Reviews For Konoha Civil War
Name: Random Naruto Fan (Anonymous) · Date: 17/04/08 - 01:36 am · For: PROLOGUE
Excellent Work!
The story was well written, though very dark for a kids manga. Poor Lee!
The death was kind of needed, admittedly. Because of Kiba (and partially Akamaru) the story would not have gotten as far as it did. Ino's death motivated Shikamaru to carve out Hanabi's eyes out, because of Kakashi and Hinata. The eye thing was a good plot device, but very grim.
Why Lee and Shika? It was not crucial, but oh well. The author has sole jurisdiction of a fic. Meh.
Author's Response: First off, Thanks for the review. Yes, I knew it was a little dark but I figure that at least it wasn't the same ol' cut and dry crap thats already been done before. Why Lee and Shikamaru? Because it seriously wouldn't be expected. Sometimes not everyone is able to get off their best moves before a fight is over and I wanted to show that.
Name: mk (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/08 - 12:07 am · For: PROLOGUE
wheres "the last blade of konoha"
Author's Response: Uh...haven't written it yet >.< been kinda busy.
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 25/07/07 - 11:21 am · For: PROLOGUE
oh are they going to like build a new village or something like that
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-- N1nj45tyl3 : yup, its gonna be called um...the Generic Ninja clan!
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 04/07/07 - 01:41 pm · For: PROLOGUE
Man, your story almost put me on antidepressants. Good job, man. Keep it up. Can't wait for next chapter.