Ah very nice mission chapter and fairly long one at that. I was afraid Kakashi and all of them were going to get angry at Riku for stealing but I'm glad they understood. Ah I see you used Yen, in Naruto they use Ryo. Just a small error :P

Anyways good chapter, can't wait to see the next one.

Author's Response: My goodness, I actually never noticed that o Ao;; Thanks for the heads up xD

Nice chapter! I was impressed with your description of her genjutsu. It was very gruesome, I liked it :D So she's learning the basics, well everyone's gotta start somewhere. Keep it up :)

Author's Response: I was so worried it was too detailed, but if that level of description is alright then that's a relief ^^; Keeping it up, I shall! Thanks a ton for the review ^^

Awesome update. Off to read more!

The Youkugan is a pretty interesting bloodline trait. The ability to turn take aspects of genjutsu and make them real is pretty original. Nice update as usual. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Ahaa, thank you very much ^^;; I'm trying really hard to keep the OC's techniques original, so hopefully they aren't too similar to anything else :'D Thanks for reading ^^

It's great to see an update for you, it really is. I know not much didn't happen in this chapter but it was really awesome. I'm sad though that her a Rokobi had a falling out over Sasuke. It was a great way to show just how much Rayne cares about Sasuke though. You really portrayed Sasuke well too, his bipolar personality really showed in this chapter. Well I hope you update soon, great chapter.

Absolutely amazing. The development was so pure and detailed and the feelings and everything. It's almost too much to explain. The meeting was so sudden too. Some might say it was too sudden but I think it was perfect - just like this whole story. I'll be looking for the next update.

Author's Response: Ah, thank you :D I really went for Sasuke's emo-tions here (LOOK AT THAT! A PUN!) I didn't want to tip toe around the time line and make filler chapters, hence the quick meeting. Rayne wants to get down to business! Thanks again(: Xoxoxo!

ZOMG yes!
This was beyond epic and I'm beyond excited to get reading the rest of the story whenever you decide to post it. The journey will be long, yes! But I am willing to go through with the whole story. So please Tink, lead us on this epic journey that is a story :D

Author's Response: You're right, this is going to be a long, arduous journey. I'm happy to have you along :D Next chapter is soooon~

Haha so many sexy moments in this chapter ;P
Though I am glad her and Naruto reunited!
Disobeying the rules ahh classic Rayne, hopefully yamato will understand.
As usual great chapter! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I~couldn't~help myself~ x) Yamato was in the way, so, y'anno >_> ..It will come soon!! And it will be EPIC *A* Thank ou for reading & reviewing! Xoxo (:

think this is the first time you've taken my advice to update soon :P but god damn did I love it. I will admit that sasuke was a little ooc but in a good way. Sometimes characters need to be broken from their roles based on the way others interact with them, in this case, Rayne. In one of my stories I completely rearranged sasuke as he became older and well I liked it because that's the true human part, the ability to change. So what I'm getting at is that you portray human nature very well and that's something I can appreciate as a writer (though I feel like I can barely call myself one). Everyone thinks you have to abide by keeping a character in character but I think it's perfectly fine to break away from those roles. I was very surprised at the ending, sasuke wanting to go back to Konoha with Rayne. Well update soon and happy thanksgiving

Hm I think you did an Awesome job! I don't think Sasuke was OOC at all, because of the things Itachi said, it was perfectly fine for him to feel those feelings. I think everything went really well! Great job and update soon :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad to have gotten positive feedback, because I was definitely nervous about this chapter >u< I updated!! Twice in one week! Whooooo!! :D Thank you for looking at the story again and reading my update. I know I suck~ Xoxo

Jeez Sasuke can be so fucked up sometines. Intentionally pissing off Rayne so that he could test his limits? Jeeeeeeeeeez.

I was laughing at the whole massage part. Never did I think I would see Sasuke accusing someone of being a pervert.

So i'm starting to get the sense that Sasuke is affectionate towards her. I'm excited to see where that goes. Great chapter!

I'm not a big fan of cross overs just because I could never get into the idea of a human being transported into the naruto world. Idk it just never interested me

That being said there's a couple of things in this I wanna point out and don't take it the wrong way I just have a different opinion on some things.

#3 on how the end up there- personally I have no problem with tragic accidents, it's a nice alternative to heaven and hell. Personally I don't have any religious views but to me it makes sense. I did think of a cross over once about a soldier serving in Afghanistan or Iraq or whatever and he gets caught up in an intense fire fight and dies and then wakes up in the naruto world. I realize they are dead but nobody in Naruto actually exists either, sort of like a nether realm sort of deal if you get what I mean. I may be over thinking this but I kinda thought about it.

#4 Language barriers- Yes they speak Japanese but I think that's taking it a bit to literally. I rarely see people who japanese through out the whole story in a fan fiction and I don't think you yourself uses Japanese either. Pretty much just plop them into the English dubbed version of Naruto :P

Except for that you had some pretty awesome points pertaining to a cross over fic and I know a lot of people will use your advice :D

Author's Response: I've seen a few cases where the whole dying thing pans out, but overall it's not something that novice writers should try their hands at until they get a bit more experience. Mainly because when you go that route you really need to explore the psychological aspects of it all, which most people tend to ignore. No, I don't use Japanese in my stories because my characters already speak it so it would be pointless for me to just write my entire fic in Japanese. However, when you have a character who doesn't speak it you need to give an explanation of why they suddenly do. Because I can tell you right now that if I was plopped down into the Naruto world I would only be able to understand someone when they cussed at me XD. Plopping them into the English version works as well, but I can't stand the dubbed version of Naruto so I just prefer not to go that route XD.

Thank you very much for your review and encouragement :)!

Can I talk to you about this character? I have an idea for him, not as the main character but as a side character.

Author's Response: Sure you can, Itoko-san. That's the purpose ;).