Wow. This was really good. It was frightening because it is so true. Excellent work.

I think you should continue. You could include the reactions of all of the characters. And maybe something bad that happened to Hinata, perhaps? I don't know, something along those lines.

Anyways, good job. This was really good and tragic at the same time. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yeah, a storm hit us yesterday and I've never seen so much lightning in my life. Thanks. I think I will continue, but this story won't be as long.