Reviews For The Shinobi Games
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 02:23 pm · For: AUTHOR NOTE PLEASE READ
Well, I can't exactly get mad at you since most of my stories are on hiatus right now..... I understand why you're doing it, though. I can barely keep my characters straight since I got both good and bad guys =P. And Krina's basically quit helping me out with the story she made me write..... Okay, back to your story. I veer off track easily.
If it wasn't for the fact it would mean that your other story would be finished, I'd say I hope you can return to this story soon.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 12:12 pm · For: AUTHOR NOTE PLEASE READ
No problem, now I'll have time to read your other ones too since my life has been very busy. I just hope you don't abandon it. Thanks for the heads up!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 10:20 am · For: AUTHOR NOTE PLEASE READ
:(
well
its hurting, irritating, :P coz ma character is not yet introduced >.<
but anyways i understand... u might b under a lot of pressure handling 3 stories... n now the website.....
but anyways... :D
do wat seems best with u...
we'll gladly co-operate ^.^
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 08:03 am · For: AUTHOR NOTE PLEASE READ
Awww..... bummer....
But you know what? At least we, as the readers, and you won't have to worry about updates. It's disappointing, but you're the writer, so at least this will help you out with working on your other stories. And hey, maybe this means your other stories will come out better now that they have more attention.
At least you will come back to this one eventually. Good luck with your other stories then!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 18/06/11 - 06:54 am · For: Chapter 3
Yay! My character was introduced! Great job with it, really. I've been busy and I'm glad I got a chance to read this! Awesome!! All the other characters are great too!
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 16/06/11 - 04:52 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Nice Chapter! I haven't seen every character yet, but it's still good. Still can't wait til the games start!
Author's Response: I'm getting them all put in, I'm almost done =D
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 03:58 pm · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
My sister, silverwolf1213, was absolutely right when she said that you were an amazing writer! I can't believe how great you are with joint stories! You already have two of them! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you very much =D I try my best to get it right.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 01:59 pm · For: Chapter 3
Woah, cliffhanger?! Really?! Aw.... *pouts lightly*
This is great though, I loved it! Nice job with my character too! Good job with her. The other characters were awesome too. I think you hit their personalities perfectly. Well done!
But once again.... cliffhanger? Really? Please update soon? Please?
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry I shall do my best to get it updated this weekend =D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 01:08 pm · For: Chapter 3
Ooh. That ending sure was interesting. I hope you update soon so I can see what's going to happen. I'm sure Krina would tell you you did an awesome job with Ren if she ever got on to do anything but give out characters *face palms*. You did amazingly well with the other two characters as well. I can't wait for the Games to start. I've always loved tournament related stuff.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 11:19 am · For: Chapter 2
It's awesome so far. So realistically awesome. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much =)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 10:59 am · For: Chapter 2
Wow. That was absolutely amazing. You did all of the characters wonderfully. I was surprised that Sosuke was showed in the first chapter. I just noticed he's the only jonin, so you can make him a chunin instead if you want. That would probably make it a little more fair. I can't wait to read more. I'm reading the Hunger Games now, and it says a lot about your story that I'm reading this instead of the book.
Author's Response: Aw really? Why thank you very much. I'm very glad you are enjoying this.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 10:51 am · For: Chapter 2
Wow
nice start
it gav n idea bout wat the story exactly is.....
cool story.... it sure will b fun.....
cnt wait to see hw u'l do with Kazuki..... :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I will do my best on your character =D
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 08:39 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Good Job! I liked the entire chapter! Kiyomi's chapter was funny, and Ezra was described perfectly! I really liked how Tsunade was worried that he would be to much for the other competitors, but then she let him in! Nice Job, I really liked this!
Author's Response: I'm relieved, I thought it was going to be off. But I'm glad how you liked this chapter, I hope future chapters will be up to par.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 07:55 am · For: Chapter 2
Yay! You finally started! Oh, um, don't forget to add this to the challenge, sorry to push it, I just think it's kind of important, if you understand.
But this was so good! I love Kiyomi, she's so bubbly and yet those are the ones everyone has to watch out for. I love it! And Sosuke seems so cool, honestly. He seems kind of nice and laid back but a very cool person. And I really think you did a good job with Ezra. He came with a difficult background, but you wrote it so fluently and easily.
I think you've captured the OCs personalities very well so far. Nice work! I can't wait to see how the rest of this goes. It should definitely be interesting. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I keep forgetting to add it, but I shall go and do that now. I'm glad you enjoyed the characters and yeah, Ezra was a difficult character, but I think I can manage, hopefully theez agrees with me. =) Anyways in a couple of days I should have another chapter up, since I have a three day weekend from work. =D
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 03:51 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
so.....
wen r u starting?
Author's Response: Soon I promise, I'm just proofing the first chapter.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 02:49 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
weakness: afraid of lightening....
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/11 - 02:47 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
oh i'd like to join...
Name: Kazuki Ushiro
gender: Male
Village: kiri (mist village)
Rank: Chunnin
Romance: Kiyomi Yamashita...... that is if u dnt mind....
age: 17
Background: from one of the lowest clans of the mist.... he lost his father at the age of 2
so it is upto him now to take care of his mom n little sister miana..... he does a woodcutter's job to keep his family alive......
his grandfather was of the famous shinobis of the mist who were experts in fire techniques....his grandfather was a student of mei terumi's late father....
Kazuki learned all fire techniques from his grandfather......
appearance: Black messy hair, fair skin, Bright green eyes....
he wears a black sleeveless tank top(torn sleeves)
a lbright yellow stone for a locket.... which belonged to his dad....
white trousers... n ninja shoes
personality: fun-loving, talkative, happy-go-lucky attitude, slow to anger, but will do anything for loved ones...Anything!!
Kekkai Genkai: Lava Release(unlocked in story)
Special Ability: Very Very agile n quick on feet......
hope i didn't join tooo late... :(
Author's Response: It's not too late too join. The only thing is I only needed five characters, but I will still use your character he just won't be like one of the spot light characters if you know what I mean. But I have a good idea for your character and I don't mind that he wants a romance with my character that makes it more fun. I hope I write your character well.
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 - 04:32 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Oh yeah. Ren is also at chunin level.
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 03/06/11 - 03:01 pm · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Name: Ren Satsuki
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Village: Grass
Romance: You can decide. I want romance, but I can't figure out who with. Doesn't matter who it is.
Personality: He's sarcastic when he doesn't like you, and he's usually blunt when your his friend. Hey, you have to learn the truth somehow. He hates to hurt others, but when he has to tell them something, he will. His attention span is pretty short, which can be pretty bad at times. He tends to loose himself in his thoughts. Ren will be nice to you, but he tends to snap easily. It's just how he is. He tries to control his anger, but he doesn't always succeed.
Brief History: He's been trained to be a ninja for as long as he can remember. His family is a strong clan that's well respect, and he feels he has to live up to them. Because of this, he has trouble deciding between what he wants to do and what he feels like he needs to want to do. He became a well known ninja in the Satsuki clan, but he can be beaten by his older brother and three other people. Other than having that pressure, his life was mostly normal.
Appearance: (belongs to Ginzen of deviantart) Link-
http://ginzen.deviantart.com/art/Kingdom-Hearts-OC-Ren-102795548
His hair is black and white, his eyes are a dark violet. His shirt is black and his coat is dark blue. His pants are white.
Kekkei Genkai: he can control nature related things
Chakra Nature: Would you call it nature because of what it does????
Weakness: He can not defeat the cuteness of children. He also can't swim. I guess the daydreaming thing and short attention span are flaws.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/11 - 06:56 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Yay! Another joint story! Another one to add to the challenge, perhaps? Haha, you're really good with these joint stories, so I can't wait to see how this one comes out.
Name: Aka Ryuu
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Village: Konoha
Rank: Chuunin
Romance: Shikamaru
Personality: She can be very timid unless she knows the person very well. She is very unsure of herself at times, but in vital times, she follows her instincts to help as much as she can.
Brief History: Her clan is the Dragon clan. They are able to work with dragons. She was given a dragon at ten, the mandatory age for the clan to receive their partner. Her dragon is her opposite.
Appearance (you can use a picture): She has brilliant shoulder-length red hair with eyes to match. Her skin is lightly tanned, but not too much. She wears a black battle kimono with a print red roses lining it. A red sash goes around her waist.
Kekkei Genkai: The clan has the ability to use Niji no kasai (Rainbow Fire). Just as the name says, the fire is rainbow colored. It enhances chakra and power, but it should only be used as a last resort.
Chakra Nature: Fire
Weakness: She's afraid of fire. Yeah, go figure. She's afraid of her own power.
Other facts (animal partner, weapon they carry, ect.): Her dragon's name is Akuma. He is the size of a regular sized snake but can change into a more larger size. He is black with red spikes along his spine and his tail. He is very mean and dark and is not a very patient dragon. He tries to encourage his master (in his mean and angry way). Her weapon of choice is a katana.
I hope this helps! If you need me change something, just tell me.
Author's Response: I get to write about dragons, yay! Haha, can't wait to start, hope this story will do as well as my other one.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 01:14 pm · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Haha, what a coicidence, I was considering a story similar to this. I was thinking of a Hunger Games/Shippuden crossover. I'll probably start it after I'm done with one of my other stories. ;D
Here goes:
Name: Aika Kichida
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Village: Sound
Rank: Chunin
Romance: Neji
Personality: She loves music and loves to sing, but not in front of people. Aika is quiet and doesn't trust people easily.
Brief History: She was trained by her uncle since she was young. He taught her all about plants, edible ones, poisonous ones, etc. He also taught her their clan's kekkei genkai and trained her to throw senbon. Her uncle was killed by his most trusted friend so Aika doesn't trust others so easily. She lives with her grandparents.
Appearance:
Kekkei Genkai: She can put people under a genjutsu and lull people to sleep with her ocarina she had inherited from her grandma.
Chakra Nature: Wind
Weakness: Close combat, Taijutsu
Other: She has a rare mockingbird name Utahime that can camoflauge into his surroundings. They can communicate from long distances with a combination of whistles. Utahime is usually her scout.
She made herself a blowgun and uses it to shoot poisonous senbon she creates with the use of plants to directly insert the poison into her foes at deadly points. She is good at throwing senbon also and never misses her target.
Author's Response: Ah a sound ninja, cool! I will do my best to write your character properly
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 10:45 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
I just saw your Chakra natures on the chapter, and I'm sorry! Mine are the same! I can change it to Fire and Water if you like......
Author's Response: no worries it's fine
Name: theez (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 10:40 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Name: Ezra Uchiha/Hyuga
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Village: Leaf
Rank: Chunin
Romance: None as of now, but can give him one.......
Personality: Normally Calm and Collected, but can't control himself when he get's angry.
Brief History: As a Pure Uchiha, his parents were abusive, and was Sasuke's twin. He was always seen crying and without friends. Then he was killed by Itachi, and was recreated by modern tech, as well as implanted with Hyuga Genes. They happened to be Hiashi's Gene's, and this gave him the power to use the Byakkingan, a combo of Byakkugan and Mangeykyo Sharingan. Naruto's friend and Hinata's brother, as well as Sasuke's brother, his life is still not as easy, since, [If I am correct and this is before Sasuke comes back/dies] Sasuke is still gone.
Appearance (you can use a picture): He has spikey, sky blue hair that reaches down to his shoulders, and he has blue eye's. He wears a Jacket that is short sleeved and a T-Shirt that is a bit longer Sleeved, but not to long. He wears sweat pants that go down to his shoes.
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan, Byakugan, and Byakkingan
Chakra Nature: Wind and Lightning.
Weakness: He can't do anything well when discouraged or sad, and his speed is decreased when he is using a Wind and Lightning style move or when he is surrounded by a lot of Chakra.
Other facts (animal partner, weapon they carry, ect.): He can use a summoning Jutsu to summon a Lion, and he has a snake sword that is like Sasuke's that he found while on a mission.
Author's Response: This character is going to be challenging, but I will try my best in getting him how you pictured.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 08:51 am · For: Chapter 1: Join The Games
Name: Sosuke Kazukae
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Village: Sand (my second favorite village since I always use Konoha, my favorite)
Rank: Jonin
Romance: Hinata
Personality: He's really caring and has a soft heart. He puts others needs before his own. He values everything, not matter how little it is, because he grew up on the streets. He loves animals, especially his pet hawk, Tsubasa.
Brief History: His parents abandoned him because they were just plain jerks who hated him because of his kekkei genkai (I'll mention later) that's extremely rare to their clan. He befriended the hawk when he saved them from mean kids poking with a stick. He did a lot of jobs for money to both have a home and go to school.
Appearance: Sosuke has spiky black hair, grey blue eyes, and a scar on his cheek. He wears a cross shirt that has the cross being white on the left and black on the shirt while the right side of the cross is black and the shirt is white, and white shorts.
Kekkei Genkai: When either in a really bad situation or close to dying, he activates Berserk. It's like he becomes possessed. His chakra and everything else skyrockets. He can't control it yet, so he often attacks whoever is in sight.
Chakra Nature: Fire
Weakness: He acts before he thinks, and there's the fact about his kekkei genkai.....
Other Facts: He can give some of his chakra to Tsubasa and it can use wind style ninjutsu. Other than that, I can't think of anything else. If I can, I'll tell you.
Author's Response: Alright this should be fun, creative character. I'll do my best to give him justice.