Reviews For The Angel Society
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:08 pm · For: The Chosen
I feel all late on this, but I really like the first idea better cause it's a very raw idea. =D
And I was gonna make another character, but I think I will let someone else have the chance, but if you need one I will gladly make one =D
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:02 pm · For: The Generals
Name: Sadao Shuji
Gender: Male
Ancestor (optional): none
Age: 21
Weakness: Is incredibly practical or logical about anything.
Specialty: Tai-justu & Dojutsu
Personality: Sadao is a bit on the serious side always has been, but he can be humorous at times. He is very gentle around children and animals it's almost a complete change from when he is around people his own age. Sadao is calm and collected and very practical about everything. He relies on logic more than gut feelings.
Appearance (pictures accepted):
Tattoo Info (design and location here): Left wrist, it is of a dungeon key.
History: Sadao had a normal childhood until he was ten. He lived in a group of nomads and one day they were violently attacked. He was the only survivor of the group. After that Sadao lived in the slums of a rich populated area. It was there that he learned everything he knows. With his dojutsu he was able to lead a group of teenagers to steal food, clothing, and even sometimes money.
Chakra Nature: Lightening & Wind
Kekkei Genkai: His dojutsu is called "satsuriku no tenshi" (angel of carnage) with this ability he can kill just by looking someone in the eyes if he so chooses, he can also enter peoples minds causing them to believe whatever he wants them too. When the dojutsu is activated his eyes go from their normal green to solid black with a purple star and a white dot between each arm of the star.
Special Abilities: tai jutsu and acrobatics
Other (optional): nothing I can think of but if you have any questions feel free to ask. =)
Author's Response: He's wonderful. There's nothing I need to ask. I can't wait to write about the generals. They seem so cool. I'm getting more and more excited to write this.... which makes me more worried I'll mess up. -_-"
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 06:00 pm · For: The Generals
Ooh, more characters, huh? Cool, I love making characters!
Name: Kyoshi Suzuki
Gender: Female
Ancestor (optional): none
Age: 20
Weakness: Taijutsu
Specialty: Ninjutsu; not great at genjutsu, but she can break them sometimes
Personality: She is cautious around others, untrusting of anyone and everyone. She is shy and does not let anyone come emotionally close to her. She only pledges loyalty to her king.
Appearance (pictures accepted): She has curly black hair that reaches a little past her shoulders; it is usually tied up in a ponytail. She has green eyes and tan skin. She wears black pants and a white kimono top with a black sash around her waist. The kimono top has prints of green flowers on it.
Tattoo Info (design and location here): It is located on her left shoulder, and it forms a flying sparrow.
History: She was physically abused by her father. Her mother never bothered to help her, for she was afraid of her husband. Kyoshi was contantly beaten because her father felt she was never good enough as a ninja.
Chakra Nature: Plant
Kekkei Genkai: none
Special Abilities: Good at archery, and she uses her chakra to enhance her arrows.
Other (optional): I can't think of anything.
Tell me if I need to change anything!
Author's Response: Haha. Both Kushin and Kyoshi are going to get irritated if they have to be put under genjutsu. Okay, back on topic (or was that on topic?). No, nothing needs changed. It's as wonderful as all the other ocs I've seen (which are pretty dang wonderful). I see what would cause her to act the way she does. I just hope I can write her as you described.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 11/06/11 - 09:25 am · For: The Chosen
i agree with the others.....
Stick to the first one.....
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 - 10:35 am · For: The Chosen
I think you should do this one. I like this idea a bit better, in my opinion.
Name: CrimsonFighter3 (Signed) · Date: 10/06/11 - 08:22 am · For: The Chosen
Is it too late to sumbit a Character? Cuz if not I would love too
but I think you should go witht he first one since it seems so orginale to me, not saying the second isn't because it sounds amazing as well. but the fact that it seems like the first one has a whole new society to it is really cool, just felt like putting it out there I hope that it helps you a little bit
Author's Response: You'll be able to submit a general if that's okay. And if you want to make a minor good character, that's also okay, because there's going to be a lot of ocs I'm just going to have to make up from the tip of my head later on. Just know they won't come until later.rn
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 08:42 am · For: The Chosen
So.....
wen'l u start da story sky-sama?
m waitin eagerly..... :)
hope my character is introduced soon :D
thanx once again for adding my character...
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I will. Read the new chapter and you'll understand.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 01:47 am · For: The Chosen
Name:Kazuki Ushiro
Gender:Male
Ancestor (optional): Mei Terumi
Age:17
Weakness: Has a phobia towards reptiles
Romance (optional): well if Amanda doesn't mind.....
Rank: Chunnin
Personality: Light-hearted, Happy-go-lucky, slightly perv, friendly, talkative, brave(afraid of nothing with the exception of reptiles, especially snakes), will do anything for people he loves....
Appearance (pictures accepted)(put where the wing is here): Black Messy spikes, bright green eyes, fair skin, black tank top(torn sleeves) , cargo pants, a bright yellow stone for a locket.. the tatoo is on his right arm on his triceps....
History: He used to live with his family n little sister..... living a normal, boring life, until He left his house to go on an adventure..... were He fought many people..... improving his skills.....
Chakra Nature: fire ^ wind
Kekkei Genkai: can turn himself into wind...... but it absorbs lots of his chakra...... so He very rarely uses it
Special Abilities: super speed...
he can create a devastating blazing tornado.....(both are unlocked l8tr)
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional)
hope m not too late....
Author's Response: Awesome character, Shadow-san (I make up my own nicknames for people =P). I'll have Sasaui see if Amanda can be with you since I like making her do most of the work >=) I'm so mean. I'll try my best with the perv angle, but I can tell you right now, neither me nor Sasaui are good at that kind of thing, so please don't chew either of us out. And no, you're not too late.
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 10:40 pm · For: The Chosen
Since Bee changed her characters age I think my character should probably be a bit older, so let's say 18 instead of 15.
Author's Response: Good call. I'm a little werided out by making anyone with an age difference over three years, so thank you for making this easier on me.
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 10:35 pm · For: The Chosen
Since it is no one can be under 16 then my character shall be 20.
So when will you be starting? Cause I really wanna read it!
Author's Response: If you haven't seen, Sasaui Uchiha is now co-writing this. This is because, and I'm willing to admit, she's a better writer than me. I would not be willing to say this if she wasn't my friend. Because of this, I'll usually write the chapter, she'll revise it, and then add a bit of her own stuff after talking to me about it. Because of this, I won't be able to start until after Sasaui finishes the next chapter of Darkness Unleashed, therefore introducing all of her ocs.
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 08:51 am · For: The Chosen
Name: Reimi Hiwatari
Gender: Female
Ancestor (optional): Sakura Haruno
Age: 15
Weakness: She's pretty emotional sometimes and is afraid of insects.
Romance (optional): I asked cvhoneybee and she said I can have a romance with her character! So if you want that would be good. =)
Rank: Chunin
Personality: Reimi is a very sweet girl that is creative and loves to help people. Her dream is to become a medic. Somewhat of a bookworm and daydreamer, Reimi is always thinking of the what if's.
Appearance (pictures accepted)(put where the wing is here):
Her tattoo is located in the center of her chest just below her neck.
History: Reimi had a pretty normal life a mother and father who took care of her friends. She has had a pretty good life, but when she turned fourteen her father became deathly ill and now lives in a hospital and her mother works non stop to pay for everything.
Chakra Nature: Water
Kekkei Genkai: none
Special Abilities: Medic abilities
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): none that I can really think of.
Good luck with this story and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Sweet. Now I have two people hooked up. Now I need to figure out who to put Amanda with..... Okay, back on track. She sounds like a wonderful character who I'll enjoy writing about. I can't see how my story will go bad with all of the great ocs I'm getting. I absolutely love them. I hope I can do Reimi justice.
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 08:32 am · For: The Chosen
I will take the character that has already escaped from the school.
Name: Kenshin Shou
Gender: Male
Ancestor (optional): Gaara
Age: 16
Weakness: Perfectionist at times and sometimes self righteous.
Romance (optional): Whoever you see my character being with is fine with me =)
Rank: Jounin
Personality: Kenshin is a quiet fellow with a heart of gold, sometimes he can be a bit self-righteous, but over all he wants what is best for everyone. He is also a perfectionist, being out in the wild has taught him only the best and strong survive, so he has that attitude towards difficult situations.
Appearance (pictures accepted)(put where the wing is here):
His angel wing tattoo will is on his neck right side.
History: Ever since Kenshin was seven years old he had been taking care of himself. He hunted for food, stole what he had too, and trained himself how to fight. He found a old man when he was ten and lived with him for a bit where he learned how to use a sword and many different techniques.
Chakra Nature: Earth and Wind
Kekkei Genkai: Earth Manipulation and Wind Manipulation
Special Abilities: with his sword, Kenshin can create earthquakes. He is crafty with swordsmanship and is highly skilled in tai jutsu.
(above can be unlocked later on)
Other (optional): Has a horse named Yakul that travels just about anywhere with him.
If you need any clarification just let me know I will be happy to help you understand my character =D
Author's Response: Nah. No clarification needed. Kenshin is great and you described him well. I really hope I can write him as you described. I think I'll have fun with this story with all these great characters.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 05/06/11 - 07:50 am · For: The Chosen
Name: Amanda Shi
Gender: Female
Ancestor: Orochimaru
Age: 14
Weakness: Social skills
Romance (optional): Everyone is afraid of her, so no real chance there. I personally am cool with romance though, if they match my personality.
Rank: ANBU
Personality: Cold. She is mean, cold, sadistic. Polite, to people she respects. She doesn't respect you unless you earn her respect. She likes pain, and is really scary. She scares everyone, even her own family.
Appearance: She has white skin. Long black hair, and snake like eyes. She wears what Sasuke wore in Shippuden, only in girl form. She basically looks like a female Orochimaru. She has a small mark on her neck. A birth mark. She has the angel tattoo on her left shoulder.
History: Her parents are terrified of her. She sort of lives on her own, her parents are out to much. I mean, they are at home every few weeks. She loves to meditate. She scares everyone in the town. She has a pet snake named Salyzar, which is deadly.
Chakra Nature: Lightning
Kekkei Genkai: Curse Mark
Special Abilities: She is great at genjutsu, and can do something similar to Tsuklinomi later on.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: I don't look at my fanfic for a while, and when I do, BOOM! Three new reviews. That's a really nice surprise. I can't wait to write about her. I can already see her, and I just hope I write her well (I write some of the chapters and then Sasaui revises and posts them). I just hope I don't mess up. I've never been too good with creepy characters.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 08:54 pm · For: The Chosen
*tear tear* I'm... so flattered. My story inspired you? Really? Oh gosh, I can't stop the tears.... And I'm so sad you weren't able to join. I'm accepting villains if you still want to be apart of the story. But I understand if you don't, since it is a bad guy. I'm sorry....
But I would be honored if you let me join your story. This sounds really cool so far, I can't wait!
This character can be the one who grew up knowing the wild.
Name: Rikuto Matsuda
Gender: Male
Ancestor (optional): Kiba Inuzuka
Age: 16
Weakness: He loses control of his anger easily in the heat of the moment. He is also afraid of the water, he doesn't know how to swim, and he is very ashamed of it (little people know of this secret).
Romance (optional): Hmm, let's go with your character, eh? And let's make it a love/hate relationship. One minute they can be cute, the next, they're yelling in each other's faces.
Rank: Genin
Personality: As I said, he loses control of his temper when someone pushes his buttons. He can also be sort of cocky, and he challenges anyone who he thinks is a threat. But he does have a soft side toward animals.
Appearance (pictures accepted)(put where the wing is here): He has brown messy hair and brown eyes. He has relatively tan skin. He wears a black leather jacket that has grayish fur lining the hood. His tattoo is on his forearm, just below his right palm.
History: His parents died when he was three, and he hated his orphanage so he escaped at the age of five. He stumbled upon a wolf pack and he grew up in the forest. He returned to civilization at ten, but he has a white wolf pup (probably now a grown up wolf) named Shiro who follows him around. He lacks people skills a bit, which explains his hot temper when talking with others.
Chakra Nature: Earth
Kekkei Genkai: I guess eventual combination attacks with his wolf.
Special Abilities:
(above can be unlocked later on) When he presses his palm to the ground, he can feel everything and everyone that is within a 5 mile radius. When he gets better at ninja stuff, he can probably extend the radius.
Other (optional): That is all, I believe.
I'm very excited to see this. If I need to change anything, please tell me. Good luck!
Author's Response: Sasaui (<- my friend who helped me find this wonderful sight) was right. You are awesome. The special ability he has will definitely help the chosen out. I think him and Sorano getting to know each other will be interesting. I like how his name has to do with land and he can sense what's around him from touching the earth. That's pretty interesting. I can't wait to begin writing this, but I need at least three more characters.