Reviews For Bunaíodh de Luíonn
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 01/01/12 - 04:57 pm · For: Chapter 11
Any updates?????
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/11 - 02:32 am · For: Chapter 11
haha....
awesome... :D
this ws aother spectacular chapter... ^^
as i'd guessed :P Gaara saved Grace... much to her dissappointment xD
yh yer right if Grace would forgie Gaara already, it would b a lil ovrexaggerating i guess...
anyways... there were a few grammar mistakes... very few... but nothin tht cant b corrected...
n haha... Fumio.. :P
n poor Grace...
Tht council guy.. -.-" ws quite irritating...
n woah... Sasori's spy...? :P idnt remember tht part of the canon D:... wow... my good lil memory betrays me again T_T
anyways....
thnx for updating.. :D plz update again soon... ^^
n Awesome job with this chapter FunKy..
keep up the awesome work..!! :D
hmm... nw tht i read ur penname... funkyToes... just like Grace's O.o (a coincidence ? :P)
Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 15/12/11 - 07:54 pm · For: Chapter 11
Yay! I'm so happy that you uploaded another chapter xD It really inspires me to work harder on my own!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/12/11 - 07:07 pm · For: Chapter 11
Yup, that was definitely a great place to end the chapter. It ties into the entire theme of this series, how she I knows more than what's good for her.
I think Grace was the right amount of snotty, if that makes sense. It's expected that she would want Gaara to feel remorse. After what he did, it's completely realistic for her to want to get back at him as much as possible.
Great chapter! Can't wait to see the next one! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 15/12/11 - 02:05 pm · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
Update please!!! I cant wait any longer TT.TT
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/11 - 07:49 am · For: Chapter 10
haha....
Kool...
got to read this aftr a long time...
its anothr Awesome chapter with anothr cliffhanger... =_=
u love putting cliffhangers in each chapter dnt u...? :P
plus there is no mention on Sasuke here...
anyways...
hehe... the Kin scenes nvr sieze to amuse me... xD
n poor Sakura...:P
heh.... i think Gaara might b Grace's saviour... xP
anyways.... Awesome Chapter..!!!!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 04/12/11 - 07:07 am · For: Chapter 10
Son of a-!
Update please!
Author's Response: It'll be another six months... jk ;) rnHopefully there will be another update next saturday. I'm testing out shorter chapters for more frequent updates. rnThanks for the review!
Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 04/12/11 - 12:54 am · For: Chapter 10
Yay! You're on a roll! I can't wait for the next instalment! xD
Author's Response: ;)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/11 - 09:50 pm · For: Chapter 10
First off, the last set of one thousand words or so are italicized. I thought it was an extended flashback for a while, but I think it's just a minor mistake :P
Anyway, great chapter! I really enjoyed this one. Kin really makes me laugh, and I can't help but love it when Grace issues discomfort and annoyance. It's the best XD And oh my gosh, she's so freaked out that she's falling down the steps! Oh no! That's such a cruel way to end the chapter! I need to know what happens! Good job on this chapter, keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks for bringing the italicized words to my attention. It was a mistake with my coding, but I would never have realized unless someone told me, so thank :)rnI'm glad you liked this chapter! And yes... Grace is fun to make fun of (as a writer)... it's one of the few things I can use to convince myself she isn't a mary sue (it's a losing battle)rnI'll be updating next Saturday. I'm testing out shorter more condensed chapters so I can update more frequently. I have another story on FF.net and it works really well for that one.rnThanks for the review!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 - 05:36 pm · For: Chapter 9
Oh... Shit.... Is my reaction to that last paragraph.
The shit is so about to hit the fan.
Yay! Updates! Even though there really isn't much of Grace in them I'm still lovin' 'em!
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 - 07:32 am · For: Return: Chapter 1
WHOA....!!!!
An Update...!!! :DDD
Awesome fuNkY-san...!!! (lol... it sounds so funny xP)
hehe... Jiraya is sooooo gonna hav it... xD
he has to worry bout 2 female Demons now...xPPP especially Sakura nher Superhuman strength... TROLOL...!!!
all those icha scenes wer really funny...:P xD
hehe... but hw dumb of Naruto to tell Sakura all tht... but now its gonna b fun... REAL fun..
let those scenes keep comin...:P
hmm... Chunnin exams... :O
n woah at both the meetings... they wer so awesome... i mean to come up with all that reasoning conflict... is no kiddy game..
n yh... now tht Sasuke knws that Grace is alive... he surely will intercept her on her way to Suna... :/
now tht is gonna b interesting ;)
but sheesh Kabuto... he knws hw to make things worse... now Sasuke is all fired up against Naruto... :P which is good...!! xDD
Awesome job Funky... :]
Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 29/11/11 - 04:14 am · For: Chapter 9
Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/11 - 07:44 pm · For: Chapter 9
Wow, there was a lot of seriousness and explanations and hidden secrets in this chapter. I quite liked that, it adds an interesting spin on things, since we, as the readers, know what's going on while Grace does not.
My favorite scene though had to be the Sasuke and Kabuto one. It was just so... Suspenseful. Now the secret is out, and I don't even know what Sasuke's reaction was because of the evil cliffhanger.
Great job on this chapter! I really liked it! Keep up the awesome work!
Name: ilian13 (Anonymous) · Date: 13/11/11 - 09:25 am · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
D8 WHU MUST IT SSSSTTTTOOOOOOOPPP
;3; next chapter plz...
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/11 - 11:41 am · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
i enjoy this so much! its worth waiting forever for it. grace and sasuke are soo cute together!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 12/11/11 - 11:24 am · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
O.O
Oh, you're evil. Pure. Unadulterated. Evil.
What I think? I think you better update before I die of anticipation. I'm not kidding. You'll lose a loyal reviewer. I'll die.
Bah! I am so excited that this story is getting updated! X3
... Don't judge me lol
Anyways, this chapter was well written as always. Can't wait for an update!
(You're horrendously good at writing cliffies ^^)
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/11 - 11:09 am · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
Wahahaaaa....!!!
That ws another epic chapter.... with n evil cliffhanger...!! T_T
ah... i hate naruto now... -.-"
LOL RIN..... xDD
i feel Grace's trip is gonna b a heck lot of interesting...!!! xDDD
plz put in another few scenes frm the book :P
Lol... Chakra or nt.... Jiraiya is soooooooo dead...!!!=D
ah... i like the princess.... xD she is annoyin bt cute....:P
she hs a crush on the prince... LOL
Freagin irritating Naruto =_="""
n OMG... The Shinji guy spoke too much...^_^
now... unless he blurts it all out... he is a goner...!! well, he's a goner aftr he blurts it out as well anyways.... xD
Kool chaptr funky....
Plz dnt take 6 months... D:
hey... -.- u said its almost done right...? :D Koolio...!!! :D
u r an epic author...!!
Name: Geishagrl (Signed) · Date: 11/11/11 - 09:07 pm · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
No!! PLEASE don't take six months -cries in a corner- I'll die if I don't find out what happens next! O.O What's Sasuke gunna do to that poor guy? Shoot the messenger, much?
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 11/11/11 - 08:05 pm · For: The Sand: Chapter 1
:D Oh my gosh, the plot thickens so immensely! Sasuke is finally catching on to the fact that Grace is around! Ah, I wonder how he'll react when he finds out she's alive! Ah!
Haha, I love Rin, she's so perverted that it's funny. I wonder just how well Grace can manage hanging around this team.
The princess is such a brat though, I can't believe it. Well I mean, I kinda can I suppose. It's just so awful, girls like that really sicken me. I wonder if Naruto can stand completing his mission, haha :P
Great chapter! I really loved it, and I especially can't wait to see how things in the Sand Village work out. Awesome job on this amazing chapter. Keep up the incredible work!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 10:12 pm · For: Return: Chapter 1
Er, I was so happy about the update I accidentally forgot to leave a review. *cough cough*
Ahem.
All I have to say is, really girl? Not gonna' give back something of Neji's? You're just going to hope he doesn't notice? The guy with the byakugan... Really? XD
Also those girls are bitches *glares and stabs them with kunai*
HEhe, anyways!
Yay. UPdate
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 30/10/11 - 10:10 pm · For: Chapter 7
YAY UPDATE OHMIGOTH!!!!!!
*glomp*
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 - 12:57 pm · For: Chapter 7
haha...
this ws unexpected...
its the first time fr me tht i hv to wait fr an update frm u...
lol... still cnt believe i read 75 chapters...!!!
lol...
keep up the awesome job fUnKy...
Update soon...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 - 12:18 pm · For: Return: Chapter 6
hey hey...
she is finally out... :D
aww man... cnt wait till she turns hot again... :P
OMG >:o ruichi(i knw, i dnt remember his spelling) :'( man... he ws one heck of a guy *salutes*
i think it ws mentioned in the last chapter....? oh well... i remembered it now :/
me n my great gold fish memory T_T
anyways... awesome chappie...
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 - 10:48 am · For: The Return: Chapter 4
haha...
that was a brilliant idea...
time skip.. as iin even u wont hav to write wat kishimoto skipped :P
the first hokage's necklace revived Grace...? :O
Kool :D
sh!t he started it again (naruto) >:(
i dnt like seeing (rather reading) bout him ngrace being together... >_<
neji, sasuke, ruyichi, konohamaru(even if its pedophile xD) Kiba, lee... Anybody bt Naruto... =_=
yr n awesome writer fUnKyToes :D
Name: shadow9000 (Signed) · Date: 11/10/11 - 07:08 am · For: The Return: Chapter 3
haha...
awesome chapter... :D
bt i wantd to confess this first...
bt I'll say it nw....
i literally HATE naruto in this fic... i feel... if he wouldn't exist... sasuke n grace would b in Konoha n wouldn't hev gone to Orochimaru... :/
bt well... its a fic aftrall...
Keep up the good work...!! :D