Interesting genjutsu, I never saw that coming... though I probably should have... *facepalm*

And just when I thought the little grey child would be apprehended, he surprised everyone but continuing his attack. He's out of his confines, and I'm so excited (and frightened) to see what will happen when he's out in public.

Even though this chapter was short, it had me on the edge of my seat. Only your writing can do that to me: such a short chapter with amazing quality that has me begging for more.

Well done, this was excellent. I do think there might have been a few spelling mistakes, such as you said necessarily when it should have been necessary.

Other than that, as I said, this chapter was amazing. Great job. I look forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Yeah, I noticed a few myself when I was re-reading it the other day... and I've posted corrected versions once already, as well as my usual proof-reads and checks before uploading - looks like I'll have to do it again. ;0) In my defense I was writing through the middle of a migraine, so that would be why...
I'm really surprised actually that you enjoyed it so much. I was actually worried that this installment would be hard to follow, as it's so jerky and fast-paced... Like a real fight I suppose... Fight scenes never really lend themselves to written media to begin with, I think, and I don't help matters with my preference having them so fractured... but I'm pleased you enjoyed them ... and that you liked your character's genjutsu.
Given that this is the 'Mind' village (seishin = mind/emotion, in case you've forgotten 80), which I wouldn't blame you for. I think I last referred to that about forty installments ago) I figured I could do with a few more genjutsu users. (I have quite a few with water abilities as well, seeing how close this place is to the Hidden Mist, but they seem to be taking over). I also wanted to keep your abilities different and distinctive from, say, Kiba's as you're from different clans, countries and villages. Your genjutsu style gives you something of an advantage as it enables your wolf to attack from pretty much anywhere without it being obvious to the quarry. I figured that made for a good C- or B-Rank jutsu, which is appropriate as you're a chuunin...