Reviews For She Was Beautiful
Name: WinterzDream (Signed) · Date: 21/07/11 - 05:16 pm · For: Chapter 2.b
I'm feeling slightly seasick myself now... and I have never been seasick o.O You described this exactly as I would have imagined feeling on such a journey myself. Also you seem to be so in tune with the characters which is very impressive. Reading this also makes me realize just how lacking my own fan fictions are. I seem to think of them as just that and you yourself have proven that taking a novelist point of view only creates a thoroughly more enjoyable read.
Author's Response: I think your writing is brilliant - you just need to think about structure a little more sometimes from what I can see, but I always love the sheer good quality of your writing itself. I'm glad you think I can get the characters right - those kinds of things are really important in fanfiction. I hope you recovered okay from your 'seasickness'. I'm flattered that you felt my story was that engaging that you would say that! Thank you.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 20/07/11 - 07:28 pm · For: Chapter 2.b
this was as amazing as the other chapters. You did as well with Temari as you did with Gaara. If you can do this well with Kishimoto's characters, I'm starting to wonder what you can do with your own. You are just so fantastic when it comes to writing. I love it. If they would ever have someone write Naruto in book form, I so say you should be the one to do it. The way you can so easily adapt to the characters and write how they think and act is uncanny.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! That's quite the compliment. I'm really flattered that you think so highly of me. *blushes*
There are plenty of OCs in this story, although you might find my presentation style with them a little different. Well, we'll just have to see what you think as(if) you read on. Thank you for the reviews! They mean a lot and really made my day when I saw them!