Reviews For The Cult and the Coven
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/06/11 - 01:35 pm · For: Chapter 2
Aww, you're welcome for the review. I'm glad that review was able to make you so happy :D
Ooh, the plot is showing even more now. I actually felt bad about the people having to be split up into genin teams they obviously wouldn't enjoy.
Amanda's dialogue is truly frightening, and she's not even saying anything really that scary. Just the way she speaks, and you show that so well. Every ounce of detail and description you show truly illustrates the story so well. I'm really enjoying this. It's so unique and so dark, I like it a lot! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think like this story a lot, mainly because it allows me to illustrate my writing style. I usually do write dark fantasy, and in this I really can show where my strengths lie. Thanks so much!rnrnI try to write her lines in a dark and mature fashion, like something you would not expect a teenage girl to say. I am really glad it is frightening, I can not wait to hear your opinion on the rest of the story, which I have to go write. I expect updates later today. Thanks!
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 13/06/11 - 08:25 am · For: Prologue
Hm. This sound interesting. I feel bad for the ones who have to put up with Amanda. She sounds super scary. Anyway, sorry if I sound pushy if you've already checked the review of One Little Girl, but you need to change the characters age to either 16 or above. I'm sorry, but it was a rule, and I can't let one person get to be under 16. Sorry.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 - 11:58 am · For: Chapter 1
Brilliant. Just brilliant.
Seriously, I have read everything you have posted on this site from the beginning, so I have seen your writing style. And this chapter, this amazing chapter, really illustrated your development as a writer. It still has that dark aura that you use, but it also has a more intoxicating and sophisticated sort of feeling. It's elaborate and thrilling, and I loved it all.
Well done on such an astounding improvement. I look forward to seeing how your writing progresses with this story. Keep up the great work with your writing and your other stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so so ridiculously happy that you liked that chapter. One of the reasons I was away from this site, was that I was practicing writing styles. I am so glad you think I have improved, and I am ready to work on this story again! thanks so much, you made me so so so happy.
Name: GREATEST CAT EVA (Anonymous) · Date: 10/06/11 - 02:30 pm · For: Prologue
AWESOME PROLOUGE!! i hope the rest of the story is this good :D
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 08/05/11 - 10:38 pm · For: Prologue
this sounds good can't wait for an update
Name: doodlelover (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 07:26 am · For: Prologue
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Thank you!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/03/11 - 03:35 am · For: Prologue
Nice intro. The OCs seem really scary, which is perfect! I can't wait to see how they will be as genin and how the other characters will react to them. I'm in so much suspense right now! I hope you post more soon!
Now where's my cookie?
Author's Response: I totally will post soon. I found this idea when i was cleaning out my flashdrive. I like it so i'm using it. Thanks for reviewing!...i didn't say anything about a cookie....=/e