Aw, you wanted my opinion? Aw, shucks :D

I liked her. I feel like her stressed out behavior created a very frantic atmosphere that was not really what Naruto and the Suna ninja really needed at the moment. Good job with providing contrast. I really liked her, you described her very well.

I will admit I thought that Shifuni was a genin because I felt she was searching for her fellow genin. But that could be me not piecing two and two together.

Now I know what you meant by bringing more characters in because Seishin is, indeed, a ninja village.

So awesome job with her character! Your writing continues to astound me, and your description of Shifuni was amazing. You definitely went to great lengths to describe her throughout the conversation between the ninja, so good job!

Another great chapter. This is really getting the ball rolling, now I'm all full of suspense, and I'm wondering what is going on in Seishin. Keep up the great work, this was really good.

Author's Response: Well 'aww, shucks', right back at you. ;0) Thanks for the quick review! That really helped me out & I feel a lot better about it now.
Only thing I edited was in response to your comment about ranks. I think I was being a bit evasive about it (just like I was being evasive with the rest of her identity) and there was really no need for that. I added a few lines to make that clearer, so now hopefully people will know that she's a chuunin looking for the genin she's in charge of. I mentioned in an earlier chapter that in Seishingakure genin teams tend to answer to chuunin teams rather than jounin-sensei. Genin are real dogsbodies in Seishin - hence why they're stuck with cooking and cleaning and other grunt work and are generally unpaid.
Well, just so long as Shifuni likes her cameo character it's all okay... Yours is in the next chapter all going well.

Casimir says hi again by the way. He's bullied me into having a cuddle again (about his third tonight)...