Reviews For RageQuit
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/08/11 - 01:00 pm · For: Gault
Oh, I wonder what other kind of story you will write :D
I loved Krystal's training. The idea of Gault just sounds so sci-fi and fun! I really loved the creativity of it.
Nice job with this chapter! Keep up the awesome work with your writing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/08/11 - 08:44 pm · For: The Professor
Oh... my goodness...
I'm so impressed that you actually brought back stuff from her past into the story. Many writers don't talk about that, and I'm so proud that you did. This woman from her past sounds awesome, and I wonder how she will affect Krystal's life now. This is so cool! Keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/08/11 - 12:41 pm · For: Disappearance.
O_o
What is up with that mysterious woman?! Why did Krystal follow her and what will she find?! Oh my goodness, I'm so left in suspense now.
Awesome job with this chapter, your writing is really improving with the description and everything. Keep up the great work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/08/11 - 07:46 am · For: The Ninja of the Mist
Wow! That was a very epic battle! Impressive abilities you created, I really like how you designed the twins. And it was even cooler how it ended up just like the original fight between Team 7 and Zabuza. That's really original, I really enjoyed this chapter. The whole description about he organization was so mysterious and suspenseful. I really like how you're writing this story; you're not exactly following the storyline, but instead you're making it yours. Great job on this entire chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 01:53 pm · For: The twins
Ooh, names, I love names!
They are the Hinode (Sunrise) brothers. The black-haired one's name can be Yakan (nighttime) and the white-haired one's name can be Hiruma (daytime). How's that?
Anyway, awesome chapter! You really have me in suspense (in a good way) by changing up the characters. It's so different. And I really like it. The way you have created the characters is amazing, and their abilities are so cool. Your description is getting better and better, and it's really paying off. Great work. This is getting very good. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, you know I've actually been sick with a cold for the past few days so I was worried it would affect my writing. And thanks for the names too, I'm still going to wait for more names though, just in case.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/11 - 12:26 pm · For: The Bridge Builder
Whoa, that was impressive! These ninja seem to be from a different village, I wonder how this will all tie in. I loved the originality in this, it was excellent.
I also like your new approach to writing, as you really are progressing with the description feature. Great work! I can't wait to see what else you come up with!
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you like the new direction. It's dificult for me describe in words what's in my head so I'm trying my best to get that fixed. Also on the subject of those rogue ninja, Kakashi mentions twice that he thinks they could just be rogues putting on a trick, so don't think right away that they will be from a diferent village, try to keep an open mind, heh heh. And a word of warning, there will be many refrences to other animes in the next few chapters, and a shitload of plot twists. Just wanted to sweeten the pot there for ya.
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 06:02 am · For: Naruto Appears!
awesome
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 05:52 am · For: Mental Meltdown
me likey~
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 05:35 am · For: The Shinobi Gate
squueeee~~ erhm eh good story he he he
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 05:03 am · For: Weirdest birstday ever part 4
war at hand with a bunch of lazy bums thats not good
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 04:54 am · For: Weirdes birthday ever part 3
Anna: is she okay?
Me: of course she's okay she's the main character, good story by the way
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 04:41 am · For: Weirdest birthday ever pt 2
i'm liking ya writing style
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 04:31 am · For: Weirdest birthday ever
ooh things are getting interesting nice
Name: a odd little girl (Anonymous) · Date: 07/08/11 - 04:20 am · For: How it all starts.
good at least so far i liked it
Name: kitsune2477 (Signed) · Date: 01/08/11 - 09:48 am · For: How it all starts.
Good story can't wait for more update soon!!!!!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/07/11 - 06:20 am · For: Plan Z... I love plan Z
Ooh, I liked this chapter. All the strategies were good, and the twists went well too. And of course, Kakashi remained in character with his comments throughout, and then when he surprised them about passing. Good job.
Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/11 - 06:44 pm · For: Training Day
Eh, the genin were a bit OOC, as I doubt they would be willing to work together so easily in the beginning.
But it was a pretty good strategy, and now that they retrieved the bell, I'm even more impressed that Kakashi is actually giving more time to get the final bells. Interesting twist. Good creativity ;D
Author's Response: Eh, a little OOC isnt a bad thing. It adds a bit of flavor,just as lang as its kept to an acceptable level.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 12:10 pm · For: Life's a bitch
I seriously just love Krystal's reaction to everything. Whenever she makes a comment about the plot, I just smile. The last sentence made me laugh :D
Wow, Krystal's going to have it rough with Team 7. I wonder what will happen to her. And I wonder where Derek is?
Anyways, keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 09:25 am · For: A little too much action
Wow! I liked your spin on things! With Krystal in the action, you helped make the plot somewhat your own. Good work! And I loved the ending, such a funny way to end the chapter ;)
Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/11 - 11:00 am · For: Exams Suck
Yay, they both passed! That's awesome for them. Can't wait to see what other cool ninja stuff they'll do.
Haha, the bit with Naruto and the video game made me smile, I just think it was cute. And wow, I wonder how Krystal will stop Naruto. That will definitely be something exciting.
Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 - 04:12 pm · For: Floodling
Hmm, they're really progressing, aren't they? I feel it is a little fast to be using chakra so well for a first time, but your writing and humor still totally entertain me. Great work. I can't wait for more, keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 07:15 pm · For: Silber
Wow, Carmen's still sore, huh? It's kinda sad, I hope it doesn't break the family up.
Aw, poor Naruto :( Him and his silly antics, still gotta love the kid ;)
Nice job so far! Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/11 - 12:12 pm · For: Brutality
Aw, look at what this hard work has done to them. Eh, at least they were able to somewhat complete their exercises.
I can't wait to see how they do with chakra exercise :D
Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/11 - 05:47 pm · For: A Ninja's Choise.
Wow, I loved Krystal's reaction to Carmen. It's somewhat expected, but your flare makes it more interesting to read. I also liked how Derek wanted to do it as well, as the little marine. And private tutoring, wow! Can't wait to see the sensei and how their training will go. Interesting...
Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 10:22 am · For: Installation Complications
Ooh, she wants to be a ninja? Cool! The encounter with Ino and Sakura was hilarious, it's just like the anime but it seemed a bit more real since Krystal was there to describe it. And the nightmare was a nice touch; I look forward to how that will play into effect with the story.
Awesome job! Keep up the great work!