Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/06/11 - 07:01 am · For: Chapter 6.m
I... am not even sure what to say.
But I'm sure I'll muster something up.
That was brilliant. The conference was getting slightly boring but only because there hadn't seemed to be anymore important things to discuss. And then, you manipulated the characters so well. I say manipulate because they were all amazingly in character, especially the Tsuchikage, because when he said that about Naomi, it only built up to the drama. And for the daimyo to order his ninja to cut herself was pretty intense, especially just to prove a point. But it was so bloody brilliant ( hmm, pun intended? Only if you wish so ;D ).
It was honestly a great display of characterization and manipulation of your characters. I was scared and exhilarated at the same time. It was just that intense of a scene.
And wow, Chapter 6 is finally completed, huh? Oh man, I definitely can't wait to read Chapter 7, especially if it is as epic as you say it is. I definitely look forward to it.
Excellent work as always with this story. It is great, I love reading this fanfic. Keep up the amazing work with this story, you've already done so great with it. It can only get better ;D