im really confused with all the plot developement. You add info tht wasn't there in the chapter// som wich could be connected but the story is just getting slopy now.

Author's Response: I know things have gotten sloppy with this - I started writing this a year ago and I could devote all the time in the world towards it. But now I have a daughter and work and school so I work on this when I have a bit of time and most of the time I'm just not inspired sadly enough - but I love the story and want to finish it so I work on it anyways. X.XrnrnThanks for the reviews though! It really does help since otherwise I'm only going from my own reading and to me, since I'm the writer and know what's going to happen, it makes sense for me.