Poor Rina almost had to go make a roast goose. Okay, getting off the sympathy train. THIS CHAPTER WAS PHENOMENAL!!! The description is enough to keep the reader hooked, a great picture of what's happening in their head. And you keep on throwing in these small things at the beginning. I want to jump to conclusions and say it's Momoko, but I'll wait to see. I just hope I find out soon. I can't wait to figure out who it is. Nor can I wait to read more of your fantastic story. Have you ever tried writing a book, because I can tell you you could blow everyone away with it.

Author's Response: Or convince somebody else too. ;0) I never saw her as the sort of character who could be trusted with much beyond instant ramen in the kitchen... I love the flashforward thought scenes too. They are just a little taste of what's too come... eventually... very eventually... It's strange reading them again actually. They seem so cheesy and dramatic, but they are based on a lot of real emotion I was experiencing at the time. I miss my bf - but the good news is I might see him in September, so yay! =0D