Of everything I have read from you until now, I like this one the best. I love how Naruto is so cute and innocent! I also loved the reason why Naruto had to write to them both at the same time. Such a good explanation and very in-character for Jiraiya... so funny :)
I would haver prefered to read a bit more about the reasons why Iruka and Kakshi got together, maybe you could have reflected on this topic a little longer.
As always thank you for the time spend on this
Me