Reviews For RageQuit
Name: bobbie (Anonymous) · Date: 17/08/13 - 05:27 pm · For: Payback
ummm so are you gonna finnish this ? still reading an want more more more. its great by the way ;)
Name: bobbie (Anonymous) · Date: 16/08/13 - 09:55 pm · For: The Ninja of the Mist
ha great twist, loving you arnt just following the same plot to the letter
Name: bobbie (Anonymous) · Date: 16/08/13 - 06:57 pm · For: Mental Meltdown
omg im lovin it so far
Name: Oni Nexus (Signed) · Date: 19/07/12 - 04:13 pm · For: Payback
great story! unique idea about the guitar weapon, and I like how things are somewhat different then canon, it really makes this stand out from the standard "Girl enters the narutoverse and joins team 7" fic. this is well writen, and I really look forward to the next chapter.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/12 - 03:02 pm · For: Payback
That was definitely an epic fight. A rematch between Yakan and Krystal, it was so great. I loved every bit of it. Great work on this. I'm looking forward to seeing how things play out since a lot of the original plot has already changed in this story. Keep up the good work.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/12 - 08:43 am · For: The Showdown of the Freaks
He was! Logan was freaking amazing in his fight! I loved it, it was so intense! And now that the dramatic part of the Chuunin Exams is about to start, I'm really excited. Especially since you added your own twist with the Citadel ninja. Good job on this chapter!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/12 - 11:39 am · For: Plans in motion
Ah... That was amazing! That's a great, no, freaking awesome jutsu! I love that new power, it's sick! I can't wait to see the final result after she perfects it. It'll be so cool. Good job on this chapter!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/04/12 - 05:28 pm · For: Quitting Quitters of Quittery
Oh my gosh, I can't believe she quit on Prof at the last minute! How the heck is she going to teach herself a new jutsu?! This is terrible, she has less than a week left! Gah!
I'm so looking forward to the next chapter now, please update soon! This little twist has definitely left me wanting more!
Name: Clover4SweetHoney (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/12 - 01:18 am · For: I Hate Guns
I can't wait for the next chapter! *_* you have a wonderful story here! I can't wait to read the rest when you post it :3 Krystal has really brought all fangirl's fantasies to life, and you write it beautifully! I'm addicted, please post more soon *_*
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 05:46 pm · For: I Hate Guns
Aww, poor Krystal. I kinda feel bad for her... well, sorta. I mean, I'm sure it'll all work out in the end for her with a kick-butt jutsu. Or it could all kill her... but hey, I'm trying for optimism! Nice action scenes, for both the silver clones and Anko (which was quite a surprise, honestly). Keep up the good work!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 24/02/12 - 04:44 pm · For: How it all starts.
Very interesting! your great at illustrating battle scenes, and I just want to see more, just don't take monthly breaks to often.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/02/12 - 08:07 pm · For: Weirdest birthday ever
Alright. You've got good material here, but you seem to be a bit more adept at third person point of view rather than first. Writing in first person point of view is pretty hard, and you've got to make sure what you're writing is engaging.
If my brother hid my books and tried to bribe me, I'd grab him, place him on my knee, and spank him to Kingdom Pain. Or, I'd proceed to his room and hold his most prized possession in perfect pitching form.
Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 06/02/12 - 07:56 pm · For: How it all starts.
Home? Is home the Naruto world? Prototype? Interesting.
Like da summary
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/02/12 - 07:35 pm · For: Weighted Fists
I had really liked the easy flow of this chapter. Even though it was on the longer side, it was a really easy read. It was fun to watch her train, and I personally like seeing how far Krystal has come since the beginning of this story. That also ties in with the ending, how she was thinking of how she just pretty much killed a human. It shows her growing strength and her maturity. I really enjoy the development.
Great chapter! I loved it!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/01/12 - 05:12 pm · For: Battleaxe
Short chapters kill me, but I just love this story so. :)
Is it bad that I kinda want Krystal to get it on with Logan? O.o
On second thought, don't answer that, just leave me to my illusions lmao
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/01/12 - 07:24 pm · For: Battleaxe
Nice jutsu! Prof and Krystal always have such kick-butt jutsu. It must be a modern day thing they share :P Anyway, I hope her training goes well, I can't wait to see Krystal suffer, haha! Keep up the good work with this!
Author's Response: Aw, your evil! Poor Krystal's gonna be in hell for the next three weeks! (To be honest I can't wait for it either, heh heh.)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/12 - 07:09 pm · For: Revelations
Wow... Mike's alive... Holy crap...
I also thought Krystal was going to tell her team about everything and they would believe her... guess not :P
Oh well... Great job on this chapter! Your story's originality continues to blow my mind with each new chapter!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/12 - 05:07 pm · For: The Dragon of Konoha
I like Derek's jutsu. It suits him, in my perspective anyway. And the fight was awesome, as always. Though I don't understand why the Citadel ninja would let Derek win, if that was the actual intention. Hmm, questions, questions...
Nice chapter! Keep up the good work, and good luck with college apps. Trust me, I know your pain :P
Name: rock-chick (Anonymous) · Date: 05/01/12 - 05:12 pm · For: Split personality disorder?
i am now addicted to this story
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 02/01/12 - 02:10 am · For: Split personality disorder?
Yay@ Finally got to the match I wanted to see woopwoop!
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Not to say you didn't write all the matches amazingly! Hehehe ^.^''
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 07:17 pm · For: Split personality disorder?
Hmm, Prof is definitely a very moody lady...
Anyway! Great fight! It's everything I expected and more! Krystal was awesome, just as I thought. The action was amazingly intense, I really enjoyed it. Nice job!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/12 - 03:16 pm · For: What in the hell is going on?
Keiko and Krystal?! Oh wow, I should have seen that one coming... how did I not? Hmm, it makes me wonder who Derek will fight... But until then, I cannot wait to see this upcoming battle! I'm so excited, this is like, the moment we've all been waiting for! Nice chapter, keep up the good work!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/12/11 - 08:30 pm · For: The Terminator Scenario
Holy flippping beezees! No wonder you're using the Terminator thing so much, Logan seirously is THE Terminator! It makes so much sense now...
That was freaking amazing! I'm starting to like Logan, even though I'm deathly afraid of him now...
Nice chapter! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: yes I felt like such a reaction was imminent. I still feel retarded as all hell for not making something more original though. Still, now that Logan's secret is revealed I'll try to use Terminator references as little as possible now...I hope.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 10/12/11 - 10:12 pm · For: The Third Round Begins
I wanna see Krystal's fight damnitt!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/11 - 09:47 am · For: The Third Round Begins
Have I mentioned I like Krystal's team? I don't know, I just really enjoy those three together. Then with the Prof mixed in, it's just a fun read. I really like your OCs, nice job ;)