Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/07/11 - 08:41 pm · For: Chapter 2.c
I've probably said it enough, but like with your drawings and how amazing they are, I have to say you're amazing. You continue to keep them in character, fitting in your own oc perfectly and describing him so well it's as if he's a real person standing right in front of me. Great job, BigSis. I love this story. Like many other stories I read on here, this story should be illegal it's so amazingly good.
Author's Response: Thanks Sasaui! You're pretty damn good yourself. =0D
Name: WinterzDream (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 05:20 pm · For: Chapter 2.c
ah I'm liking this Ren guy. He seems very interesting and I hope we get to know more about him! I also loved your descriptions as always. Seishin seems like such an amazing place :)
Author's Response: Oh, plenty more. I don't think I'm spoiling anything by saying he's a main character. I'm pleased you like him though. I've had very little feedback about my OCs (besides the mysterious 'Nee-san', although even then not very much), so you can't imagine what a relief it is to hear someone say 'I liked him'. I put a lot of effort into imaging Seishin and its scenery, so I'm glad you like it too. Kishimoto-sensei put so much effort into each individual country - I wouldn't want Seishin to let the side down at all.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/11 - 03:40 am · For: Chapter 2.c
Very descriptive. The entire chapter was very elaborate, which I commend you on. It is very important to be descriptive with new characters and new settings, and you accomplished that very well. Well done. I look forward to the next chapter, so I hope you update soon. Good job on this, and keep up the great work with this story.
Author's Response: You know, this was ages ago when I first joined TONFA, but I thought I'd just let you know that I reread your words as I was replying to other reviews and they brought a big smile to my face. You are such a kind person, really...