Reviews For Kick/Start
Name: Zachary (Anonymous) · Date: 29/04/11 - 09:18 pm · For: Chapter 4
this story is amazing keep up the fantastic work! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/11 - 02:05 pm · For: Chapter 4
Wow, awesome chappie! Another excellent portrayal of a character. You really described Neji's life very well, throwing in detail about his personality and his tough life. The thing I really like about this story is that the characters all have their own personality and tough life. And you really illustrate the difficulties quite nicely. Your writing is very good, and I really like this story. Keep up the good work with this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/11 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 3
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Anyways, I really liked this chapter. I love Kiba :D And you described his inner conflicts really well. He seems like an interesting character in this... of course, he is always an interesting character ;) I really liked this chapter. While you provided some hints of his home life, you still left me wondering what goes on in his life, just like the other characters. I really hope we will find out more about their home lives because each person's story seems really interesting. Your added flare to each character adds to the originality of this story. This is really good. Keep up the good work with this story! Hope you update soon!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/04/11 - 03:47 am · For: Chapter 2
Loved it! Your character development is proceeding really well. Your insight to Naruto and Gaara's pasts stuck close to the manga/anime, but you added your own flare to them, making their pasts seem a lot more interesting. I'm looking forward to finding out what happened to them. And then you included Kiba. *squeals like a fan girl* Yay, yay, yay! I love Kiba so much! Ahem.... yeah, anyway, another great chapter. I really like this story, so please update soon! Keep up the great work with this!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/11 - 05:37 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow. Unique, interesting, and funny. I love it! You have a nice start to this, and the characters seem very close to their original personalities. The friendship between Naruto and Gaara was demonstrated very well. The entire freerunning concept is very different, and I imagine a very good plot for this story. I look forward to the next chapter. So update soon! Please? Maybe? Possibly? Hopefully? Yeah?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review :D! I actually started this story because I wanted to do something unique - yes - but it was my challenge to myself to work on character development and background and what not, so I'm so happy that it's worked so far :D. I'll make sure to update soon! Once again, Thank you sooo much :3.