Reviews For Phoenix Flight
Name: blacknova (Signed) · Date: 27/01/11 - 04:08 pm · For: The Begining
i personally really like the story. it has jumped around but it seems more realistic since in reality you never know what is going to happen in life.please keep going i really want to see how it ends. (^^)
Name: belovedly_loveless (Signed) · Date: 23/03/10 - 04:20 pm · For: The Begining
I agree with reviews below. Things are rather rushed and ooc seems to be the norm with this story so I suppose that's alright. Its good. Please continue. Also, maybe you could put spaces between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 10:47 pm · For: The Begining
......the dance was nice but as i said before the events and reactions seemed rushed , try just making the details longer and clearer
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 10:47 pm · For: The Begining
......the dance was nice but as i said before the events and reactions seemed rushed , try just making the details longer and clearer
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 26/12/09 - 10:30 pm · For: The Begining
....well the story seems okay. a bit confusing on how the got there, all the events seemed bunched to gether and her unusal abilities seem to show up way too early for the story but thats just my option