Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 12/09/11 - 03:37 pm · For: Chapter 3.f
Once again a chapter that absolutely takes my breath away. This was just so amazing! The description was beyond belief. I can see the village so clearly in my mind it's as if I'm watching a movie. You are absolutely amazing when it comes to writing and describing, BigSis. It makes me wonder how I couldn't be completely caught in it even if I'm still wrapping my mind around character-centric stories.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I always worry about alienating my readers with too much description, so what you and SilverWolf and some of my other readers have said about it really does help boost my confidence in it immensely. I think it's important that when i can see something in my mind, I try and show that image to my readers as well.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 - 04:07 am · For: Chapter 3.f
This is a very interesting story. You provide insight to the village and the characters. The whole thing with the Nee-san in the wheelchair really intrigued me as well. This whole story overall is getting good, and I look forward to seeing where this takes off. Keep up the good work with this.