Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/05/11 - 07:46 am · For: Chapter 6.k
This was a very nice setup. Your writing is beautiful, honestly. You create the layout very nicely. Your description is amazing and brilliant. And good insight into Sakura's head; you described the past very well through her eyes.
Another nice chapter, keep up the great work with this. And I hope TONFA gets better for you! That sucks about the 39 chapters lost. Oh, and thanks for joining my site, you're awesome!
Author's Response: You're welcome - tbh, I just wanted to make sure I could still read your stories even if TONFA goes down again for any reason. I actually just want to know what happens next, so I was kinda panicking a little when the site was down. I'm sure the Tonfa problems will sort themselves out - if not, as I said, I do have other copies (although they need more editing), so I can fix it myself.rnrnI'm glad you liked this chapter. Tbh, I felt I let myself down a little with the last two installments (6.k &l). They didn't feel quite ready to be posted when they were, but I was too exhausted to continue writing on them and I just want to get chapter 6 finished (I'm nearly there! So fed up with writing about meetings, you have no idea...). That one & the one I posted today were originally meant to be the same scene, but seeing as they were so big and there is a sudden noticeable change in place & perspective I split them after all... I think you'll get more of an idea why I was focusing on Sakura's thoughts with her behaviour here anyway. rnrnAnyway, hope you enjoy it. =0D Just got 6.m to do now and we'll be on to Chapter 7. I can't wait.