Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/08/11 - 07:39 pm · For: Chapter 3.b
Holy cow, this chapter was awesome! You had me hooked with the beginning, and then we meet this girl in a wheelchair. I wonder who she is. Anyway, once again, your description was just out of this world. And why is Naruto running away from the voice? Man, I really want to know. You did a fantastic job and now I just have to read more.
Author's Response: Hmm... I wonder too. Oh no, wait, I know, don't I? (Joke. Of course I know.) I'm glad you like the description. It's what I work hardest at, so it's good to know that it pays off for the reader. ;0)
Name: WinterzDream (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 05:28 pm · For: Chapter 3.b
Why is he running away from the scream!? and who is "Nee-san"!? God your killing me! lol but I absolutely adored her. I hope she comes back into the story =)
Author's Response: I'm glad you adored her. I really am. As I said, I've had very little feedback about the OCs so I'm always pleased when people tell me what they thought of them.