Well, I sure did find out who Nee-san is. I didn't expect her to be Ren's sister. So, she works in the castle. That explains why she's there. And does Riko treat everyone like that, or does he just not like Nee-san?

Anyway, I loved this chapter. Nee-san Is such a great character. Though now I am curious to what Ren was going to say...... Once again, amazing description. I absolutely love everything about it. Eight thumbs up, BigSis-chan!

Author's Response: Hmm... I think that question is answered in 4.e... Well, the Riko thing that is, if you're still confused after that: I'll explain. Ren was more or less going to continue scolding his sister, unless you meant the bit about her not using her chakra, which we get back to in ... I think it's the beginning of Chapter 6, I'm afraid, so you'll just have to wait.

I'm glad you like Nee-san. She's hard work to write at times, but she was quite popular at this point in the story. And thank you for my eight thumbs up. Yay! I wrote a good installment. (Makes a change for the early part of this story... Some of it I re-read and cringe...)