Reviews For The Sacred Relics
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 02/06/11 - 07:13 am · For: Chapter Five
Short, but action filled.
I can't wait for the battle scenes to begin it's gonna be great.
Don't stop writing!
=D
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 07:53 pm · For: Chapter Five
Yay! Update!! =D
Wow,I could picture the demon so well, it gave me shivers.
Awesome job! It's amazing! So the demons are popping up everywhere. Very interesting. I love this story so far!
Even though it was a short chapter, thanks for the update!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 01:54 pm · For: Chapter Five
Yes, the chapter was short, but that didn't make the awesomeness any less there. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more. You have to write more soon or I may just die with anticipation. You're story is just that freaking awesome. Huh. I use awesome a lot.....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/05/11 - 10:19 am · For: Chapter Five
It was so epic! I'm just disappointed it ended. The explanation of the Mirror of Demons was pretty cool. I like how things are going so far. The plot is thickening, and I cannot wait for more! Keep up the great work with this story, this is just getting more and more amazing!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 09:13 am · For: Chapter Four
Awesome. Everything's getting interesting. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thank you very much i will try to get it up as soon as i can =)
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 08:45 am · For: Chapter Four
INTENSE! the action was so cool, i can't wait for the fight with that sea creature it's gonna be great. I wonder what will happen at the swamp.
write more soon!
Author's Response: that was what i was aiming fir
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 05:07 pm · For: Chapter Four
So much action, it was awesome! Great work, I really do love this story. This is so incredible, really! I can't help but enjoy this story so much. You have a gift for writing, really you do. Keep up the great work with your writing, this is pure awesomeness that I cannot even describe with a proper adjective except phenomenal.
Author's Response: thank you for the compliment and i'm glad you enjoyed the action
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/05/11 - 01:06 pm · For: Chapter Four
Holy crap! That was purely amazing. I can't believe you can write so good. I think I'm in love with your story it's so good. I can't wait to read more. I hope I can make Darkness Unleashed that good, but I highly doubt it. I'll just have to stick to reading your awesomeness then.
Author's Response: thanks for the sweet compliment
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:34 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
I made joint stories a challenge under my name. You can submit this to my challenge, it's called 'Joint Stories!'
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 06:46 pm · For: Chapter Three
So great! I love this story so much! This is going really good, you are introducing the OCs reall well. I love your writing, you are so talented! Pleaes, keep up the great job you have been doing thus far with this story. I really do love this!
Name: fleamichael (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 03:55 pm · For: Chapter Three
My character appeared! Sweet!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 02:09 pm · For: Chapter Three
I literally couldn't take my eyes off the screen. They hurt from not blinking. As I expected, it was perfect. One thing I noticed is the way you do site for sight. Just thought I'd point that out. I really loved how you wrote Tori. She was perfect. Then again, so is everyone else you write about. I hope you can update soon. This story is just plain amazing.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter Three
Yay! Another update today! I really like this story. Very suspenseful ending to this chapter.
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 11:41 am · For: Chapter Two
First off, Sasaui told me to put this so she wouldn't have to get back on an write another review. She says she thinks we should change our ocs' ages so they're closer to the actual characters. Hikaru's age is 19 and Tori's is 18. Okay, now to my actual review..... ??? I'm a bit confused. I'm not mad or anything, so don't think I am. Is Tenten going to be with Shoji or Hikaru? Other than that part confusing me, it was an AWESOME chapter. I loved the part with Ayame and Satoshi at the end. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Even though my character wasn't in this, I loved seeing the way you made the characters. Your writing skills are absolutely amazing!
Author's Response: The story is barely beginning, characters still need to develop and bond with everyone around them. So don't be confused just keep reading everything will fall into place, I promise. And okay about the age change, since it hasn't been mentioned it's not that big of a deal. Thank you for all the reviews you have left I hope you will continue to enjoy this story.rn
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 11:34 am · For: Chapter One
So. Freaking. AWESOME!!! Those are the only things I can think of to explain this chapter. Hikaru was awesome! Heck, this chapter was awesome. I'm saying awesome a lot, huh? Not only was Hikaru awesome, but so was Kanami. She seems to be a very interesting character that I want to get to know.
Name: krina (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 11:28 am · For: Prologue
That was amazing. I loved every second of it. It was so amazing that I couldn't take my eyes off the page.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 09:28 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Just wanted to let you know that you can change your ocs rank. The start of the story has changed a bit.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:55 am · For: Become Apart Of It
I love it! It's awesome. I really liked how you brought in Shoji. And with Tenten who was my first choice. ;)His personality you portrayed was perfect for his character! Great job!
Keep updating please!!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:47 am · For: Chapter Two
Yay! My character has been introduced. I loved the pirate thing that was a good idea. Very awesome idea going on here, I wish I was that creative. I can't wait until more of the story is revealed!
Keep on writing, Bee, it's really great work.
And very nice introduction to the Leaf ninja, I can't wait to see what there mission is going to be like!
Name: NinjaLover (Anonymous) · Date: 24/05/11 - 07:44 am · For: Become Apart Of It
Even though I can't be a part of this story, I think it's really good. Your writing is very descriptive.
Good work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 05:47 am · For: Chapter Two
That was just plain amazing. I love the way you introduce all of the characters. It's fantastic. I only hope I can do a job as good as you. It's amazing. After seeing the amazing job you're doing with everyone else's characters, I can't wait for mine to introduced.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/05/11 - 03:54 am · For: Chapter Two
Yay! The official intro to Satoshi, he is so cool! Of course, whenever I hear about him, I just think about how he is like Jack Sparrow, and of course, I get all giddy ;D
Haha, I saw pirates, and of course, I was just like Pirates of the Caribbean!
Nice intro to the Leaf ninja. It's nice to see how Naruto has grown up. And Tenten is no longer a tomboy, which is quite a nice change... especially for Shoji ;)
I think all of the OCs are portrayed really well, from what I have seen from the reviews that were submitted for OC roles. Good job on writing the characters. I really like this story, this is just great. Keep up the good work, and I hope to see an update soon!
Name: enchanted_ninja_girl (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 05:33 pm · For: Chapter One
The first part with Kanami was awesome! I loved it!
And Sasuke and Itachi together in the Leaf!? That's brilliant, can't wait to see where this story goes and I can't wait for all the characters to meet.
Keep on writing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 02:11 pm · For: Become Apart Of It
Well, I've been forgetting a lot of things this week, including another question. In the site you sent me for your character, it shows a lot of characters, so which one is her?
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 02:08 pm · For: Chapter One
Okay, just so I know for certain, what's up with Sasuke and Itachi being at the Leaf? Other than that, everything was perfect to me story wise. I hate saying I saw mistakes, but I did. They were mainly grammatical mistakes at the end. I hate saying that because if it wasn't for that, the chapter would be absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read more of it. Please post more soon. Oh, and thanks for sending in a character, since I forgot to say so before!
Author's Response: I saw the mistakes in in, I was talking to someone while I was writing, so I wasn't completely focused, but I'll be fixing them right after I write this response. =)rnrnThis is a bit of an alternate story from the anime, this is kinda like a what if Itachi and Sasuke came back and what if all these characters didn't die...it's an alternate ending kind of thing. Hope that makes sense.rnrnAlso I tried to explain my character better. Anyways thanks for the comments, hope you enjoy the rest of this story!