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Reviews For She Was Beautiful

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/07/11 - 07:35 pm · For: Chapter 7.d
It was so short, yet it was quite enticing.

I liked how you described Tsunade fury. It's just so... like her to be so angry at the patient herself.

Aw, lovely and cute little Ton-Ton, and poor exhausted Shizune. What a lovely pair you make them out to be, even when asleep ;D

Of course, it was the last paragraph that completely had me. I was so afraid, terrified, even. And then the final sentence had my jaw falling open and my eyes widening greatly. What a twist! I loved it!

Great work on this chapter! Oh, considering you already have 7f finished, I wonder how long it will take to dod 7e. Not that I'm rushing you. Just me personally, I would find it difficult to insert a chapter in between two completed ones. Eh, I know it'll be awesome anyway :D Good luck with the next chapter, and keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: I nearly have 7f finished. There is a little bit of work left for me to do, as I left it when I decided to do a different scene first. It shouldn't take too long though.
7e is approximately half-done now too. They're quite disconnected scenes, so there wasn't really a problem with fitting it in - that and I actually have a linear timeline in this chapter. That's practically a novelty for me as it is. ;0)
Thank you for your kind words, yet again ;0), in this review. It really made me happy to hear you liked it so much even though there wasn't very much in it. Poor Sakura. I don't think her reactions at the end of the scene were much different from yours...


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