Reviews For The Power of Pride
Name: Konan (Signed) · Date: 09/09/12 - 08:31 pm · For: Convincing
Really?! It erased up to chappy 15?! Ugh... how to fix this...? Maybe I'll end up re-writing this.. Maybe.
Author's Response: Will fix soon...i promise.
Name: Bailey (Anonymous) · Date: 02/02/12 - 08:51 am · For: What's a kid doing in the Uchiha District?!
Its good! Wow
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Demon Fox (Signed) · Date: 15/06/11 - 03:44 pm · For: Konohagakure
Wow, such a good story! My sister, silverwolf1213, told me to read this and I'm glad I did! :) It was so cool!
Author's Response: Im glad you liked it!! Thanks a bunch for reading and thanks even more for reviewing!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 05:12 pm · For: Father and Son
*sobs slightly* Seriously... I can't believe it's over! Wow, just wow... You really had me crying these past few chapters, but this tops it all. It was a beautiful ending, truly beautiful. The bond between father and son was marvellously illustrated in this chapter, I loved how you made their relationship evolve. I really can't give any more praise than what I have already given in previous chapters. You are a phenomenal writer with a great gift. Your writing is simply beautiful and poetic. I loved every moment of this story, and while I am very sad to see it end, I'm glad you made it end here. There really wasn't a better way to end such a great story. Great, great work! Please keep up the good work with your writing. I look forward to reading whatever you post.
Author's Response: This was actually my first finished fanfic. I'm really really happy you enjoyed it and reviewed it all. I can't thank you enough for all your support and advice. Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I'm glad you like my writing and thanks again. I'll probably start another story maybe in five days or so... I'm going on another trip to a college for a few days, but I've got an idea in mind.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/11 - 05:11 pm · For: Tears
*sniffles* Hmm, okay, give me, like, another hour....
*lets all the tears fall*
*sniffle* Okay, okay, I think I'm done. That was.... oh gosh, here come the tears, it was beautiful to hear Naruto's speech about Sasuke. Three times the charm, huh? You definitely did fantastic with this speech. I'm not too sure what else I can say without crying again. All I know, is that this is the best post-Naruto story I've ever read, and if Kishimoto-sama ever wrote a post-Naruto series, it should go like this.
Oh gosh, listen to me ramble on. And there's about one more chapter left. I'm sure it'll leave me in tears, but I definitely needed to say all of that. Please, keep up the great work with your writing, and I absolutely cannot wait to see how you finish out this story.
Author's Response: Aww thanks for all your amazing reviews. I'm still thinking about my next story. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 06:35 pm · For: Apology
That.... That's it?! He... He died?! Just like that! *pounds head against the table* I don't believe it! It was so saddening! And yet... hold on, give me a minute....
Yup, sorry for the delay. I was just contemplating how I would imagine post-Naruto in a scenario such as this.
Sadly, this is exactly how I see it. And it is very creative and talented of you to make such an ending for Sasuke like this. It's very fitting. Depressing, obviously, but very suitable.
A couple more chapters, huh? Can't wait to see how you bring this story to a close. Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. And yeah, this ending took a lot of thought for me. Thanks for all your support!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/11 - 09:41 am · For: Mystery Unveiled
Wait, what? It's almost over?! Why?! It's so good though!
I really loved this chapter, it was definitely one of the best. I like how Sasuke and Naruto were finally able to have a decent conversation. It's about time! And Sasuke and Sakura were able to talk as well, which was great for them. Breakthrough, yay! Everything is going good between the ninja now. Well, except for the fact that Sasuke is dying. He's dying! Seriously, he's dying?!
But I really did like this chapter. Excellent work. I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Keep up the great work with this story!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think I'm going to end this soon and work on a new one. Awesome, I'm glad you like it! And yeah, I kind of explained it, but yeah, he's dying. Thanks for the review!! Actually, for all your reviews!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/11 - 04:52 pm · For: Confrontation
Best chapter ever so far. Amazing. So intense, but still awesome. I like what you did with this. And to think you were unsure of what to do. Pfft! This was an incredible chapter. Hinata's point of view provided a crazy twist of insight for Sasuke and the reader. and it was also kind of disheartening, or at least for how I felt for Hinata. Poor girl. And poor Naruto, of course. But wow, Sasuke's entire speech was great. I don't think anyone could have written Sasuke's point of view on that subject any better, in all honesty.
Great work, this was such a phenomenal chapter. I loved it, it was so good. Definitely can't wait for more for this story. Keep up the fantastic work with your writing!
Author's Response: I couldn't stop smiling when I read your review. :D I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!!!! You're so awesome!! Haha, yes. I figured it out. Thanks you soooo much!!!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 02:23 pm · For: Scrolls
Yay! update! I do love this story! Yay, I hope this next chapter will be dramatic! =D
Author's Response: Thanks! We'll see...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 03:41 am · For: Scrolls
Aw, Ishiko and Namikaze are so cute when they fight. Little kids and their rivalries, ha! Ironic though that Sasuke is the one to tell them that they need to work together. Haha. I would have liked to see more Ino dialogue, but oh well, she's not a favorite character anyway. Can't wait to see how the rest of the clans react to seeing Sasuke as their delivery man. More characters, yay! Good job so far, I can't wait to read more. Update soon, please! Another two chapter update would be nice (hint hint), but hey, I'll take what I can get ;D
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I'll work on the two chapters for you.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 - 05:53 pm · For: Target Practice
Haha, Ishiko's intrusion was very funny. It figures he would follow Sasuke and Namikaze. Ah, jealousy. Oh, and Sasuke's description of Itachi was actually very sweet. It was very refreshing to hear Sasuke speak of Itachi with admiration, rather than the common disdain that Sasuke is always seen using when referring to Itachi in other fanfics. Very nice. I continue to grow interested with this story, I love all the characters and Sasuke's development. Nice work. I would like to see the other characters as well. You have already introduced some, but let us not forget all those others. Anyways, keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see the next update. Hooray for the two updates in one day!
Author's Response: Yeah, thanks. I'll try to add more characters, at least the Konoha 11.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/11 - 09:57 am · For: Sharingan
Darn it, Sasuke! You were so close to apologizing, you should have told Naruto how sorry you are!
And that's so weird, he casted a genjutsu on himself? Crazy twist right there. Now I'm so freaked out, does that mean Sasuke is killing himself unintentionally? Did Madara do something just before he died? So many unanswered questions! Please get the next chapter out quickly, because this is so frustrating, not knowing the answers! Keep up the good work with this, your twists are really making this story a lot more interesting. Great job, and I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the support and review! Sasuke's head is still a mystery to me, but I have an idea. Thanks for reading!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/05/11 - 05:15 pm · For: Convincing
Man, you just gotta love Namikaze. What a great kid. Sasuke was putty in his hands. Haha!
Nice job. The site was down for a few days, and it scared the crap out of me! But I'm glad to see updates now, and I am happy to see an update for this especially. Great work, and I can't wait to see what is inside Sasuke's head! That will be so awesome! Keep up the good work with this story!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I look forward to your reviews, no joke! Thanks for all the reviews!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/11 - 11:19 am · For: Rage
Eh? That's so mean. I love Kiba, how could you make him the bad guy?! That's so mean...
But anyways, it was nice how Sasuke stood up for his departed brother. Anyone else would have done the same, and I liked how you showed Sasuke's defensiveness.... even if he was beating up my husband!
And now Inoichi is going to look inside of Sasuke's head. Finally, we'll be able to see what is going on in his mind. I'm excited about that.
Good work with this, although I don't know if I can forgive you for making Kiba like that. But I really like this story, so update soon please!
Author's Response: I don't know what'll happen... I have a writer's block right now, so maybe or maybe not I'll have a chapter done tomorrow. Well, thanks for the review!!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 06/05/11 - 02:39 pm · For: Genjutsu of Peace
...That...was...so...FANTASTIC! i loved that chapter so much. Go Genjutsu Sasuke! nothing else to say, except...Please update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! I'll updata ASAP, but i'm not home right now so... thanks for the review!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 05:20 pm · For: Genjutsu of Peace
Aw, that was so nice. Sasuke is really making an effort. And at least Sakura didn't bite his head off or anything. That's a step forward :D
Good job with this, I really liked it cuz it was such a breakthrough moment for Sakura and Sasuke, I think. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yay, another review! I decided to bring Sakura back into the story. Thanks!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 03:45 pm · For: Cool Attitude
This was an impressive chapter. I loved it. all in all, i think it was the best chapter so far. Maybe it is only the fact that I love kakashi, but I still loved this. 9/10. =D
Author's Response: Haha, I love Kakashi too! He's one of my favorite characters! Thank you!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/11 - 03:31 am · For: Red Eyes
Aw, that was cute. I like Ishiko, he's got spunk. Very good character.
And then when Ishiko asked who was first in the class, that was kind of sad and funny at the same time. It was a slight jab at Sasuke, and he didn't even bother responding to it.
Good job with this, it was a nice chapter. Keep up the good work, I really enjoy this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really like this story too, so I'll probably even work on it at school.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 - 03:36 pm · For: Red Eyes
Loved that chapter! I loved the end where Ishiko asked who was first in the class. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 - 07:46 pm · For: Sarutobi?
Yay! Super speedy update. Ishiko is a very Naruto-like character, i can tell already that Naruto influences him. I am glad you included kids. Please update. =D
Author's Response: I was halfway through with this chapter when I uploaded the one before it. I'm working on the next one! Thanks for the reviews!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 - 07:28 pm · For: Sarutobi?
Aw, I'm so glad that you decided to add other kids in there. It really brings out the fact that a long time has passed since Sasuke had left the village. Plus, it's fun seeing the future.
With Neji following him all the time, it must get pretty annoying and kinda creeperish. And hopefully, Sasuke will be alright, what with his brain problem and all. Things are looking quite interesting for this story, and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks. It's fun to create the future! Haha, thanks for the review as always. My reviews actually give me ideas and inspire me.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 03/05/11 - 05:41 pm · For: Mission
Thank you for no lemon! I was worried for a second. Reasonable mission. Realistic and everything! Love it! Please update soon! Go Namikaze! And Sasuke!
Author's Response: No problem! Lemon will mess this story up. Thanks for the review as always! Haha, it's nice seeing someone root for my OC.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/05/11 - 03:55 pm · For: Missing
Aww! That's so sad about Namikaze! It sounds realistic, but it's still so sad! How could you do that to a little boy?!
Author's Response: Well, everyone has obstacles... just wait for a bit, I have something planned.
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 01/05/11 - 11:29 am · For: Meeting With the Hokage
Da da da....Evil chakra. =D
That last chapter was dramatic.
Go Sasuke!
I don't have much else to say besides
Please update.
=D
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks for the review anyway. Any feedback is better than none!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/04/11 - 08:25 pm · For: Meeting With the Hokage
Oh wow. This was so well done. It was so realistic, not sappy or OOC or anything. It really made sense. And then that little bit with Sasuke's brain is getting more intense. I really want to see what is going to happen to him. Good job with this. Two updates in one day, go you! Keep up the good work with your writing!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I was hoping it wasn't soo OOC. I almost have another chapter done!