Reviews For RageQuit
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 06:55 pm · For: The Konoha Maze
Aw, I always feel pity for little Naruto. Poor guy.
I really like your style of writing. It's fun to read about. Nice job! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 07:39 pm · For: Naruto Appears!
So I'm assuming Naruto didn't graduate yet? Or maybe he just did? That was just a little confusing, but everything else was pretty awesome! I love your sense of humor, it really helps the story with its comedic relief. Nice job! I can't wait for more hilarity!
Name: lilmissmindy (Signed) · Date: 01/07/11 - 10:51 am · For: Mental Meltdown
She should pretend she physic and hrlp them out.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/06/11 - 08:12 pm · For: Mental Meltdown
Wow..... Wow..... Wow......
You write this story so realisticly. It's definitely not something random, I can tell you put a lot of thought into playing out the scenes correctly, and you did very well with it! This was an awesome chapter, it's going very well so far. Awesome! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks, but I'm gonna be honest right now, I kinda make them up as I go along, I just like to see where the story's gonna wind up. Anywho thanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/06/11 - 05:30 pm · For: The Shinobi Gate
*jaw drops* There are no other words to say except....
THIS WAS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!
I loved every moment of it! It was so good! Keep up the amazing work, this was completely and utterly phenomenal! Incredible! Excellent! Fantastic! Some other positive adjectives that I can't think of are so worthy of this chapter, great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/06/11 - 09:44 am · For: Weirdest birstday ever part 4
Oh man, the soldiers after one of them. Mike is the obvious choice, but I just have that weird feeling that says it's Krystal... Maybe I'm just weird...
Wow, even in dangerous situations, there was a slight bit of humor. Mike makes such cheap shots at trying to get his family to walk. Hehe, oh well, at leat they are heading to safety. But I wanna know where that is!
Keep up the great work with this story! This is going really well! I'm very excited for more of this!
Author's Response: Yeah well then keep reading, Im not spoiling the surprise yet pal.
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 07:58 pm · For: Weirdes birthday ever part 3
Nick sounds cool. I have an uncle like him, haha. He's awesome and he's obsessed with COD. Lol :P
Whoa. That was awesome. I was so into this chapter. I kind of expected more of a quake with the first rocket, but other than that, this chapter was soo intense. It was terrific! Update soon!!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 20/06/11 - 07:49 pm · For: Weirdest birthday ever pt 2
Hahaha, at the part where she was like, 'Maybe it's ninjas?' cracked me up. The other day, I went rafting with some friends and there was a stick poking out of the water. My friend was all like 'It's a ninja! It's breathing underwater!'
Awesome characters, so far, so good!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/06/11 - 12:08 pm · For: Weirdes birthday ever part 3
O__O
Yeah, that was my face when I realized that the chapter had already ended.
That was so epic!!!!! I never saw that scene coming, it was amazing. Scary, obviously, but you wrote it so well, I actually thought it was a scene from a movie. It was THAT good. Each sentence flowed right into the next, it was incredible. Great work, I'm very thrilled with this chapter. Keep up the great work, this was completely and totally amazing.
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 06:35 pm · For: How it all starts.
Great Story! You are such a great writer! Keep it up!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 02:09 pm · For: Weirdest birthday ever pt 2
Haha, I really do like her and her family life. It's freaking hilarious! The bit in the basement scared the crap out of me, and then I found out it was her uncle. So I relaxed :D Great work on developing her family life so well. A lot of fics with modern day characters don't start out with this much insight into the person's real world life, so I think it is a good idea to provide this sort of background before the major plot happens. Well done, nice job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 11:47 am · For: Weirdest birthday ever
Oh yeah, the site went down, so some of the stories were lost. Disappointing, I like this one. Well, I do like the narrator's point of view. Very casual yet very informative and personal. I look forward to more. Keep up the good work with your writing, and sorry about your missing chapters. That sucks...
Author's Response: Like I always say: S**t happen'srnAnd thanks fo the review.
Name: Greatest kitten EVA!! (Anonymous) · Date: 12/06/11 - 10:52 am · For: Weirdest birthday ever
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!! NOOOOO!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 09:28 am · For: Weirdest birthday ever
hmm... did you have to redo this? Well, whatever. This was really good. :D
Author's Response: Yeah I did.rnI took a break from writing and when I came back, the whole story was blank!
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 07:22 pm · For: How it all starts.
You might want to spell check it. I found a few typos. And BTW the last part is italicized. I don't know if it was like that purposely or what, but just letting you know.
Anyway, I thought it was great so far! Really interesting. I like these kind of stories.Assassin's Creed? I LOVE that game!! Haha, I love playing the PS3 too!
Author's Response: Yeah' I really don't have the best track record with grammar, so I think I'll do a little editing.rnThanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 07:14 pm · For: How it all starts.
Ah, not bad. A little insight to the person's life is always a good start, so this was pretty good. It was really funny, actually. I'm glad it's in first person, because I like hearing her thoughts. It's quite interseting, really. I hope there is some plot development in the next chapter, since this was short, which upset me a little. I hope you update soon. Good work with this!
Btw, you forgot to cancel the italics after the Futurama reference, making the rest of the page italicized.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was kinda having wirters block for this chapter so it's not that unexpected. And on the Itallics thing, I'll get to work fixing it.rnAgain, thanks.