Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/03/11 - 05:56 pm · For: Chapter 3
I think the tone was pretty good for this. I think it stayed pretty constant. Your writing was very good. Great job on this!
Author's Response: Thanks. And also thanks for reviewing so consistently :) it gives a sort of "carrot" to look forward to when I publish a new chapter. :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/03/11 - 03:33 am · For: Chapter 2
This is getting quite good. You're explaining things really well, and the characters are slowly beginning to realize their previous lives. You're writing is very good and very creative. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :) I indeed plan to continue writing as I am enjoying it very much. Each character is taking their course wherever it leads them. I shall update again sometime soon, perhaps within a week or so :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/03/11 - 03:51 am · For: Chapter 1
Wow.... I like it. For a first chapter of a sequel, that was pretty interesting. I'm upset that there is no action, but hey, fluff is nice in its own way too. Keep on writing, and I hope to see an update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I plan to update this story infrequently, perhaps once or twice a week. Definitely at a more sedate pace. I am definitely enjoying writing it, so you can look forward to the continuing fluff :)