Reviews For The Sacred Relics
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 01:51 pm · For: Prologue
First off, that was freaking amazing. I loved it. It was short but filled with tension. I kept wondering what the next person would say. This chapter makes me hungry for more from the get go. Second, what did the first part of Megumi's background mean and who is the other person with her. I might be missing something that's right in front of me, and I do that a lot. So it's my bad if I did.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 01:48 pm · For: Chapter One
So.... amazing....
I love this so much! You describe your characters very well and set the scene so nicely! This is great, absolute genius. I can't wait to see how you introduce the other characters. It has already begun, and it is going great! Keep up the incredible work, this is just phenomenal!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, I'm really excited that you are enjoying it.rn=)
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 11:58 am · For: Chapter One
Very nice. I really like this. I may have to write one of these joining things.
Author's Response: It's pretty fun to write stories like this I must admit, thanks for reviewingrn=)
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 10:58 am · For: Chapter One
Awesome. I really liked how you had Itachi and Sasuke sparring together. Cute! It's great so far!
Here's the link for the picture (It didn't show):
http://api.ning.com/files/7ZFTRsuNvimSukNxCmzxR870Gt1KnT0nKloWsHNd0pgmwkbPlkKhw54v6Kpfqo5X6y70HjMBj*6F4LVdhuuktvC3bfT7cFBH/anime_guy1.jpg
Author's Response: Thank you very much and I got the picture, so no worries.rn=)
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 08:24 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
Sorry, Krina
Darn, there's more guys than girls...
Romance correction: Hanabi Hyuga
Additional note: If he has a kage bunshin, his human nature fades twice as face and so on
Author's Response: Great character I will do my best to portray your character and thank you very much for joining, this is going to be a fun story to write =)
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 08:10 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
I guess I'll give a male character.
Name (first, last): Shoji Kiyomizu
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Rank: Jonin
Village: Leaf
Romance: Tenten
Appearance/Style: He has black hair and blue eyes.
Brief History: He grew up with a strict, abusive father. He discovered his kekkei genkai when he was 8. He can turn into any animal he 'bonds' with. He accidentally killed his father, trying to protect himself by turning into wolf. The third placed him into the academy.
Kekkei Genkai: Shoji inherited this from his mom. An animal agrees to share their body with Shoji and they are sealed into him. He can borrow their bodies any time he wants.
Special abilities: He can make kage bunshin that can transform into other animals too. Animals can choose to share chakra with him.
Weakness: The longer he is in animal state, the more he loses his human instincts and thoughts.
...that was fun. Good luck!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 07:32 pm · For: Prologue
Awesome! I wasn't sure if I could come up with a good enough character yet, but I will surely add one now. Great writing and great idea. This could fit perfectly into the storyline too. Who knows what all has happened in the narutoverse past?
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 01:33 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
Name: Hikaru Yukishima
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Village: Mist
Rank: Chunin
Romance: Tenten
Appearance: (here's the link)
http://rfyle119.deviantart.com/art/Ryutaro-Naruto-OC-RPC-190008841
Brief history: His mother's clan is the same as Haku's, and he was feared most of his life for his power. He's always tried to show people there's nothing about him to fear by acting like he sucks at all types of jutsu, just doing good enough to pass. Nobody knew his true power until he was sixteen, when he protected them from a group trying to take over the village.
Kekkai Genkai: Ice related moves
Special abilities: I guess that would be ice as well.... Oh, and he's good at gathering information.
Flaws: He over thinks things and holds back until the very end, meaning he can be dead before he goes full force.
Author's Response: Thank you for joining, I will be sure to portray your character as best I can =D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 12:23 pm · For: Prologue
Oh... my... gosh...
Amazing, just amazing. What an intense conference this was. I'm sure I've told you this before, but your writing is just incredible. You leave no room for flaws. This was great, and I can only imagine how the intros to the OCs will be. I really like the idea for this story, so I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much silverwolf! I am so excited to begin the story you have no idea. =) Hopefully I can have another chapter up later today or sometime tomorrow.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 11:55 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Darn it! I wanted first dibbs... *tear tear* Oh well, I will obviously join!
Jack Sparrow?! I call number six, definitely! :D
Name (first, last): Satoshi Kurotori
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Rank: Jounin
Village: Village Hidden in the Mist
Romance: Temari
Apparence/Style: He has spiky black hair with white highlights here and there. He has coal black eyes, but they are often filled with mischief and secrets. He has very tan skin. He usually wears a white shirt with a black jacket and black pants and black boots. He is very cunning, even though he gives off the clumsy behavior. People often underestimate his abilities due to his lazy and mysterious attitude. Some can never tell what he is thinking and if he is even someone to trust (even though he totally is a good guy XD).
Brief History: His parents abandoned him because they couldn't afford to take care of him, so he never knew his family. At the age of ten, he left his ratty orphanage to travel the world and learn knew things. He was never schooled in ninja arts, yet he has accomplished and mastered many jutsu, many of which he picked up on during his travels. At fifteen, he returned to the Mist Village to enlist as a ninja, and he traveled through the ranks up to jounin in the course of two years. He often likes to share epic stories of his travels, but he is filled with secrets, for he doesn't share stories of the dangerous things that he has seen.
Kekkei Genkai: none
Special Abilities: He has learned many techniques, but he became a master with pretty much all types of weapons. He even creates his own sometimes. He most reliable weapons are the double sword set strapped to his back.
Other (animal companion, side facts, anything I should know): Eh, whatever you want.
Author's Response: Great character, this is gonna be fun. I hope your character is portrayed the right way. Great info too, it'll be helpful. Hope you enjoy the story! =)
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 11:55 am · For: Prologue
Ooh this makes me really excited to see what is gonna happen in the next few chapters.
I can't wait for my character be in it! Join people i want the next chapter! Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks, only two more spots open too, so i'll be able to write another chapter soon =)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 11:54 am · For: Become Apart Of It
The stupid picture didn't show, so here's the link.
http://lala-mot.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-OC-Lala-160841890
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 11:54 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Not sure if should be on good or bad side:
Name: Tori Senshiro
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Rank: Chunin
Village: Leaf Village
Romance: Kiba
(Belongs to Lala-Mot of deviantart, incase I need a disclaimer for this)
If the picture doesn't show like it's been recently for me, sorry.
Appearance: She looks like the middle one, but she also has a sword.
Brief history: She lived in the land of waves but moved to the Leaf because their parents opened a repair shop there to fix anything. She had a mostly normal childhood. She went to the academy and was about the middle of the class. She prefers to use taijutsu and weapons. Shortly before she graduated, her mother and father died during a terrible fire in their repair shop. After that she and her brother became poor. The reason she's torn is because her brother, one of her favorite people in the world, has grown ill. I'm not sure if they actually can, but she believes the relics can heal him. She wants to get them back, but at times she wants to join the others so she can use its power.
Kekkei Genkai: She has a Storm chakra nature
Special abilities: She's great at combining her Storm chakra with her sword attacks.
Personality: She's a nice person unless you talk about her parents or brother. Then she starts to ignore you for a long time. She's slightly shy, but when she get to know you, she can be pretty talkative. She can be super smart at times, but at other times she's clueless about things. Despite how suckish her life is, she tries to stay up beat and not show the pain that's going on within her.
Flaws: Her Storm chakra tends to wear her out and she can't always control it. She tries to use either lightning or water mostly because of it, but she doesn't know any strong jutsus for those chakra natures. She's also very gullible.
If there's any problems with her, tell me and I'll fix it.
Author's Response: I'm excited for this. I looked at the image and it's all good. She fits the battle between good and evil very well, so this should be good. Can't wait to start writing about her =)
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 09:24 am · For: Become Apart Of It
For whatever reason, my email says your email doesn't exist, but the answer to your question is yes.
Author's Response: hmmm, odd..well thank you for letting me know =)
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 08:52 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Your character sounds really awesome. I think this is a cool idea too, I would like to join this story ^.^
Name: Ayame Hiwatari
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Rank: Chunin
Village: Sand
Romance: I don't really mind which one, but Gaara or Shikamaru.
Apparence/Style:
Brief History: Ayame is somewhat of a wander. She likes to travel and study many things, not much of a fighter, Ayame is more of a diplomatic person. She is part of a large clan that are experts in kenjutsu.
Kekkei Genkai: Lightening Release
Special Abilities: Kenjutsu
Other: not that I can think of.
I suppose I can be the character that is kind of useless, since my character isn't one for fighting.
Can't wait for the story to start!
Author's Response: Very pretty character choice and thank you very much for joining =) I will do my best to portray your character as you have described!
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 08:48 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Ohhh... purely evil...
Since you said you needed at least one male character as number six, I'll assume the evil one will be female.
Name: Rei (no known last name)
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Rank: Missing nin
Village: Hidden Leaf
Romance: Itachi Uchiha
Appearance(sorry, I can't figure out how to post pictures for the life o'me): Wears a tattered and cracked metal ANBU uniform with an ANBU mask broken in half covering her only her mouth. She has deep blue eyes and long orange hair(kinda red, but not Uzumaki red)
Personality: Mentally unstable and brutal. Mercy is a word she doesn't understand. Although mentally broken, she has a clear enough mind to fight like the ex-anbu she is.
Brief history: She was much like Sakura. When she first saw Itachi, she was infatuated with him, especially since they were both in ANBU. She would constantly watch him, and never strayed her eyes off him. When he murdered Shisui, she overlooked it, but after the massacre, and she saw his eyes, she was never the same.
Kekki Genkai: none
Special abilities: Nothing besides ANBU stuff like being neigh undectectible and stuff.
Other: Not really.
Author's Response: Awesome, awesome. Your character is gonna be a fun one to write and I hope you enjoy it. Being as that your character is going to portray the evil one I will email you an important question soon, so be sure to answer =)