Reviews For Revenge or the promise?
Name: Greatest cat EVA (Anonymous) · Date: 17/06/11 - 12:04 pm · For: Chapter 4
awesome story!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 09:12 am · For: Chapter 4
Wait wait wait. Did you just say Iruka died? Oh, that's not cool. You've got to stop killing off my favorite characters (I've liked Iruka since one of the latest chapters with him and Naruto). I can't believe you not only did that, but you stopped right before the fight.
And the last thing I can believe is....... HOW AMAZING THIS IS! I absolutely love this story. It's so suspenseful and sad (at times like chapter 2). I want to know which it is. Revenge? Promise? Revenge? Promise? Man, I so want to know.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 09:09 am · For: Chapter 4
?! Why are you so evil?! I was so excited to see an update, and you made it this short. Ugh! Please update soon with a longer chapter, short chappies are no fun *pouts* I really want to see this epic fight, just the dialogue between the two friends/rivals/enemies had me engulfed in the story. And then it ended. :( Again, you are so evil!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 17/06/11 - 09:09 am · For: Chapter 3
Sorry I didn't read this before. I didn't notice it when you up it up. Great chapter. I love it. I can't wait to see what happens next (which I get to do). It's amazingly cool. I love your story (I still miss Hinata, though. Poor Shino.....)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/11 - 10:09 am · For: Chapter 3
Same mask as an Akatsuki member? Madara?! Is it?! I don't know, what is going to happen?! Please update this soon, I'm so scared and anxious and in suspense! Keep up the good writing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 12:44 pm · For: Revenge or the promise? Chapter 2
?!?!?!
WHAT?! Hinata died?! What the heck?! The first chapter wasn't working, so I was just thinking I would go and read chapter 2 anyway. I feel like I missed so much!
Seriously?! Hinata died?! I was crying during this chapter, seriously, I feel so.... so.... I don't even know, but it's not good! You're a very cruel person.
*sniffle* Hmm, okay... time for the actual review.
I want to say Hiashi was a tad OOC, just because I think he would be especially mean to Naruto before he accepted that it was Sasuke's fault. But everything else was really good. It was heartbreaking, but it is probably a really good introduction. A good attention-getter is a really great way to start a story. Depressing, obviously, but I commend you with such a great way to start. Well done, I look forward to more!
Hmm, is there a possibility of fixing the first chapter? If it can't be fixed, then I suppose it is alright, this chapter itself was pretty informative anyway.
Author's Response: I'll go back and check chapter 1 and fix it. And I thought that about Hiashi was abit OOC, he isn't the sort of person to say that.rnrnAnd I am a really cruel person aren't I. I love Hinata, and I have no idea what drove me to kill her!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 11:12 am · For: Revenge or the promise? Chapter 2
T-T. Just give me a sec to get my tears under control. Okay, first I have to tell you the first chapter is messed up. Second, I can't believe nobody has reviewed for this. It reminds me of a story I'd planned on writing but decided not to. Yours is better than mine would have been anyway. This chapter was amazing, and since Hinata is one of my favorite characters, just knowing she was dead in this fanfic had me crying.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I also love Hinata, I didn't want to kill her, damn plot bunnies :P