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Penname: Sasaui Uchiha [Contact]
Real name:
Membership status: Member
Member since: 13/12/09
Website: fanfictionwriters.webs.com
Beta-reader: No
Fanfictions

Cursed Saint is one of my main stories. It is my most popular story as well, and I hope you like it. It's about a new addition to Konoha, Ryu Sarutobi, the "adopted "grandson of Hiruzen Sarutobi.

Final Wish is my newest Naruto fanfiction. It is a response to my own Naruto challenge, The Nemuri Promise. A trailer has not been written for it, but will be eventually.

Retribution is a co-written story with me and Itoko-san (Shizake Uchiha). It is alternatively updated by the two of us. It will not have a preview/trailer written for it.

Will of the Dragon is my only non-Naruto story on here. It is a One Piece fanfiction, and it is also a SYOC/Joint story, depending on if it is here or if it is at fanfiction.net. Characters are still being accepted and probably will be throughout much of the story.

Bio Part

Why you are looking here is beyond me. Though since you're here, I may as well let you know who I am (writer wise. I don't feel like getting any stalkers, thank you very much). How about we just start with the basics and slowly build, huh?

Basics

User Name: Sasaui Uchiha. It's probably obvious, but you can just call me Sasaui (pronounced Saw-say-you. Yes, it's weird. That's because I made it up). The only other nickname I've gotten is Kawa-cha from the fabulous Yuumai (JubileeOfPuppies).

Likes: I enjoy walking and thinking. It's a strange hobby, I know, but I love it. I also enjoy reading all the amazing stories on this site. So yeah, a lot of them. I enjoy making new friends and talking to Silverwolf and DestinyGirl on Fanfictionwriters.webs.com, my site. They're the ones who are always on there, so I have fun talking to them. As is probably obvious, I love to write.

Dislikes: Cuss words. I can deal with them in writing since I can change them in my mind, but I hate hearing them out loud because I can't do it the same way. I also don't like either Orochimaru or the Joker. I can't figure out which is creepier. Orochimaru just creeps me out because of a nightmare I had about him and the Joker..... Well, if you need an explanation for him, you obviously have not seen him. I also don't like people who are cruel to others just because of their own selfish desires.

Hobbies: Well, like I said before, I have a strange hobby of walking while thinking. Another couple are reading and typing. One of my hobbies you don't know of but is slowly becoming my favorite is Karate. Since October 23, 2011, I have been a yellow belt. I can't remember when I started except that it was last year while I was in the eighth grade around the end of winter. I only remember it was then because we didn't have to run. Another hobby I have is drawing even if I'm not all that good at it. You'll see some of my drawings on the bios I have for my characters in Tainted Guardian.

Personality: Most importantly, I am a Pentecostal Christian. Most important thing about me. I'm a mostly nice person. The only time I say anything mean is when I'm joking. I'll give anything a chance if it catches my interest or if someone asks me to read it unless it's rated 18 for sexual reasons or if it's yaoi/yuri. Christian, remember? I'm also very protective, something that will be shown in my characters. Another thing that may reflect in my characters is how I hate violence and unnecessary pain. It's strange that I hate it yet I'm in Karate, huh? But that's only because I've more or less been raised fighting my older brother. I also believe it's wrong to hurt someone for hurting you. If you already know what it feels like, why be so cruel as to make them go through the same pain?


Favorites

Now we'll get into some random favorites of mine. Why? Well, because. If you don't want to know this information, nobody said you had to read. The number of favorites will vary and I doubt many of the things will be in order.

Favorite Sport: Karate
Favorite Color(s): White and Black
Favorite Food: Chicken
Favorite type of Food: Asian
Favorite Animal: Wolf
Favorite Quote: For God so loved the world, that He gave His only begotten Son, so whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

Favorite Authors/Books:
1)Richelle Mead: Vampire Academy and Bloodlines series
2)Rick Riordan: Percy Jackson and the Olympians and The Heroes of Olympus series
3)Suzanne Collins: Hunger Games series
4) Kelly Armstrong: Darkest Powers series
5) J.K Rowling: Harry Potter series

Favorite Characters from Favorite Books
1) Rose from VA and Adrian from Bloodlines
2) Pery or Luke in PJatO and either Percy, Jason, or possibly Leo for THoO series
3) Peeta. Sorry, Katniss, but I like him better.
4) Derek, definitely Derek.
5) Sirius Black

Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto
2) Kenichi: The Strongest Disciple
3) Psyren
4) Breaker: New Waves
5) Breaker (the first of the manwha series. Manwha is Korean manga)
6) Dragon Quest Dai no Daiboken
7) Fairy Tail
8) Bleach
9) Rave Master
10) O-Parts Hunter
11) 1/2 Prince
12) Hunter x Hunter
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Characters from Favorite Manga:
1) Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, or Nagato. Yes, I'm stuck on all 4.
2)Kenichi
3)Ageha Yoshina
4) Shioon
5) Still Shioon
6) Dai
7) Natsu
8) Keisuke Urahara
9) Haru
10) Jio
11) Gui
12) Gon
13) Inuyasha

Favorite Anime (including movies):
1) Spirited Away
2) Princess Mononoke
3) Naruto
4) Kenichi: The Mightiest Disciple
5) Claymore
6) Does The Last Airbender count as Anime?
7) Yu-Gi-Oh
8) Dragon Ball (Z, GT)


Favorite Character from Favorite Anime:
1) Haku
2) Ashitaka
3) Again it's between Naruto, Hinata, Itachi, and Nagato
4) Kenichi
5) Rocky
6) Zuko
7) Between Yugi and Yusei
8) Either Goku, Trunks, or Vegeta

Favorite Video Games:
1) Kingdom Hearts
2) Pokemon: Black
3) .Hack
4) Final Fantasy 7
5) Chrono Cross
6) Final Fantasy: Crisis Core

Favorite Character from Favorite Game:
1) It's between Sora, Roxas, Axel, and Riku
2) I think I'd say N for this
3) Haseo
4) Cloud
5) Serge or Glenn
6) Zack

Favorite Bands:
1) Thousand Foot Krutch
2) Red
3) Pillar
4) Skillet
5) Story of the Year
6) Crossfade
7) Breaking Benjamin
8) Three Days Grace
9)Sr-71
10) Simple Plan

Well, I think that's all for bands.......

Favorite Song(s) by Favorite Bands:
1) Between The Part that Hurts the Most (Is You), Faith, Love, and Happiness, and Slow Bleed
2) Between Death of Me and Shadows I think......
3) Not Without A Fight
4) Hero
5) Just Close Your Eyes
6) Colors
7) I Will Not Bow
8) Never Too Late or Break
9) Tomorrow
10) Save You

Now I believe I am done with favorites. Sheesh, that was a long list.......

Writer

As a writer, and by that I do not mean fanfiction writer but an actual writer, I have written one complete story that keeps jumping around in page length for some recent. The first time I checked it was 400+ pages and then it was suddenly 600+ pages next time I checked. I have a million other ideas swirling around in my head, but I haven't written most of them mostly because I've been focusing on this one story. I've been trying to get a literacy agent and before long I may just have one. Fingers crossed and prays being sent.

Fanfiction

I didn't even know what fanfiction was until I was in the fifth grade. That's when I learned about it and it was by complete accident. Some kid I knew was showing around pictures of Naruto. I got a few of the pictures, and there was a link at the bottom - Narutoworld.com. Curious, I went to it.

Sadly, Narutoworld no longer has a part for fanfiction. When I first visited it, though, it did. I checked it out because I wanted to see what it was and that is where I first read fanfiction. I still remember the two that I actually read, too. Well, one title and another one just what it was about. The first one was Colors of Life and Death. It's funny that it's actually here on Tonfa now. The other was about a girl who had known Sasuke as a child returning to Konoha. It showed them bonding again and everything, until the end where Itachi returned and killed her. It was during this time I even found out about fanfiction.

Since the fanfiction part of Narutoworld was taken off, I began to search for a new fanfiction site. Somehow during this search, I found Tonfa. After reading a few of the fanfictions, mostly one done by an author maybe a few of you know known as WolfTeam000. She was a great author and is probably the main reason I stuck with fanfiction rather than got bored. I've recently refound her on Fanfiction.net writing Fairy Tail fanfiction because I got bored and looked at her fanfiction.net account and saw she had updated. Then my friends began to vary and more people began writing wonderful stories such as RowanRose's Kokoro Uchiha fanfic. It started way back when. Sheesh, I feel old yet I'm only 15.

My first ever fanfiction was similar to Never Too Late: a girl came to Konoha to help team 7 with the chuunin exams. The only thing was it was with Naruto and Sakura and Sasuke had actually run off to Orochimaru. The girl's name was still Kina, she had the same kekkei genkai, but she was working for Sasuke and had a demon in her. That's not how it is now. It was called Unknown Secret, which is also the name of Never Too Late's first arc.

After this fanfiction, I began to write a few more, most of which shall never see the light of day again. One that has stuck with me, though, since around when I first began as Bre2k8 is Tainted Guardian. Some may remember it as Sasaui Uchiha. It was inspired after reading a few SasuOc fanfics where the female of the group was another survivor. Primarily this was Crimson Lily's fanfic, Another Survivor: Uchiha Love Blossoms.

Now I am mostly where I am today, still working on stories I came up later on and even reviving a few of my ideas from back when I was Bre2k8. I've made some great friends and am very glad I joined Tonfa.

Fanfictionwriters.webs.com

This is my website. If anyone is just looking for a very weird place to hang out and be strange, this is a place you should go. Though I must warn you, it may be too strange and make you go insane.



YOUR STORY Reward

YOUR STORY is the best compliment I will give a person. If you get out of this world or something similar or weird (such as eight thumbs up), then you're really close to YOUR STORY. Or I just forget to tell you =P. Anyway, it's basically like saying that your story is just so great, it becomes an adjective itself that explains its awesomeness because no adjective can. Does that make sense?

Anyway, here's a list of the stories (that I remember) are on the YOUR STORY list:





Reincarnation of a Legend by Silverwofl213
Rekindle the Lost Flame by Silverwolf1213
Pirates of the Mist by Silverwolf1213
The White Rose by Silverwolf1213
Broken Wings by Destiny Girl
Beneath the Darkness by DestinyGirl
How to Adapt and Overcome by xXxTiNkXxX
Rotes Blut by BattyBigSister
She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Child of Hex by JubileeOfPuppies
Endeavor by JubileeOfPuppies
Space Children by Firestar83
Fire Escape by DropDeadThenDance
The Naruto Games by Konan
Three Days by Silverwolf1213
Stereotype by DropDeadThenDance
Cygnus Olor by RowanRose
Reality Check by UzamakiMasumi
A Tale Best Told Dead by Silverwolf1213
The Path Each Takes series by Shizake Uchiha
Reverse This Curse by xXxTiNkXxX
The Princess and The Freeman by BrontesWorld and DropDeadThenDance

If I have told you that your story is YOUR STORY but forgot to mention it, please let me know.


So, now that my bio is finally ended, those who deemed it worthy enough to read, you can rest your eyes.

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Stories by Sasaui Uchiha [14]
Series by Sasaui Uchiha [2]
Challenges by Sasaui Uchiha [5]
Favorite Series [1]
Sasaui Uchiha's Favorites [96]
Reviews by Sasaui Uchiha


Title: She Was Beautiful by BattyBigSister
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 64]
Summary:
She Was Beautiful

She was beautiful. He knew it every time he looked at her. Every time she filled his senses and his mind with her bright colour. Every time his trembling fingertips brushed her soft, soft skin. Every time she laughed or called to talk to him. She was bright, beautiful, burning like the sunlight… and she would never love him back.

Gaara was always the sort of man for whom one person could change everything, but in the middle of a chaotic ninja alliance mission he never expected it to be her. As he finds himself drawn more and more into a world of small time politics and bitter shinobi rivals, his biggest challenge remains gaining the heart of the woman he loves.

Set during and after the Fourth Great Ninja War (so Possible Spoiler Alert for anyone who hasn't got that far into the story)
A G/OC featuring the Sand Siblings throughout and most of Team Kakashi during the first 'Half' (try two-thirds and we'd be closer).
Now fully reposted after TONFA's technical difficulties.

Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Gaara, Kakashi Hatake, Kankurou, Mei Terumi (Godaime Mizukage), Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Oonoki (Sandaime Tsuchikage), Pair OCGaa, Sakura Haruno, Team Sand Siblings, Temari, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 62 | Completed: No | Word count: 123735 | Read count: 116986 [Report This]
Published: 27/03/11 | Updated: 30/07/12



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 3.c

Well, I found out why he was running. I'd be running, too, if I were him. This chapter was amazing. I feel really bad for Naruto. What could he have done to make her that mad? Sheesh. It was an awesome chapter, though. I could actually feel Naruto's fear =) . I wonder what happened to the Nee-san girl...... Oh well, if I find out, I'll find out. I know I've said it before, but I have to say it again: Your description is amazing. It's as if there's a movie playing in my head. I give you eight thumbs up!!!! Now if only I could find someone with eight thumbs........

Author's Response: I\'d be running three, me thinketh. I was trying to recreate their normal relationship from the anime. I hope it worked. I do love Sakura... and thank you for all eight thumbs. ;0)



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 3.b

Holy cow, this chapter was awesome! You had me hooked with the beginning, and then we meet this girl in a wheelchair. I wonder who she is. Anyway, once again, your description was just out of this world. And why is Naruto running away from the voice? Man, I really want to know. You did a fantastic job and now I just have to read more.

Author's Response: Hmm... I wonder too. Oh no, wait, I know, don\'t I? (Joke. Of course I know.) I\'m glad you like the description. It\'s what I work hardest at, so it\'s good to know that it pays off for the reader. ;0)



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/07/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2.a

Once again it was as if Gaara was writing this himself. You kept everyone in character, which can be hard for some people. I was entranced from the very beginning. You wrote so well I could make it a movie in my head. I don't know what to say it was so impressive. I guess I can only say I LOVED LOVED LOVED x23.62953 (just a random decimal I came up with). I'm so glad I took the time to read this.

Another random thing: If a hamster made of cookie doe ate a chocolate monkey, would it make a chocolate chip hamster? I just had to ask because I started thinking of hamsters and then the monkeys started swarming. By the way, I tried to send them through, but I'm not sure if it worked. I know it didn't work when I tried to email my sister to Siberia *sigh*. Having my own room would have been so cool, too.

As you'll notice, my brain rarely stays in one place. So, I must ask forgiveness for my brain.

And, the most important part of the review...........*dramatic pause*....... IT WAS AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really pleased you\'re enjoying the story. Not everybody reads passed the first chapter, so its great that continued to give me feedback. Thank you. It\'s great to hear people\'s opinions. I don\'t think I\'ve ever had a review for this particular part, so thank you!\r\n\r\nI already answered your question in silverwolf\'s forums, but I am inclined to agree with you that it probably would make a choc chip hamster - probably with a chocolate filling, given the size difference. Perhaps we should get you some cookie dough hamsters to protect you from those monkeys?



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/08/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3.a

Poor Rina almost had to go make a roast goose. Okay, getting off the sympathy train. THIS CHAPTER WAS PHENOMENAL!!! The description is enough to keep the reader hooked, a great picture of what's happening in their head. And you keep on throwing in these small things at the beginning. I want to jump to conclusions and say it's Momoko, but I'll wait to see. I just hope I find out soon. I can't wait to figure out who it is. Nor can I wait to read more of your fantastic story. Have you ever tried writing a book, because I can tell you you could blow everyone away with it.

Author's Response: Or convince somebody else too. ;0) I never saw her as the sort of character who could be trusted with much beyond instant ramen in the kitchen... I love the flashforward thought scenes too. They are just a little taste of what\'s too come... eventually... very eventually... It\'s strange reading them again actually. They seem so cheesy and dramatic, but they are based on a lot of real emotion I was experiencing at the time. I miss my bf - but the good news is I might see him in September, so yay! =0D



Title: Art is a...girl?! by Miko_Yami
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary:  Itachi Uchiha is dangerous he is tall dark and handsome but most of all mysterious. He is hiding so much and Yuki Hunnutsuka is curious to find about him before her clan begins the trade of drugs. She also wants to stay quite about herself so “he” wouldn’t find her. While Itachi finds it weird that people are being murdered like a fairytale/nurse rhyme. ItaxOC 
Category: OC-centric, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Real World
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, OC, Pair OCItachi
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: AU
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 | Completed: No | Word count: 42625 | Read count: 14840 [Report This]
Published: 22/04/11 | Updated: 02/06/11


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 30/10/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~First meeting and other problems~ Part A

Yeah, I would have to say nature is my favorite form of art. Okay, now to the story. It was phenomonal!! I absolutely loved it. I was slightly confused when Sasori spoke after Yuki and slightly when Yuki talked in the first scene and this needs proofread for mistakes, but the awesomeness in this chapter so made up for it. You were so descriptive and have me curious about how Yuki being a Huunutsuka will affect everything.

Author's Response: Sorry if I confused you I wrote that chapter a while back. I\'m still trying to work out a few kinks here and there. Sorry once again but thanks for the review. Believe it or not I have a story on the Hunnutsuka but will be told in time, other then that Itachi is going be seen using Yuki for just her name thanks for the review again :)



Title: Naruto GX by theez
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 125]
Summary: A story about a boy who is connected to two worlds.... Naruto's and Yugioh's!
Category: OC-centric, Het Romance > Fluff, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Fusion
Characters: OC, Pair NaruHina, Pair OCSaku, Pair OCSasu, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: , Joint Stories!
Challenge: , Joint Stories!
Series: Naruto GX
Chapters: 57 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 110624 | Read count: 78331 [Report This]
Published: 02/05/11 | Updated: 02/07/11


Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Ezra and Sasuke's confusion! They are.... okay with it?!

That was amazing. I can't wait to read more. I'll be up all night reading so that I can get to the new chapter with Hitomi. I'm so excited!

Author's Response: Thanks! I had no idea what her personality was, because I didn\'t see it, so I had to improvise. She is an insult joker, and she makes Hinata cry, but apologizes. Oh yeah, and she jokes about Ezra\'s sky blue hair being ugly as well, but thats it. Again, thanks!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 17/06/11 Title: Chapter 29: Ezra and Yuki are a sweet tag-team! The Truth Behind Sakura!

*Fist pumps* Sakura's good again. I just hoped nothing comes to screw things up...... This is an awesome chapter, Theez. I can't wait to continue. Actually, I'm about to, so, yeah.... GREAT STORY!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 17/06/11 Title: Chapter 28: Yuki see's her parents! The Afterlife is a small world!

Dang. It's too hard not to update every chapter. They're all so awesome. It's so cool that you had DBZ come into this story. DBZ is, as I've said before, AWESOME. It's not as awesome your story is turning out to be, though.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/06/11 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Hiashi as Evil as Ever! The New Curse Mark.

I love this Ezra and Yuki romance thing. This chapter was extra awesome because of.... well, everything. I can't wait to read more (but for now I must go to bed T_T). It's just plain awesomeness and coolness wrapped up in one.

Author's Response: Thanks..........Sorry you have to go to bed. I like the fact that you like this! Thanks!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/06/11 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Yuki is an Epic Fighter! Hero Vs Wolf!

Finally some warmth from under that ice. Man, I need to start reading faster if I want to keep up with your updates. I really want to get to all the new ocs. Not that I don't like Yuki, because she's awesome, but because I'm eager to see how you made Hitomi.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 55: The End of the Duel, and the Beginning of a New One!

Darn it. The end it only two chapters away. Either way, it will be a pleasure to read them because I know they'll rock just like this chapter. I love your story. It's amazingly good.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/06/11 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Introducing, Yuki Ookami!

I've decided I shall review if the chapter is either really good or has no reviews, so I'm reviewing this one. It's a great chapter, Theez. I totally forgot about Blair until this chapter, but then I remembered the duel after reading this. It's so awesome I can't wait to read about my character.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 02/07/11 Title: Chapter 49: Ezra and Suki VS Camula!

Great duel. This story is amazing as ever. I can't wait to read more of this. Oh, wait, I can. Great chapter. I loved it. I'd read more, but I have to get off for now.

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you liked those three, four, or five chapters! Thanks!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Super Ezke VS Super Sora! The True Ultimate Battle!

I know I just reviewed last chapter, but I had to review again to tell you what an awesome chapter this was. The action was so cool. I loved every minute for it. It makes up for scaring me half to death last chapter. I can't wait to continue reading!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/07/11 Title: Chapter 54: Ezra Key Is Stolen? And By Banner?

Hmm. Jaden's evil twin? I think I remember seeing him once. Oh, wait, that was a dream. Okay, back to complimenting your amazing story. That was a great duel. I can't believe I'm so close to the end now. Then I'll have to wait like everyone else. Oh well.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/06/11 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Ultimate Battle! Ezra and Sasuke VS Sora!

First off I must say DBZ is awesome. Okay, now I've gotten that out of my system. *takes in a deep breath*

HOW DARE YOU SCARE ME LIKE THAT!!?? You had me worried sick that Sasuke and Ezra (who I found out I've been calling Erza for the longest time) would actually die. Good job, Theez. You're story is awesome!

Author's Response: DBZ is pretty awesome. Actually, DBZ is in the series! Along with some other series. Sorry to scare you! But it was a pretty awesome comeback, right? Thanks!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Duel Academy: Entrance exam!

Sweet! I'm so glad this chapters up. The duel was so sweet. I want to say I want Tenshi to duel him, but I'm afraid she'd lose to fast..... Anyway, I can't wait until you post the next chapter. I'm tempted to skip it just so I can keep reading, but I shall force myself to remain patient. I'm not sure how long that will last, so please post again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Writing Duel\'s is fun, but re-writing this one was a pain......But I\'m glad you liked it! I\'ll start re-writing the next chapter right away!



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 12/06/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Dr. Crowler meet's Ezra.... again!

One, Crowler seems nicer in this fanfic than in the show. Maybe he's just that way to Erza, which I'd understand. It's a great chapter by the way. Two, I just now remembered that you told me to tell you about Harro's deck. Yeah, it's basically like Hitomi's deck. He's got a new Holy and Chaos card after giving them to Hitomi.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Siblingly Love

I love this story. I didn't think I'd liked it, but after forcing myself to finally try to read it, I found out I LOVE it! I'm so glad I try new things sometimes.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Ezra and Sasuke's Mission

Sweet jutsu. I'd hate to have to fight him. He's awesome with both his strength and personality. I can't wait to read more. Good thing I can =)



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Broken Heart

It's a good chapter, but I think that the reaction was a little exaggerated. I'm sorry, but that's what I think. Other than that, though, it was wonderful.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Naruto's Decision!

Well, this group of people is seriously going to put a twist on things. I really liked this chapter. I can't wait until Naruto and Hinata get together (which I only know because I began to read chapter 12 when the others weren't up.) I hope that the GX world doesn't get destroyed with the people going there.



Reviewer: Sasaui Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Hinata Explodes! Sakura's Twisted Plan!

Once again, exaggerated, but it's still awesome. I also think Sakura and Lee are pretty twisted in you fanfic, but as I said, it's your fanfic. You make the characters as you want them. I love it because it gives a new twist to everything.

Author's Response: Haha, keep reading because the reason that they are twisted comes far from now! I know that they are pretty OOC, and thats okay............Thanks for all of the reviews, and chapter ten is back up!



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Date: 17/06/11 Title: Chapter 33: A New Person! The Mysterious Ren.

Why is it I have a strange feeling Ren has something to do with Ezra. Oh well, probably just a totally dumb, random feeling. I loved this chapter. It, like the story, is amazingly awesome. I think I'd die without it.



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Date: 13/06/11 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Enter, Sora Hyuga!

Yeah, Sora has some seriously bad timing. And I can't believe that the bullies there can be so mean. I want to go into the story just to hit the bullies. I love it, like always. It's just so amazing I can't help but love it.

Author's Response: Har har, how funny, I\'m glad you like it. Thanks! Oh, and you don\'t have to review for every chapter. You could just do a review for every five chapters, that would save time. Thanks again!