website, and I must say, it is very cool! I checked out the story page, and the preview for this story had me so engrossed and interested. It was like an actual movie trailer, and I was so upset when there wasn't anymore. And that was just the preview! It makes me even more excited to read more of this story, so I hope you continue. Keep up the great work with all of your stories!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad it's flowing and not all choppy that is always a fear i have. =) Yeah the website is a work in progress, when it's finish I will let everyone know. And that preview for this story was a hard thing to write surprisingly, haha.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 06:52 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
Since I have two stories, I thought I should tell you that it's for Darkness Unleashed and it's the person who fights Chishio
Author's Response: ok i will take a look at it and have a character in about an hour =D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 01:00 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
wow!1 nice start :D
urm... i hope this is not like invading or anything of the sort >.<
but cn u add my character to it too, plz? u knw i just use one character everywhere.... n i dnt think he is too difficult to make :P
so if u dnt mind ...... plz ^.^
Author's Response: I can put him in for a part of the story sure.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 11:47 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
I did ennie meanie minnie moe again (did it to decide who made the last descendant and landed on silverwolf who made Chishio), and this time I landed on you. So I was wondering if you could make me another bad guy for template #2. If you don't want to, you don't have to. I'll just do the ennie meanie minnie moe thing again.
Author's Response: Yeah I can make you another character no problem =D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 10:46 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
Hehe. Both the characters you sent me are on here. They're awesome. I think you wrote them better than I ever could (and will for Ryota). This story is so amazing and original. It makes me want to do the same for mine, but I'm so stressed out doing two, I'm not sure I'll be able to. *sigh*. Anyway, it's an awesome story. I can't wait to read more. Then again, I can't wait to read more of any of your stories. Please post a new chapter for one of them. And is Megumi going to be the narrator for the whole story?
Author's Response: Haha thanks Sasui, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Well think of it this way now you see the characters in my perspective so it can help you portray them, but I'm 100% sure you could do it just fine on your own. Ryota is a tough character to write about, but don't worry you'll do it! I'm stressed a bit too cause I have no time to really write, but hey this story seemed to good to not be shared with everyone who is writing for me, ya know =D And like I said to silverwolf, Megumi will tell the story when she is in the scene if she is not it will be told in third person. =)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 10:25 am · For: The Future of the Shinobi
Wow! That is so creative! I love that idea, this is so cool! Huh, now I'm going to have to be nosy and look at all of your characters again just so I know who is who ;) Will they be similar in background stories or just personalities/appearances? And is it going to be in only Megumi's perspective or will all the characters have their own point of views.
*_*
Sorry for all the questions, I'm just really intrigued with this. It had such a good start, and with all the amazing characters you've created, it will definitely be a great story, I can already tell ^_^ I really hope to see an update soon, but I'm in love with all your stories already, so I don't know which one I want updated first *_* So keep up the good work with your writing and all your stories!
Author's Response: Thank you silver wolf, it means a lot =D. As for your questions, the personalities and appearances will remain the same and same of the basic info, but there will be minor changes on a few of the characters. Megumi will be the main one to tell the story yes, but when she isn't in a certain scene it will be told in third person. I'm glad you found this enjoyable, I figured it would be fun to write about my characters myself, so I just went for it. I will probably update this one frequently so long as work doesn't get in the way...I'm such a busy bee and am a bit crazy for adding another story under my belt...>.<