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Penname: mst88 [Contact]
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Love to write. I've loved Naruto since it's intro to the US. I'm over 21 lol

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Title: Happy Birthday Kakashi by Maia Nishikawa
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Today, September 15, is Kakashi's birthday. I wanted to write this for today. Enjoy.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Kakashi Hatake
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 2547 | Read count: 1274 [Report This]
Published: 15/09/13 | Updated: 15/09/13


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 16/09/13 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday Kakashi

Awe I like this. I remembered it was his birthday!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!



Title: Forsaken Heirs by Voyna
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: [AU] Postwar. The first bought a Hyūga on sale, paying with his pride and honor. A good bargain, since he had little left to begin with. He only hoped it was a quality womb. The second sold off for the good of those to come. There was little to expect in the department of private life anyways. And the third suffered. SasuHinaKō.
Category: Het Romance > Angst, Het Romance > Warned
Characters: Hinata Hyuuga, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Death, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 | Completed: No | Word count: 42193 | Read count: 986 [Report This]
Published: 15/10/13 | Updated: 13/09/14


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 10/04/14 Title: Chapter 4: Caged Birds

Can't tell you how happy I was to see an update for this story! Wow what a update it was. There was so much of this chapter I liked(the affair between Hinata's father and Kiba's mom, that was superb. I certainly hope that you will be writing more, I've missed this story a lot.

Author's Response: I am so touched you reviewed! I missed writing to people that actually take the time to write a few lines!!! I am trying to change the pace to this story, I felt it was too introductory for now. But the chapter in itself is not even finished, I have a few more 9000 words to write, to seal the young woman and to get going with the plot. And yes, I couldn't keep quite about Tsume and Hiashi ... because I need Hana to twist this plot (I know you are thinking about the obvious here, Hana being Hiashi's first child, but not really where I want to go ... sorry for spoiling) >.< And by the way, I loved your Next Room oneshot! It was GOLD! (besides what someone wrote you in their reviews). Really reminded me of some old school short stories.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 16/10/13 Title: Chapter 1: Sisters

Very much looking forward to the next chapter. I do envy your writing style, nice and smooth.

Author's Response: I can't believe I received a review. I must admit that I am so very flattered and touched. I am quite aware how difficult it is to get reviews on TONFA, especially for a non-canon pairing that also implies a character that was barely seen in the series. Thank you so very much for your encouragements. And if you do permit, I would like to read your own fanfiction. It seems intriguing actually, and I rarely feel intrigued by original characters.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 16/10/13 Title: Chapter 2: The Bodyguard

This just keeps getting better! Superb writing, I enjoy seeing lesser know characters get their time to shine in a story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: And you are back! I will tell you a very stalkerish secret. I waited with great excitement for your review, not that much because it praises the story, but I did feel that maybe you were a less conventional fanfic reader and that you might actually enjoy the novelty of lesser known characters. Now, I must admit that since you are my only reviewer on this site, I do keep you in the back of my mind when I write, and I am a tid bit anxious that you will not like it and that I will end up with no follower whatsoever (yes, egocentric, I know). The next chapter is a little bit of a far stretch, you could seriously hate it or be okay with it. What does worry be though is the fact that it will still take one or two chapters before we squeeze our main Sasu-boy in there and you might get bored. All that to say thank you! I really, really do care about reviews and they do make me want to update as fast as possible.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 18/10/13 Title: Chapter 3: Fate

Another great chapter! I couldn't help shedding a tear about Neji but that's just me lol. I just love the personality you have given Ko, seems so fitting for some reason, makes me wish I lived in their world lol. Yeah I'm weird like that. As always I'm looking forward to reading the next installment!

Author's Response: I always loved Neji, maybe more than any other character (besides maybe Kisame, and yes I already have written a KisaHina fanfiction, if you are wondering). His death really shook me to my foundations. But at the same time I couldn't but give him a role in this fanfiction, maybe because I am worried he will be forgiven. It is the bitterness of his death that made me show him in a different light, as more willful. I guess that when it comes to Naruto, I would as well like to be part of their world, to interact with them on a friendly basis. As for good old Ko, when you watch the anime, he has a personality at times but he is not really developped (and in the manga, he appears one time and has a big nose, gee), so whatever I do with him, there will be OOCness. So why not embrace it wholly! My Ko is a 32-year-old man who wants to kiss the dust a 19-year-old girl walks on. Fetichism? All the way!



Title: The Son of the Sannin by GorillaGeneral
Rated: 15 Round robin Liked [Reviews - 4]
Summary: What would the world be like if Naruto was adopted by the Sannin? What would life be like if the blond hero was taught, raised, and loved by all three legendary shinobi? Whose lives would be better and whose lives would be different?
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Anko Mitarashi, Iruka Umino, Jiraiya, Naruto Uzumaki, Orochimaru, Shizune, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 | Completed: No | Word count: 28036 | Read count: 6814 [Report This]
Published: 18/10/13 | Updated: 16/12/13


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 18/10/13 Title: Chapter 7: Blessings and Curses

Talk about a twist, I'm enjoying this version of the Naruto world lol



Title: Alone Together by beisenman1892
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Naruto Uzumaki, Sasuke Uchiha, and Kumori Naito are three very different people. But they all share one similarity. They are all orphans. But what if they were all placed together at a young age. Could these three, whom al have known true loneliness, become friends and comrades. Slightly smarter, and stronger Naruto, good Sasuke, and OC's.
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 30216 | Read count: 6451 [Report This]
Published: 08/12/13 | Updated: 06/02/14


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 14/12/13 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm really liking this. You know I kind of wondered about the Uchiha compound, I like your explanation *grin*

Author's Response: I figure that he will eventually return to it, just not at the moment.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 11/12/13 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Looking forward to see where this is going!



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 12/01/14 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

All caught up! look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Hope your enjoying it.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 04/02/14 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter. I like the dynamics of their team, they compliment each other. Can't wait for the Zabuza meeting!!



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 07/02/14 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Always love reading a good fight! I must commend you on writing out all those hands signs wow :)



Title: Uchiha Legacy: Redemption by Midan no Hatake
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A murdered musician is recruited by the Shinigami in order to contain a threat to his world. Her rebirth into the Uchiha Clan of Konoha is simply a side note. What matters is what she does with her time.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Fantasy
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 5409 | Read count: 2711 [Report This]
Published: 14/01/14 | Updated: 01/02/14


Reviewer: mst88 Signed
Date: 16/01/14 Title: Chapter 1: Part One: Sophia

This is interesting, I'm going to keep an eye out of an update.

Author's Response: Update up! Enjoy and tell me what you like about this. The next chapter is a quarter way through.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 01/02/14 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two: Mika

Really enjoying this story, for the fact that it's different. Awe baby Sasuke

Author's Response: That is very encouraging, the fact that people think my stories are different. They're mostly influenced by all the fantasy and science fiction that I've read and loved and Baby Sasuke is adorable when I see him in my mind's eye. The next chapter should be ready in a week or so -my job is full time and full of pressure occasionally.



Title: Broken Memory by Nishu96
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Kabuto finds a little girl with an injury on her head. The normally cold hearted boy decides to help her but can somebody like him really take care of a child?
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Kabuto Yakushi
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 | Completed: No | Word count: 1243 | Read count: 1095 [Report This]
Published: 19/01/14 | Updated: 20/01/14


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 20/01/14 Title: Chapter 2: The Seal

This is interesting so far, my interest is peaked.



Title: The Ten Tails by lovinganimetoomuch27
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 130]
Summary: Kiyoko doesn't know what home is. The ninja from her village are coming after the power she holds inside, but she doesn't even know what she hold inside. It talks to her, begging her to let it control. Afraid and alone she settles for a lonely life, that's before she meets a knuckle head ninja. He takes her to the Leaf and somehow she finds a home in someone who thinks of her.
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Angst
Characters: Pair OCKaka
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 117 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 377039 | Read count: 73306 [Report This]
Published: 20/01/14 | Updated: 17/07/17


Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 20/06/14 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Eri, trying to be matchmaker lol.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 19/06/14 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Those were some really great chapters! I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: thank you so much for reading!



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 29/06/14 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I love the tender Kiyoko and Kakashi moments!



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 01/04/14 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww Kakashi



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 26/06/14 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Oh man the past returns. Another good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!!



Reviewer: mst88 Signed
Date: 16/02/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh goodness Kiyoko seems cornered.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 10/07/14 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

That. Was. Great!

Author's Response: thank you so much! I love that you're enjoying my story.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 06/07/14 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Those e a wonderful bunch of chapters to catch up on, well done!

Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad that you're still reading my story.



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 03/06/14 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Got caught up on both chapters, the anticipation for what will happen next is overwhelming lol



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 05/06/14 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Hmm interesting ;)



Reviewer: mst88 Signed Liked
Date: 28/03/14 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Whew I needed a little down time after that last chapter. Look forward to the next chapter!