Hmm, they'll be turned into animals? Hmm, I wonder how that will turn out. But I do commend you on sending them to the real world (or at least that's what it says in the summary), so I look forward to seeing how things go for the pair. I'm normally not a big yaoi fan, but if there is fluff, then I don't really mind, so I would like to read more of this story.

Ah, I actually made a challenge that asks the writer to put Naruto characters in the real world, check it out if you like. It's called 'Let's Be Original.'

So, for the little bit before the chapter end notes, where you describe Sasuke's feeling, you should probably incorporate that into the actual story. I was a bit confused when I read it, and reading it in the end notes is helpful, but it makes the story better when the author is able to include such feelings through writing. It shows the talent of the writer, so if you could include what you wrote in the end notes with the plot, it would be even better.

I've never placed a banner up for a summary, so if I'm wrong, I'm sorry. I'm sure putting a picture up uses the html tag , where the xxx is the link to the picture. Here's a nice website to help you out with the html tags:

http://www.opendiary.com/help/writing_in_your_diary/html_tags_and_how_to_use_them.htm

I'm sorry if this doesn't help at all or if it completely backfires. But I do hope your story goes well. Keep up the good work with your writing!

Author's Response: Yes, they all turn into animals. Though thats the reason for the prologue, the transaction from the narutoverse to the real world. I try to put all my humor into this cause when ever i write sasuke i just cant have him all mopey dopey with angst all the time so there is attempt at humor in here. Probably the only reason for the fluff is cause i got an idea for them to kind of go into heat and thought it would be funny. That was mostly inspired by my cat when he went through his first heat (and boy was that wierd).rnrnYou mention your challenge, funny thing is i was reading that challenge when i thought of the idea a month ago. But i really wanted something a little more original so I said "why not turn them into animals?" the only thing being how do i make it logical to when no one can be confused and so i dont confuse myself.rnrnThe reason i dont actually have that in the story is cause he's not supposed to be all touchy feely if you know what i mean. So asking naruto if he feels the same way without feeling uncomfortable about talking about that kind of stuff, even if its somewhat different, ya' know?rnrnI know html and every thing but i tried it once, putting the banner up, and it just didn't work very well. But i think i'll try my hardest to see if i can get it up. *snickers*