Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/01/12 - 02:24 pm · For: Chapter 4.b
Wait, that's the end? Oh, wait, 45 (about) more chapters to go. I guess in this case that's both good and bad since this way I'm not left hanging with the cliffhanger.
Speaking of which...... HOLY FLYING CHOCOLATE MONKEYS!!! Nee-san? What's she doing in their house? Wait, so she is real? Dang it, I must know. Yeah, sorta happy about being behind now. Anyway, like always, great job with description. It is mind-blowing just how well you describe stuff. Overall I absolutely loved this chapter. Your story is amazing, BigSis-chan!!
Author's Response: It's a castle, Sassi-chan. I just thought I'd point that out in case you've forgotten. (It has been... what... three or four months since you read the earlier chapters?) It's a giant castle with a city (and a hidden village) around it...Oh, and it seems like most of the rest of your questions are answered in 4.c, so I won't spoil it for you . ;0) To be honest, I'm actually surprised you liked this installment at all. It's mostly just description of Yurika's clothes...
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/04/11 - 03:39 am · For: Chapter 4.b
Ah?! You left it there! You're so mean to leave it at a cliffhanger like that. You're doing very well with this, but now I'm in suspense because I want to know what happens! Keep up the good work and please update soon.... please?
Author's Response: Then you'll be pleased to know, if you haven't already noticed, that I was actually in the middle of posting more when you reviewed. ;0) The whole of Chapter 4 (finishing on 4.g) went up today and I'm planning on putting at least the first half of Chapter 5 up either tomorrow or in the next few days.rnrnI just wanted to thank you for all your reviews. It always give me such a thrill when I realise that someone is enjoying my hard work. You write really lovely reviews that let me know exactly what you thought (of the story as well as the style) as well and that makes it especially nice, so I just wanted to say a massive Thank You. You really make my day!