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Penname: Sasaui Uchiha [Contact]
Real name:
Membership status: Member
Member since: 13/12/09
Website: fanfictionwriters.webs.com
Beta-reader: No
Fanfictions

Cursed Saint is one of my main stories. It is my most popular story as well, and I hope you like it. It's about a new addition to Konoha, Ryu Sarutobi, the "adopted "grandson of Hiruzen Sarutobi.

Final Wish is my newest Naruto fanfiction. It is a response to my own Naruto challenge, The Nemuri Promise. A trailer has not been written for it, but will be eventually.

Retribution is a co-written story with me and Itoko-san (Shizake Uchiha). It is alternatively updated by the two of us. It will not have a preview/trailer written for it.

Will of the Dragon is my only non-Naruto story on here. It is a One Piece fanfiction, and it is also a SYOC/Joint story, depending on if it is here or if it is at fanfiction.net. Characters are still being accepted and probably will be throughout much of the story.

Bio Part

Why you are looking here is beyond me. Though since you're here, I may as well let you know who I am (writer wise. I don't feel like getting any stalkers, thank you very much). How about we just start with the basics and slowly build, huh?

Basics

User Name: Sasaui Uchiha. It's probably obvious, but you can just call me Sasaui (pronounced Saw-say-you. Yes, it's weird. That's because I made it up). The only other nickname I've gotten is Kawa-cha from the fabulous Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies).

Likes: I enjoy walking and thinking. It's a strange hobby, I know, but I love it. I also enjoy reading all the amazing stories on this site. So yeah, a lot of them. I enjoy making new friends and talking to Silverwolf and DestinyGirl on Fanfictionwriters.webs.com, my site. They're the ones who are always on there, so I have fun talking to them. As is probably obvious, I love to write.

Dislikes: Cuss words. I can deal with them in writing since I can change them in my mind, but I hate hearing them out loud because I can't do it the same way. I also don't like either Orochimaru or the Joker. I can't figure out which is creepier. Orochimaru just creeps me out because of a nightmare I had about him and the Joker..... Well, if you need an explanation for him, you obviously have not seen him. I also don't like people who are cruel to others just because of their own selfish desires.

Hobbies: Well, like I said before, I have a strange hobby of walking while thinking. Another couple are reading and typing. One of my hobbies you don't know of but is slowly becoming my favorite is Karate. Since October 23, 2011, I have been a yellow belt. I can't remember when I started except that it was last year while I was in the eighth grade around the end of winter. I only remember it was then because we didn't have to run. Another hobby I have is drawing even if I'm not all that good at it. You'll see some of my drawings on the bios I have for my characters in Tainted Guardian.

Personality: Most importantly, I am a Pentecostal Christian. Most important thing about me. I'm a mostly nice person. The only time I say anything mean is when I'm joking. I'll give anything a chance if it catches my interest or if someone asks me to read it unless it's rated 18 for sexual reasons or if it's yaoi/yuri. Christian, remember? I'm also very protective, something that will be shown in my characters. Another thing that may reflect in my characters is how I hate violence and unnecessary pain. It's strange that I hate it yet I'm in Karate, huh? But that's only because I've more or less been raised fighting my older brother. I also believe it's wrong to hurt someone for hurting you. If you already know what it feels like, why be so cruel as to make them go through the same pain?


Favorites

Now we'll get into some random favorites of mine. Why? Well, because. If you don't want to know this information, nobody said you had to read. The number of favorites will vary and I doubt many of the things will be in order.

Favorite Sport: Karate
Favorite Color(s): White and Black
Favorite Food: Chicken
Favorite type of Food: Asian
Favorite Animal: Wolf
Favorite Quote: For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, so whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

Favorite Authors/Books:
1)Richelle Mead: Vampire Academy and Bloodlines series
2)Rick Riordan: Percy Jackson and the Olympians and The Heroes of Olympus series
3)Suzanne Collins: Hunger Games series
4) Kelly Armstrong: Darkest Powers series
5) J.K Rowling: Harry Potter series

Favorite Characters from Favorite Books
1) Rose from VA and Adrian from Bloodlines
2) Pery or Luke in PJatO and either Percy, Jason, or possibly Leo for THoO series
3) Peeta. Sorry, Katniss, but I like him better.
4) Derek, definitely Derek.
5) Sirius Black

Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto
2) Kenichi: The Strongest Disciple
3) Psyren
4) Breaker: New Waves
5) Breaker (the first of the manwha series. Manwha is Korean manga)
6) Dragon Quest Dai no Daiboken
7) Fairy Tail
8) Bleach
9) Rave Master
10) O-Parts Hunter
11) 1/2 Prince
12) Hunter x Hunter
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Characters from Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, or Nagato. Yes, I'm stuck on all 4.
2)Kenichi
3)Ageha Yoshina
4) Shioon
5) Still Shioon
6) Dai
7) Natsu
8) Keisuke Urahara
9) Haru
10) Jio
11) Gui
12) Gon
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Anime (including movies):
1) Spirited Away
2) Princess Mononoke
3) Naruto
4) Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple
5) Claymore
6) Does The Last Airbender count as Anime?
7) Yu-Gi-Oh
8) Dragon Ball (Z, GT)


Favorite Character from Favorite Anime:
1) Haku
2) Ashitaka
3) Again it's between Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, and Nagato
4) Kenichi
5) Rocky
6) Zuko
7) Between Yugi and Yusei
8) Either Goku, Trunks, or Vegeta

Favorite Video Games:
1) Kingdom Hearts
2) Pokemon: Black
3) .Hack
4) Final Fantasy 7
5) Chrono Cross
6) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core

Favorite Character from Favorite Game:
1) It's between Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku
2) I think I'd say N for this
3) Haseo
4) Cloud
5) Serge or Glenn
6) Zack

Favorite Bands:
1) Thousand Foot Krutch
2) Red
3) Pillar
4) Skillet
5) Story of the Year
6) Crossfade
7) Breaking Benjamin
8) Three Days Grace
9)Sr-71
10) Simple Plan

Well, I think that's all for bands.......

Favorite Song(s) by Favorite Bands:
1) Between The Part that Hurts the Most (Is You), Faith, Love, and Happiness, and Slow Bleed
2) Between Death of Me and Shadows I think......
3) Not Without A Fight
4) Hero
5) Just Close Your Eyes
6) Colors
7) I Will Not Bow
8) Never Too Late or Break
9) Tomorrow
10) Save You

Now I believe I am done with favorites. Sheesh, that was a long list.......

Writer

As a writer, and by that I do not mean fanfiction writer but an actual writer, I have written one complete story that keeps jumping around in page length for some recent. The first time I checked it was 400+ pages and then it was suddenly 600+ pages next time I checked. I have a million other ideas swirling around in my head, but I haven't written most of them mostly because I've been focusing on this one story. I've been trying to get a literacy agent and before long I may just have one. Fingers crossed and prays being sent.

Fanfiction

I didn't even know what fanfiction was until I was in the fifth grade. That's when I learned about it and it was by complete accident. Some kid I knew was showing around pictures of Naruto. I got a few of the pictures, and there was a link at the bottom - Narutoworld.com. Curious, I went to it.

Sadly, Narutoworld no longer has a part for fanfiction. When I first visited it, though, it did. I checked it out because I wanted to see what it was and that is where I first read fanfiction. I still remember the two that I actually read, too. Well, one title and another one just what it was about. The first one was Colors of Life and Death. It's funny that it's actually here on Tonfa now. The other was about a girl who had known Sasuke as a child returning to Konoha. It showed them bonding again and everything, until the end where Itachi returned and killed her. It was during this time I even found out about fanfiction.

Since the fanfiction part of Narutoworld was taken off, I began to search for a new fanfiction site. Somehow during this search, I found Tonfa. After reading a few of the fanfictions, mostly one done by an author maybe a few of you know known as WolfTeam000. She was a great author and is probably the main reason I stuck with fanfiction rather than got bored. I've recently refound her on Fanfiction.net writing Fairy Tail fanfiction because I got bored and looked at her fanfiction.net account and saw she had updated. Then my friends began to vary and more people began writing wonderful stories such as RowanRose's Kokoro Uchiha fanfic. It started way back when. Sheesh, I feel old yet I'm only 15.

My first ever fanfiction was similar to Never Too Late: a girl came to Konoha to help team 7 with the chuunin exams. The only thing was it was with Naruto and Sakura and Sasuke had actually run off to Orochimaru. The girl's name was still Kina, she had the same kekkei genkai, but she was working for Sasuke and had a demon in her. That's not how it is now. It was called Unknown Secret, which is also the name of Never Too Late's first arc.

After this fanfiction, I began to write a few more, most of which shall never see the light of day again. One that has stuck with me, though, since around when I first began as Bre2k8 is Tainted Guardian. Some may remember it as Sasaui Uchiha. It was inspired after reading a few SasuOc fanfics where the female of the group was another survivor. Primarily this was Crimson Lily's fanfic, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms.

Now I am mostly where I am today, still working on stories I came up later on and even reviving a few of my ideas from back when I was Bre2k8. I've made some great friends and am very glad I joined Tonfa.

Fanfictionwriters.webs.com

This is my website. If anyone is just looking for a very weird place to hang out and be strange, this is a place you should go. Though I must warn you, it may be too strange and make you go insane.



YOUR STORY Reward

YOUR STORY is the best compliment I will give a person. If you get out of this world or something similar or weird (such as eight thumbs up), then you're really close to YOUR STORY. Or I just forget to tell you =P. Anyway, it's basically like saying that your story is just so great, it becomes an adjective itself that explains its awesomeness because no adjective can. Does that make sense?

Anyway, here's a list of the stories (that I remember) are on the YOUR STORY list:





Reincarnation of a Legend by Silverwofl213
Rekindle the Lost Flame by Silverwolf1213
Pirates of the Mist by Silverwolf1213
The White Rose by Silverwolf1213
Broken Wings by Destiny Girl
Beneath the Darkness by DestinyGirl
How to Adapt and Overcome by xXxTiNkXxX
Rotes Blut by BattyBigSister
She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Child of Hex by JubileeOfPuppies
Endeavor by JubileeOfPuppies
Space Children by Firestar83
Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
The Naruto Games by Konan
Three Days by Silverwolf1213
Stereotype by DropDeadThenDance
Cygnus Olor by RowanRose
Reality Check by UzamakiMasumi
A Tale Best Told Dead by Silverwolf1213
The Path Each Takes series by Shizake Uchiha
Reverse This Curse by xXxTiNkXxX
The Princess and The Freeman by BrontesWorld and DropDeadThenDance

If I have told you that your story is YOUR STORY but forgot to mention it, please let me know.


So, now that my bio is finally ended, those who deemed it worthy enough to read, you can rest your eyes.

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Stories by Sasaui Uchiha [14]
Series by Sasaui Uchiha [2]
Challenges by Sasaui Uchiha [5]
Favorite Series [1]
Sasaui Uchiha's Favorites [96]
Reviews by Sasaui Uchiha


Title: The Tale of Two Souls by TKDC14
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Who are you?

My name is Harashi Utako. I am the soul within your soul.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenges: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Challenge: , The Ultimate OC Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 15039 | Read count: 12196 [Report This]
Published: 20/12/09 | Updated: 21/08/10


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 08/02/10 Title: Chapter 4: Soul Within Soul

0_0...She kissed him (on the forehead)! Only snot face. Oh, and sorry it took me so long to review. I didn't notice you came out with another chapter.

Author's Response: Oh it\'s okay. I try really hard to get one chapter out a week, but it doesnt work out that way because of school and stuff. And YES she kissed him on the forehead. ^_^



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 23/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: Losing

Holy terd monkeys......Poor Sora. I feel really bad for her. Hey, that Failure's Not An Option thing, could I use it as a title in one of my stories? The Torikago one?

Author's Response: Yes... poor Sora.... :(\r\n\r\nAnd of course. You can use it for one of your stories. I actually stole it from an episode of Naruto. :D



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/01/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Konoha

=D!!! I'm so happy that Sora and Sasuke are back together (you know what I mean by that). I can't wait to read the next chapter. I love this whole story so far!

Author's Response: Hahaha yea I know what you mean. The next chapter gets better! But that\'s my opinion. Frankly, I don\'t believe that I\'m a good writer...but I still think it\'s okay.\r\n\r\nHaha....well I love that you love the story!!!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Let's Start the Explanations....

Hm... It has a very interesting begining. I can't wait to read the story part. By the way, could you read my story, Sasaui Zarkuru. It's about another person in the Naruto world, too.

Author's Response: I\'ve never put much thought into Sora Hideki. She just came up one day after I read a few chapter of the Narutp manga. It was odd, but I went along with it, playing scenarios in my head. I\'ve never actually thought of putting it in writing until now! \r\nAnd of course, I\'ll read your story. It sounds interesting.



Title: Russian Roulette by Queen Diva
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Sometimes the actions of people can effect the flow of time while the altering of events can change the course of the future...
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: Akatsuki, Danzou Shimura, Hinata Hyuuga, Kabuto Yakushi, Kushina Uzumaki, Kyuubi (Kurama), Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Pair OCNaru, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst, Dark, Drama, Romance, Spiritual, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death, OOC, Sexual Themes
Challenges: , An Avenger
Challenge: , An Avenger
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 4039 | Read count: 1890 [Report This]
Published: 26/12/09 | Updated: 08/01/10


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I

Wow. I don't get the name at all, but I love the story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, Diva-kisaki! (Kisaki means queen)



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 08/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter III

I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read the next one Diva-kisaki



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 02/01/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter II

I loved this chapter, Diva-kisaki! Please update soon! I absolutely love it!



Title: Who? by Rowanrose
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A small raven haired foundling wonders about her forgotten life.
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 517 | Read count: 1399 [Report This]
Published: 06/04/10 | Updated: 06/04/10


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 07/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Who Am I?

T-T Poor Kokoro! I hope she meets Sasuke soon in your other story. She deserves to meet her true family! Or maybe there could be another twist and she simply meets someone from Konoha.

Author's Response: ^^ Oh, yeah, you\'ll find out what happens. It\'ll be awesome, seriously, thinking about it is making me excited!



Title: Kokoro Uchiha Bingo Book by Rowanrose
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: This is the official Kokoro Uchiha bingo book. Character bios and more will be available shortly. View pictures of Kokoro and other characters, learn more about Kokoro's world.
Category: Fan Ninja Bingo Book > OC-Bios, Fan Ninja Bingo Book > Story Information
Characters: All
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 2 | Read count: 6161 [Report This]
Published: 22/04/10 | Updated: 04/05/10


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Kokoro Uchiha Bingo Book

I really liked the pictures, Rose-chan, and I can't wait to to see the pictures of everyone else.

Author's Response: I\'lll try to put them up quickly! I found a 15 year old (or 14, really mature 13) Shun, but i can\'t find a 12 or 9. I found a perfect Okumaru though...



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 23/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Kokoro Uchiha and Sasuke

Wow. I love the picture of Kokoro, even if it looks way older than eleven. Do you know the person who drew it or did you just get it off the internet?

Author's Response: In the picture, Kokoro isn\'t eleven. She\'s ages 12-13. Yeah, i just got it off the internet. Lucky find, huh?



Title: Freedom Fighters by FireFox
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Tsunade continued from where she left off, “The Akatsuki is stronger than ever, there are only a few villages that haven’t bowed to them. We’ve received this letter, telling us to obey them. We do it, or risk being destroyed. We must figure out what to do.”

"We Fight."
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 | Completed: No | Word count: 10491 | Read count: 8837 [Report This]
Published: 30/05/10 | Updated: 06/07/10


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 07/07/10 Title: Chapter 7: 4th of July Special :D

Cool. You really did do the special. I wasn't sure if you were joking or not. It's really good, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I can't believe I forgot to add Sai on the pairings. I feel bad now. I'm glad he got someone who loves him. Please write more soon.

Author's Response: I don\'t joke *serious face* \r\n...\r\nPfftt; hurhurr....Fanks for likin it <3 And yes poor Sai D: who I, too, ended up forgetting about :3 aah wwellll, if he wanted more screen time in this story he hasta speak up. Like Tenten, she has to learn how to start talking; coz she gets less time than some of the random characters in there....like, I\'m sure a cabbage man probably has more screen time than her...\r\nAnywayy; thanks for reading! I promise to write more sooon :D



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I don't think it was boring. Do you have a catigory that says funniest story around? Just the way everyone acts is hilarious. I can't wait to read th next chapter, Caty-chan. And Neji's a big, fat jerk!

Author's Response: ah >///< Thanks!!! I was hoping it wasn\'t as boring as I thought. In all honesty, I thought it was too serious for my style :3 I\"m glad you enjoyed it so much, it really makes my day :D



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

HAHAHA! Funniest bio I've ever read. I really loved it. I was laughing most of the time. And her brother's a bad guy? Man, that's just a big spoiler! Oh well. Good job on the eyes, Caty-chan. Off to read ch. 5



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 04/06/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this story, and I'm surprised nobody has commented on it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please write more soon, Firefox. Also, you did really good with the whole paragraph when someone new is writing thing. Great job! Oh, and could you read my story, Sasaui Uchiha. If not, it's okay. I swear. =)

Author's Response: Please, call me Caty or Caitlin, FireFox is too formal :D Thank you so much for reading it and giving me pointers and such, I highly appreciate it! And I\'d love to read your story, I\'ll head right over and read it (: Thanks again!!\r\n<3 Yours truely,\r\nCaty. :D

Author's Response: Please, call me Caty or Caitlin, FireFox is too formal :D Thank you so much for reading it and giving me pointers and such, I highly appreciate it! And I\'d love to read your story, I\'ll head right over and read it (: Thanks again!!\r\n<3 Yours truely,\r\nCaty. :D



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What happened to Animal I've Become?

Author's Response: I\'ve decided to work on it moree before releasing it :D I want to just focus on this one more for right now. Someone said some things on my other story, and I respect their ideas for it, and I plan on working on it to make it more enjoyable X3 I hope that\'s okay with you of course!!! <3 I promise once I get this one on track you\'ll be seeing it again;) Thanks for noticing it\'s not up anymore, makes me feel like someone is actually watching what I do <3 \r\n:D \r\n<3



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 01/07/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

First of all, that jerkface Sasuke really doesn't deserve love. I say he can go jump in a lake. I really can't wait for the action, and I love your story. I really don't get why nobody else is reviewing. It's a great story. Get the next chapter out soon, please!

Author's Response: Everyone deserves love *waves hand around stupidly*\r\n\r\nHe just deserves it less than others; XD \r\nThanks <33 I appreciate itt; (: Have a lovely 4th of July <3\r\n...\r\nOHSNAP I CAN MAKE A 4TH OF JULY SPECIAL :DDDDD



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 06/06/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay, I really really really loved this chapter! I can't wait to read the next one, Caty-chan! Or is that -chan part still too formal? Anyway, as for the pairings go, I'm just going with the first ones that come to mind.

SasuSaku (since I have no idea who else to make suffer with the jerk =D)
NaruHina (I say they go together after one of the newer chapters in Naruto, but I won't tell you what happened incase you haven't heard)
ShikaTema (are you even going to have the sand siblings?)
ChouIno (I have no idea why, but I think this is a good pairing)
And, surprisngly, I think NejiOC (Oc=Caty). I don't know why, but I think that would be good.
LeeTen (no reason for this, just first in head)
And Gaara x Matsuri, the girl in the Ultimate Weapon arc of plain Naruto.
As for Shino, Kiba, and Kankuro, you may have to make Ocs 'cause I've ran out of girls. =(
Oh well. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You thought Neji and Caty too? :D My friend thought the same thing, haha. And I like Caty-chan, it has a ring to it. Call whatever you please though. (: I\'m happy you enjoyed it. And yes, I am up-to-date on the manga, so I know what you are talking about with the whole Hinata-Naruto thing, which was cute if I do say so myself. Gaara, Temari, and Kankuro are going to come in, it wouldn\'t be a story without them :D Lee and Tenten are good. Matsuri loves Gaara obviously, but I\'m not sure yet to make it an one-sided love or not, haha. Maybe I\'ll have some fun and make a triangle with Kiba-Hinata-Naruto, I always thought it looked like Kiba cared for Hinata, so maybe that\'d be good. \r\n\r\nMaybe I\'ll make Sasuke single, just cuz, well, he\'s kinda mean, haha. Sooo then it\'d be like...a Kiba-Hinata-Naruto-Sakura thing. Oh my. \r\n\r\nThanks so much for the review! I appreciate it!! (: I\'m glad you enjoyed! <3



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 31/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So far it's really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, after someone talks like, for example: "Hello, my name's Sasaui." I said. You don't put a period, you put a comma like this: "Hello, my name's Sasaui," I said. Just wanted to tell you this because you didn't do that unless I missed a few times you did.

Author's Response: Ah yes :D Sorry about that, I\'ll be sure to fix that next time <33 thank so much for your advice :D



Title: This must be... by SBgirl04
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Sometimes you could use a break from reality. I know I did, but not in the way I had imagined. It was out of this world... Or, well, out of my world anyway. For every unexpected experience I had, all I could utter was,

"This must be..."
Category: General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 10295 | Read count: 5540 [Report This]
Published: 10/06/10 | Updated: 01/02/17


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 07/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: This must be... heaven.

I like it so far. I'll read the rest the second I get. I wonder what's going to happen to the girl now. Anyway, can you read my two new stories, even if Tori Kago is only bios for now..... Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and sure! I\'ll read your stories! I\'ve noticed that you\'ve been reading all of mine so, I should return the favor. Thanks a bunch for that! :D



Title: ~Angel or Devil?~ by luna45
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!
Naomi Yoshida was home-schooled all her life and now she's going to Konoha Private High school. At first it was all fun and games but what happens when good, funny, clumsy Uzumaki Naruto and leader of the Hebi gang, bad, rebel Uchiha Sasuke both want her?
WARNINGS MAY CHANGE!!!!
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > High School Fics
Characters: Asuma Sarutobi, Chouji Akimichi, Gaara, Maito Gai, Hinata Hyuuga, Ino Yamanaka, Iruka Umino, Itachi Uchiha, Jiraiya, Juugo, Kakashi Hatake, Karin, Kiba Inuzuka, Kurenai Yuuhi, Rock Lee, Naruto Uzumaki, Neji Hyuuga, Sai, Sakura Haruno, Sasori, Sasuke Uchiha, Shikamaru Nara, Shino Aburame, Shizune, Suigetsu Hoozuki, Temari, Tenten, Tsunade
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 | Completed: No | Word count: 30074 | Read count: 22986 [Report This]
Published: 28/06/10 | Updated: 31/01/13


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 17/07/10 Title: Chapter 3: The Hell Children

I loved this chapter, Luna45! I hope you write more soon, because it's a great story. I'll be eagerly awaiting for the next chapter.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked it. I can't wait to read more. Think you could read my story? You don't have to if you don't want to. I was just wondering if you could. Oh, but I see a lot of places missing periods and stuff.

Author's Response: Thanks! :D and sure I can read your story, what\'s the name of it?



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/10/10 Title: Chapter 6: Enemies Since Childhood

Really great chapter, luna45! It's a great story and I can't wait for the next update, which I hope is soon. I can't wait to see if Naomi and Naruto's relationship gets a bit stronger than just friends.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/09/10 Title: Chapter 4: First encouter

Great chapter, Luna45. I really liked it, and I also wonder what Sasuke means. Please write more soon, because I love the story. I usually don't like real life narutofics, but yours is great! Oh, and could you read my new story, Cursed Saint?



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/07/10 Title: Chapter 2: First Day Of School

Great chapter, Luna45. I can't wait to read the next one. BTW, the stories are (you can choose which one to read and no, you don't have to read all of them) Sasaui Uchiha-12 chapters. Tori Kago-2 chapters. Never Too Late-1 chapter



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/10/10 Title: Chapter 5: Once Friends?

Woah. Naruto probably shouldn't have added the last comment, but, well, people usually do stupid things. But they were pretty mad. Anyway, great story/chapter. I can't wait to read more of it!