Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 02:02 pm · For: Chapter 6.e
Wow. What to say.... I guess I'll just say that you continue to amaze me with your elaborate story. Your many twists and turns dazzle me with each passing chapter. You are so gifted, honestly. And this is a great story, really it is. On to the next chappie!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's an incredible compliment and I'm very honoured that you think so highly of me. This story is my baby and by far my favourite thing out of everything I ever wrote, so I'm extremely glad and grateful to know that other people are enjoying it as much as I am. I'm constantly worried about stagnating the plot and loosing my audience, so to know that someone (especially another talented writer) actually thinks this is still a rich and engaging plotline is incredibly reassuring.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 01:20 pm · For: Chapter 6.c
I did not understand your interruption, but that's alright.
Another fantastic chapter to add to the collection. This made me fall out of my chair, literally. No joke. I fell out of my seat with each passing sentence, this chapter was so good. I loved it. There were so many twists and excellent explanations that I had no idea how to respond, so my mouth just fell open. I loved everything about this chapter.
Author's Response: You know, when I first read this I was so worried you might have hurt yourself. I hope you were okay? I'm really glad I could keep you in suspense and involved with this story. I was beginning to worry I was losing it slightly, so this is a real relief to hear. I'm really grateful you enjoy my story so much too. There's nothing that makes me happier than knowing people actually enjoy what I wrote. After all that is its whole purpose and my reviewers are always the people I write for the most. ;0)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/11 - 12:49 pm · For: Chapter 6.a
Ah, now I know what you mean, about the bird thing. But I liked it. It honestly freaked me out when she suddenly bursted into flames. So what if it's cliche? Naruto cliches are always fun to read :D Excellent job on this! Now I must go and read the next one!
Author's Response: You have a point there I confess, but - as you say - we love it anyway so I guess it's okay. ;0) I did feel much better about it after reading your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it engaging. I apologize for not responding to your reviews sooner, but I've been pretty busy - for the most part writing the new chapter, although there were other things - and I've not been on TONFA a lot at all... =0(
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 09:18 pm · For: Chapter 5.o
Whoa. So amazing, this story is. I love this story so much. It's simply incredible. No flaws, no complaints on my part. Nothing, for everything is just great and fantastic. You have found yourself one dedicated and excited fan of your story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for all those many, many compliments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I got a bit of mixed reaction to Chapter 5 before, so you can imagine how thrilled I was to see how much you seemed to like it.rnrnChapter 6 is up next, obviously, and that's where we catch up with what I've already posted on the other site. Updates will be a little slower from now on as I've got to actually write the parts before I can post them anywhere. I just finished part 6.i today, so I've got 6.j next I suppose. Hope you enjoy them.rnrnAlso you should see in Chapter 6.a why I said I had no right to talk about the bird thing when I was reviewing for you. Admittedly, back when I was writing this, I went for the most cliche option possible. Your Hawk is still way cooler. Oh well. At least it proves we both like birds. ;0)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 08:46 pm · For: Chapter 5.l
HOLY.... WHAT THE... WOW!!!!
I loved it! Thrilling, suspense, action, everything! I wish I could tell you everything that I loved about this, but that would take forever and I really really want to continue reading!
Alls you gotta know is that this story is freaking genius and your a freaking amazing author!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 08:04 pm · For: Chapter 5.g
What?! Oh my gosh, I don't even know what to say! I was shivering the entire time I read this chapter! It's so chilling. But it's so good. I have to go on and read the next chapter now, I'm so excited! Onward!
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 04:04 pm · For: Chapter 5.o
This is so good! I love it! The ending got me just imagining what would happen next. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy my story so much. It's really great to know that you did. =0)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 03:15 pm · For: Chapter 4.g
So.... amazing....
I loved the entire chapter 4 series! Gaara and Nee-san are so cute! I love GaaraXOC, and this is so non-OOC that it makes it even better! There were so many twists and turns with chapter 4. The fact that Nee-san doesn't want Naruto to be friends with her, Gaara and Nee-san's budding relationship, and just everything in general was very elaborate and well-written. I am really liking this story. Update soon? Possibly? Hopefully? Please?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 03:39 am · For: Chapter 4.b
Ah?! You left it there! You're so mean to leave it at a cliffhanger like that. You're doing very well with this, but now I'm in suspense because I want to know what happens! Keep up the good work and please update soon.... please?
Author's Response: Then you'll be pleased to know, if you haven't already noticed, that I was actually in the middle of posting more when you reviewed. ;0) The whole of Chapter 4 (finishing on 4.g) went up today and I'm planning on putting at least the first half of Chapter 5 up either tomorrow or in the next few days.rnrnI just wanted to thank you for all your reviews. It always give me such a thrill when I realise that someone is enjoying my hard work. You write really lovely reviews that let me know exactly what you thought (of the story as well as the style) as well and that makes it especially nice, so I just wanted to say a massive Thank You. You really make my day!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 - 04:07 am · For: Chapter 3.f
This is a very interesting story. You provide insight to the village and the characters. The whole thing with the Nee-san in the wheelchair really intrigued me as well. This whole story overall is getting good, and I look forward to seeing where this takes off. Keep up the good work with this.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 - 03:40 am · For: Chapter 2.c
Very descriptive. The entire chapter was very elaborate, which I commend you on. It is very important to be descriptive with new characters and new settings, and you accomplished that very well. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter, so I hope you update soon. Good job on this, and keep up the great work with this story.
Author's Response: You know, this was ages ago when I first joined TONFA, but I thought I'd just let you know that I reread your words as I was replying to other reviews and they brought a big smile to my face. You are such a kind person, really...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 29/03/11 - 03:47 am · For: Chapter 2.a
Cool! Mission! This was very good, and an interesting plot development at that. And yeah, I'm pretty sure splitting a chapter is fine. I've seen other authors do it on here before, so I don't see why not you. But anyways, this chapter was very interesting, and I look forward to seeing what happens next. Update soon please!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 - 06:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow.... this is.... just awesome. Your writing is so beautiful. It's just so... incredible. And it was a really good intro to what could only be an amazing story. The hamster bit was so adorable, and it really gives a new angle to Gaara. Everything in this chapter was just so... descriptive and elaborate, and I loved it. I really hope to see the next chapter up soon, so please update soon! I can already tell this is going to be good :D
Name: TeamWorkIsKey (Signed) · Date: 27/03/11 - 06:18 pm · For: Chapter 1
I really like it. This first chapter was very detailed and captured my attention. Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm flattered by the compliment to my story. =0)