Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/11 - 01:06 pm · For: Chapter 7.l
Ah, it was quite nice to see an update for this. I've honestly been waiting to see what would happen down on the battlefield.
And oh gosh, this definitely did not disappoint. The action scene was so vivid and amazingly illustrated, I simply loved it. From the village's architecture right down to the green fog, everything was written beautifully.
And after a wonderfully epic fight, the child is apprehended... only to run off again. I got really excited when he was captured, though I felt bad when he was giving his little temper tantrum :P
Meh, I guess it would be too easy if the child was captured so quickly. I just hope they catch him soon...
Awesome job on this, BattyBigSis! I really enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry... =0( This installment sat around half-finished for quite a while, but with one thing and another I just haven't done as much writing as I'd like recently... Hopefully that should start to change soon as things go back to normal. I've got a quarter-finished Star Angel chapter to complete as well... >_<