Reviews For Son of the Snake: The Early Years
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 06:09 pm · For: Epilogue
So that's why they wore purple...... But it's true that love can drive people to do things that otherwise they (hopefully) wouldn't. And then you add Yuukimaru becoming a Jinchuriki. Sheesh, you certainly know how to throw in good twists. I can't wait to see how that will effect the upcoming story. As for the sequel, I can't wait for it. I'll wait for it, though. Trust me on that.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 06:01 pm · For: Chapter 10 The Finale Part 2!
Wow. Just wow. I can't even think of what to say. That part with Saichiro and everything left me speechless. It was just mind-blowing. I can't believe anyone could create something so awesome. You must have been really looking forward to writing that part. And you made my heart squeeze when he said Mommy. If Anko hadn't kept him after that, I would have gone into your story and slammed her head against a brick wall. And now Yuukimaru's gone. It's so sad. But he's right. Saichiro can (hopefully) take care of himself. And then the end had me thinking it was Orochimaru, but I could be completely and totally wrong in every single way. Either way, I so loved it and I can't wait until the sequel. I still have the epilogue, but still, after that, nothing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 05:51 pm · For: Chapter 9: Finale Part 1!
I'm wanting to huge every single one of those purple weirdos at the same time I want to kick their butts. I had a huge smile on my face when I read the last line. And the line before that had me so.... Well, at first freaked because of the part of them interfering with her prey. But then the part about her affection for Orochimaru completely got rid of that freaked-out part of me. This chapter was just down right amazing. You nailed Anko's..... well, to me, sadistic nature, and then showed a part of her that people rarely ever see. I just absolutely loved it.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 05:43 pm · For: Chapter 8(interlude)
Have you not done enough to Saichiro? And people say I'm mean to my ocs. Well, never mind, since, well, I can't say. I guess I am meaner, even though nobody knows why as of now....... Sorry, I was rambling a bit. This chapter was amazing. Anko's reaction exactly as people would expect, but then you make it surprising by throwing in the part about her killed a 4 year old. And I really hope that either Yuukimaru doesn't have to leave or he at least gets to say goodbye.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 18/09/11 - 05:35 pm · For: Chapter 7
...... Well, I found out her reaction. It was realistic, but dang, was she angry. It kinda makes me scared about what will happen to him. It's the same thing they did with Naruto. Hating him because of something he couldn't control (such as being a Jinchuuriki. You can't control your blood any easier). And then you have them taking away Yuukimaru! Are you serious? Just how cruel can you be to him when he's only 4. Either way, I loved it. This chapter was amazing despite its cruelness toward Saichiro. Now I can't wait to see what will happen with both Saichiro and becoming part of Kakashi and Anko's family or if Yuukimaru will be sent away. And then you have that ending. I mean, seriously, you make in impossible not to read on with that being the end of the chapter.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/09/11 - 06:19 pm · For: Chapter 6
Wow. That was absolutely amazing. First you begin with that wonderful, including both humor and add in that needed serious stuff. I really liked the end with Kakashi's distress over Anko coming back. After everything Orochimaru did to her, what's she going to do when she finds out she's his son's new mom. And then you threw in the parts with Kabuto and the worshiping people. Overall this was just amazing.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 15/08/11 - 08:15 pm · For: Chapter 5
Yeah, it does suck that you lost your inspiration for Monster to Monster. Oh well. I guess that means you'll be writing this more then, huh? It was a great chapter. You did an amazing job. I expected the Anko and Saichiro thing, but I must admit, the whole Yamato thing did surprise me. That's just cruel, having his mom die and his brother and him being separated. Oh well, it is your story. And there would be no fun if writers were nice to their characters. I really want to see where this is heading. The organization is really interesting me, and was that Kyuubi during that one part? If so, I can't wait to see what's going to happen for that, either.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/11 - 04:53 am · For: Epilogue
Ooh, an epilogue!
*reads through quickly*
Wow, we actually get to learn about this evil cult that was hunting down Saichiro. Interesting...
Oh, and wow, Yuukimaru is now going to be a Jinchuuriki... I wonder how he'll be able to deal with that....
Oh man, this story is over :( That's so saddening.... Oh well, I look forward to the sequel, but no rush, obviously. Whenever is perfectly fine :D
This was an awesome story. Excellent job with this. Keep up the fantastic work with your writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 08:54 pm · For: Chapter 4: Interlude
Oh great. Now there lunatic that took Orochimaru's place has joined the story. I can't wait to see how this plays out. The fact he has a child of his own now is going to be interesting. So wouldn't he and Saichiro be partly brothers since Orochimaru's DNA is in Kabuto? And wait, immortal human? How'd he pull that one off? Man, more questions!
Haha. You did that first scene perfectly. It seems like how things in a normal life would really go. And once again, Saichiro was adorable!!!
Author's Response: They're kinda brothers... but... I can't say anymore or else I'll ruin the plot for the final story in the series. I really wish I could tell you the answers to your questions, but if I did I'd pretty much spoil a lot of it! Thanks for the reviews!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 08:22 pm · For: Chapter 3: Planning Ahead
Oh man! So many questions. What curse was on the doctor? Who are the strange robed people? What is the Zura Village? Why Iwa? I must know! Well, if there's one thing I can say, it's that your story keeps me asking questions. It's amazing and great with detail. It's also very creative. I loved this chapter. You did an amazing job! Now I'm left wondering if the doctor is part of that group...... Sorry. That was just another question about this that popped into my mind.
Author's Response: Haha! Its fine! Your questions make me think myself, because I might forget something I meant to write.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 07:33 pm · For: Chapter 2: Matters of Time
Ahh. Saichiro is so cute. Wait wait wait. WHAT! You're going to have Guren die? That just isn't right. First you make Saichiro his son, and now you're taking away his mother? That's just plain cruel. Then again, if you knew what I did to my ocs, you would probably say the same to me, so..... Okay, back to your story. It was amazing. Once again you've got me wondering about this Carnithia person and her worshipers. Then you throw in the fact that Anko can't have children. I think I see where's that parts going, but still, you're just putting everyone through sadness, aren't you? Either way, whether sad or happy, this was awesome. I loved every second of it. Great job!!!
Author's Response: Yep, I like putting people through hardships and stuff like that. Tragedy makes for a good story, methinks.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 07:15 pm · For: Chapter 1: First of Tragedies
Wow. This is an amazing chapter. I have to ask what made you think of doing a fanfic with Orochimaru's son. And I, for one, have to shudder at the thought because thinking of Orochimaru's always creeps me out. If you couldn't tell, I'm not Orochimaru's number one fan. Saichiro seems great, though, even if he's only one. I can't wait to find out about these organization people. I also want to find out what Saichiro's life will be like since he's Orochimaru's son.
Author's Response: I have no idea where it came from. Probably seeing some fanfiction somewhere about Kabuto being Jiraya's illegitimate son. I'm not gonna lie, though. I'm not his number one fan either. Anyway, thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/11 - 08:50 pm · For: Chapter 10 The Finale Part 2!
O_O
What an ending... Best way to finish this up. Great work. Everything was so believable, between the fight and the breakthrough of powers and the adoption and the... just everything.
I loved this entire story, great work. It's so sad to see that it's over...
WAIT! Is there a sequel?! Since it's only the early years and all, should we expect a new one soon? It's alright if you're taking a break, I'm just wondering.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will be a sequel that goes through the genin-chunin-jounin years, then a third one to wrap them all up.rnI will be making a sequel, but it won't come as fast as this one did.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/08/11 - 04:35 am · For: Chapter 9: Finale Part 1!
Oh my gosh! These last two chapters were so amazing! I love Anko's reaction to Saichiro, it's realistic and understandable. And then when these guys started attacking her, Anko showed her determination to fight and then her deep feelings for her old sensei that have suddenly been transported to Saichiro. It's all so great!
This is really awesome. I think this story is really creative on a whole different level, and I love how well you've written it. Awesome job! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/08/11 - 06:58 pm · For: Chapter 7
You're so evil! How could you do that to Yuukimaru and Saichiro?!
Anko doesn't want him as her son, and Yuukimaru has to leave! This is all so terrible!
Though I do commend you on some very well thought out plot twists, they really stand out with realistic problems and accurate portrayals of characters. Great job! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Rainbow Fire (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 06:44 pm · For: Chapter 6
Wow! I love the idea of a story centering around Orochimaru's son. That's so different. I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 06:24 pm · For: Chapter 6
Yay!!! Can not wait until Anko comes, that will be fun. While reading this, I had a vision Anko coming home to find a mini Kakashi, lol. I can not wait to see what happens, and what you will do with this. Until then...
Author's Response: You probably know this by now, but the new chapter is up.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/11 - 06:18 pm · For: Chapter 6
Aw, Saichiro and Kakashi are already so cute as son and father :)
Hehe, Naruto's reaction was hilarious, I love that orange blob of energy :D
I really can't wait to see how Anko reacts to Kakashi bringing home a kid, especially Orochimaru's kid. I'm excited to see what she does.
This was awesome, it was really well-written. It was funny and suspenseful all at once! Keep up the great work!
Oh, and no rush with the updates. Whenever you get them out will be awesome :D
Author's Response: Thanks as always!
Name: Doppelganger10K (Signed) · Date: 03/08/11 - 12:07 pm · For: Chapter 5
this was an awesome story! but i would have liked it better if a put in some chapters with saichiro and yuukimaru growing up as ninja, honing there nija skills and going on missions and stuff like that (im kind of an action junky so dont take mine T0 seriously)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, but its far from over. Saichiro is around 4 or 5, and Yuukimaru hasn't become a ninja yet. rnrnUnfortunately, there will only be one more update before school starts, and then the chapters will come much slower, but thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 08:32 pm · For: Chapter 5
Wow, it's nice to see this story up and running :D Though I'm sorry to hear that you've lost inspiration for Monster to Monster. That's alright, motivation comes and goes.
But this was really good. The emotions really are showing through each of the characters. I really like how you write the characters; they really are coming out nicely. And of course, the plot is just wonderful.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you as always!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/05/11 - 05:50 pm · For: Chapter 4: Interlude
Haha, nice opening scene. So realistic and yet so funny. Poor Yuukimaru, the pain of adolescence lies heavily on his shoulders.... And yet again, Kabuto continues to be a maniac, which is still very frightening.
Nice job. Even though it was short, you really set the two scenes very nicely. Of course, now I want to see the major, plot bringing, catch-up ending chapter. So I hope you update very soon! Nice work with this!
Author's Response: I hope I can update soon to, but it most likely won't be for another two weeks since I'll be out of town with no internet. :/
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/05/11 - 05:30 pm · For: Chapter 3: Planning Ahead
*nods head* Mmhmm, much better than the previous story. I know I keep saying that, but I really feel that it is true. This scene with the doctor caught me by surprise, but it was epic anyway. And it actually helps with the flow a bit, giving reasons why Guren should not send her kids to Iwa. This is going very well, good job! The description is great and the insight is so amazing!
Ah, pictures. Here, I'll give you a link to a site that saved my life when it came to using this fanfic site :)
http://www.opendiary.com/help/writing_in_your_diary/html_tags_and_how_to_use_them.htm
If you have any questions, just ask!
Anyways, keep up the great work with this incredible story!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the reviews! Without you reviewers, I probably wouldn't have ever written any more than a few chapters in the Two Eyes, and never finished the story.rnrnThanks for the image thing too. It works, but the picture isn't showing up. Not a big deal though.
Name: cvhoneybee (Signed) · Date: 23/05/11 - 10:38 am · For: Chapter 2: Matters of Time
OH! The end of this chapter, poor Anko...love Kakashi and Anko, good job.
=)
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 07:49 pm · For: Chapter 1: First of Tragedies
Once again, very good. this one was so much better than the last one. Have i ever told you that I love Kakashi/Anko? They are my fave pairing. All my stories have them. Go you!
Author's Response: Thanks as always.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/05/11 - 12:39 pm · For: Chapter 2: Matters of Time
Oh yeah, very nice. As I said, I think this one is better than the original. I feel like there is more description and emotions in this one. You're showing more insight for this, so I think this one has more flow. Well done, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, as always.