Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: DeadManTyping (Anonymous) · Date: 26/10/11 - 11:25 am · For: Chapter 4.a
Wow im actualy hanging on every word, you are a very talented writer one thing i will say is it could use a bit more action especialy in the begining not that i didnt enjoy it its just you maybe could have thrown in a fight just before the boat to add somthing extra to it (emphasis on extra) but to be completly honest i love it! :D
Author's Response: Yes, you've probably got a point there. I seem to have 'action' sections and 'fighting' sections in this story amongst other things (not on purpose, that's just how it worked out). Chapter 5 has a lot more fighting in it, if you're still interested by then... and then we're working our way back into more at Chapter 7. ;0)That said - thank you very much for such an awesome review! You're really very kind. I hope you will continue to enjoy this story. I've been away for a bit (which is why things have been so slow), but hopefully more updates will be coming soon. I can't wait to get stuck back into writing! =0D
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter 4.a
Hahaha. Naruto and his ramen. It's just plain hilarious if you ask me. Once again, the description in this is amazing. It's impossible not to see it as a movie in your head. Do I tell you that too much? Either way, it's true. This was amazing, and I can't wait to get the chance to read more. Your story gets more and more addictive the more my brain starts to adjust.
Author's Response: Hahaha. See below for my response. ;0)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 19/09/11 - 02:07 pm · For: Chapter 4.a
Hahaha. Naruto and his ramen. It's just plain hilarious if you ask me. Once again, the description in this is amazing. It's impossible not to see it as a movie in your head. Do I tell you that too much? Either way, it's true. This was amazing, and I can't wait to get the chance to read more. Your story gets more and more addictive the more my brain starts to adjust.
Author's Response: Well, helping you visualize what’s happening is something I aim for when I write, so I’m always relieved when you say things like that. I’m really glad you found this so enjoyable. It’s really rewarding to have someone say such nice things. Thank you!