Reviews For RageQuit
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/11/11 - 01:22 pm · For: Mr.Invincible
Hahahahaha, this chapter had some of the greatest lines I've ever seen in it. Great comedy, mixed in with some great action. I absolutely loved it. Awesome job on this, I really liked it.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 17/11/11 - 01:24 pm · For: Reverb trumps Pressure Wave
Wow Derek, way to be concerned about chur sis. And Logan you ass where are you?
Lol lovin the update! More please :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/11/11 - 03:18 pm · For: Reverb trumps Pressure Wave
Epic fight! Krystal's guitar really astounds me all the time, what with the awesome powers and all. Though with her out of the action now, I wonder how things will go. I am interested in seeing more of Derek's moves and such. I'm eager to see what kind of training he's been up to. And where the heck is Logan? I'm expecting a big dramatic entrance from him for being MIA in the first place ;D Great chapter, I loved the fight scene. Keep up the amazing work with your writing!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 11/11/11 - 10:02 am · For: Overlord jutsu?
Lol I love this story
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/11/11 - 05:41 pm · For: Overlord jutsu?
Hmm, so Logan does have a heart. He saved Sasuke ;) I don't know, I'm starting to like him. I don't think he was too powerful with Orochimaru, all he did was block an attack. Though I know he's a lot more powerful than that, so I'm looking forward to seeing his attacks firsthand.
And I am very surprised at seeing that Sasuke does not get the curse mark. I don't know if you're just prolonging the process or if he is really safe from Orochimaru, but I am quite happy to hear that Sasuke's alright for now at least.
And since these two mysterious squads are chatting together, I'm waiting for some intense action coming soon. Can't wait for that ;D
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/11 - 02:46 pm · For: Whos going out with who?
Haha, this was the most hilarious scene ever! I love Logan and Krystal bickering, and with Derek in there as well, it makes for a nice team chemistry ;)
Then when the other team showed up, my gosh, it was just funny when they continued the joke.
Great chapter, can't wait for more. Keep up he awesome work!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 09:59 pm · For: Fireproofing a human being
O.O
Wahoo update!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 22/10/11 - 05:17 pm · For: Fireproofing a human being
Uh... oh jeez... I really don't know what Logan's powers are. Isn't he a mutant though? A scientific experiment? I'll just say that's my reason :P
But wow, that was still an amazing battle! Sasuke was bested by the rookie of the rookies.
And what is with this Katashi guy talking to Krystal? What a creeper...
Great job on this chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 22/10/11 - 10:57 am · For: The Citadel's Ninja Team
Haha, I love this story so much :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/10/11 - 11:57 am · For: The Citadel's Ninja Team
Dang, the Citadel, huh? Well, this is certainly getting interesting. I wonder what you'll include them in :P
And Logan? Holy crap, I don't know if it's a good or bad thing that he's on Krystal's team...
Awesome chapter! Now I can't wait for the written test!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 15/10/11 - 11:25 pm · For: Newcomer: Logan...
This keepa getting more and more interesting :D Make your chapters longer though!
Author's Response: Sorry I've been brain dead for the last few days. I'll try and make a better chapter next time.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/10/11 - 08:28 pm · For: Newcomer: Logan...
Dang! And you were so worried about the Chuunin Exam arc. I loved the creativity of this, it already seems really interesting. I definitely want to read more about Logan, especially if Prof created him. Ah, suspense, I can't stand it! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/11 - 07:42 pm · For: King Caboose
Haha, I actually found this ending really funny. The beginning was fairly entertaining, as I felt really bad for Krystal and her sleep deprivation. But hey, glad to see you have figured out how to handle the Chuunin Exams.
Oh, and in response to your response, don't worry about Battle Stadium (or BS as I've been calling it, lol), because I'm behind that as well. Darn lack of writing time!
Anyway, nice comedy, I always enjoy reading your humor. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: To be honest the past few chapters have really just been filler until I start the chunin exams. Speaking of which I need to rewatch those episodes, so I can get an idea on what NOT to put in.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/11 - 06:07 pm · For: Stealth mode
Haha, I really enjoy reading this. Stealth Mode honestly sounds really cool and convenient. I wish I had that ability :( I'll try it later...
Yeesh, Naruto is so uptight. You'd think he'd be used to seeing something like this, as he's always overexerting himself. But, I guess he's just not used to seeing his friends like that. Oh well...
Anyway, nice job! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Trust me, It gets more convenient. Like I said though, Stealth Mode isn't easy, Took me days to figure out! Let me know how you do! Also I need to come up with something for Battle Statdium, I've been putting that off for way too long!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/09/11 - 07:08 am · For: Survival training round 2
Wow, Krystal's improving. Nice! Good for her :)
I wonder what will happen towards the end though. I sure hope she wins and kills all the clones...
Anyway, nice job! Krystal's current training has me wondering what Prof will have her do if/when she destroys the clones... Well anyway, keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/11 - 06:24 pm · For: How it all starts.
You know, there are plenty of fics who write their fourth character on their team anyway. They just make it as the exception. Or you can create new characters, maybe Prof has some connections ;) You would never have to kick someone off, everyone is certainly capable of going to the exams. It's just a matter of imagination. Does this help?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/09/11 - 02:19 pm · For: Clone rampage
Holy crap. Prof doesn't mess around, does she? The battle was extremely epic, I loved reading every moment of it. When Krystal's clone melted, I was seriously thinking that she had won. Guess not... Oh man, I wonder what is in store for the next chapter... Nice job! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yeah thanks. trust me though, prof will get even more brutal. By the way I have a bit of a dilema. I don't know what to do for the Chunin exams! Should I enter Krystal or not?! I know that only groups of three are allowed but I really want her in but I don"t want to kick a member from team 7 out! Please...helllp meeeee. * smacks head on desk and groans in frustration*
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/11 - 06:26 pm · For: The Prof strikes back!
Nah, let's say I was pestering you about it. I'm not one for patience, so pestering tends to happen anyways, directly and indirectly. Sorry if I ended up rushing you into describing Prof.
But I'm glad you did it anyway XD She's so creepy and strong that it's frightening sometimes, but then she has a sudden change of personality by laughing hysterically and such. I love it!
Ah, training now, huh? Yup, definitely excited for that particular arc ;) Keep up the awesome work!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 20/09/11 - 11:09 am · For: Enter Konohamaru
Soooo, is there a pairing in this?
And bwuahahaha Krystal makes me crack the eff up, I love her!
Please update soon, thanks! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 02:26 pm · For: Enter Konohamaru
Seriously, this professor really has me interested! I really want to learn more about her :) Other than the repetition of going through the mission and Konohamaru and Kankurou's appearances, I really liked it. Krystal's view on everything just makes me laugh sometimes. Keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/09/11 - 07:05 pm · For: Ichiraku
Foreshadowing, darn it! It's so brilliant, yet it annoys me to no end... Wait... fifteen to twenty more chapters?! Ugh...
Haha, the intro to Hinata was really sweet, I always love that shyness about her. Oh, and I wonder what Krystal will decide to do when it comes to the Chuunin Exams. That in itself is suspenseful.
Nice chapter! I continue to be engulfed in this story. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: nkbz (Signed) · Date: 11/09/11 - 04:07 pm · For: Naruto Appears!
I have to admit after skimming through the first chapter I skipped the rest until the group arrived in Naruto, and from what I have read so far the previous chapters haven't had an impact on the story which is good for me.
I was wary of trying to follow 4 OC's, but you handle it well and I enjoy the conversations between the characters. The story seems to be moving along smoothly without drama or dilemmas and everyone is buddy-buddy so far, which is alright for now but I want to get into the meat of the story since it has already been 8 chapters.
The story is nothing revolutionary but I enjoy it and will read more.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/09/11 - 03:18 pm · For: Return trip
Aww, don't say that about your story. It really is very good. People are honestly too lazy to review sometimes, but with that kind of read count, obviously people are reading. You should put it up on Your Predictions if you like. And Krystal could even go for Battle Stadium, since she has her epic new guitar now ;) It's alright if you don't want to do either, it's understandable.
Anyways, I know you said that you didn't like this chapter, but I feel like it was actually an important setup. It has a nice transition to it before the Chuunin Exams. I'm more interested in the Professor moving to the Leaf Village though. I really want to know more about her... and Hephaestus of course ;D
Nice chapter, I definitely look forward to more! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks, I needed that little pick-me-up. Yeah, I've been REEEAAALLY considering signing up Krystal for Battle Stadium. Like REEEAAALLY considering it. But reading some of the stories, I get the feeling she'd get destroyed...especially against Kasumi ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/11 - 05:40 pm · For: Aftermath
Aww, poor Krystal... I wonder how badly her sister will react...
I especially loved the bit about Nick humor. I agree, Naruto humor sounds a lot better.
Oh, I wonder when we will see Yakan again. This operation sounds kind of spooky, and I don't even know anything about it yet. But I can't wait to find out :D
Nice chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/11 - 05:43 pm · For: Guitar Girl
*claps hands excitedly* Bravo! This was amazing! I loved the battle scenes, they were so well done! Krystal's epic return was awesome, and her insane powers were just so cool! Naruto going berserk was brilliantly well done. This chapter was by far the greatest one so far. Excellent job! Keep up the amazing work, this chapter was really amazing!