Whoa. So amazing, this story is. I love this story so much. It's simply incredible. No flaws, no complaints on my part. Nothing, for everything is just great and fantastic. You have found yourself one dedicated and excited fan of your story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all those many, many compliments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I got a bit of mixed reaction to Chapter 5 before, so you can imagine how thrilled I was to see how much you seemed to like it.rnrnChapter 6 is up next, obviously, and that's where we catch up with what I've already posted on the other site. Updates will be a little slower from now on as I've got to actually write the parts before I can post them anywhere. I just finished part 6.i today, so I've got 6.j next I suppose. Hope you enjoy them.rnrnAlso you should see in Chapter 6.a why I said I had no right to talk about the bird thing when I was reviewing for you. Admittedly, back when I was writing this, I went for the most cliche option possible. Your Hawk is still way cooler. Oh well. At least it proves we both like birds. ;0)