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Penname: Miki Everless [Contact]
Real name: Christina Thompson
Membership status: Member
Member since: 21/03/08
Website: http://myspace.com/viitalizechristina
Beta-reader: Yes
Hi, my name is Christina.
I'm fourteen.
I live in Daegu, South Korea.
I'm a freshman at my unit school. (K-12.)
I lettered in tennis and wrestling.
I play flute and acoustic guitar.
Naruto is life.
Impressed? Yeah, I wasn't either.
All of the stories I have posted onto this profile were written when I was about 12. Nearly all of them have nasty Mary-Sues in them that I find epicly hilarious even to this day. Please do not take any of my work seriously.






Favourites (all time):
Metamorphasis: A Hyuuga Tale by Nefatri
Shi no Me by Zephyras
Choke and Die by Voodoo
No More Running by Dag
You Found Me by inuyashas_only_1

(unfinished) Favourites:
1. The Lost Soul by Katana Haibane
2. Truthspeaker by fUnKyToEs
3. A Twisted Type of Love by Shinosuke
4. Who Would've Known by Tige321

Favourite Pairings:
(TIED FOR 1st)
Neji/Hinata
Sasuke/Naruto
Gaara/Naruto

Hated Pairings:
1. Sasuke/Sakura (Ew!)
2. Naruto/Hinata (-__- Thats the same as Sasu/Saku)
3. Neji/Tenten (RANDOM!)
4. Kiba/Hinata (That's just a crack-pairing.)

Currently beta-ing Down the Sodden Hill by winterstrife!

"Sabaku no Gaara is my favourite character from ANY anime I have ever seen. Bash him, and I'll bash you."

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Title: Firefly Tears by inuyashas_only_1
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 206]
Summary: (Takes place in Feudal Japan)

In the 19th Edo Infantry, everyone has a story.

There's Naruto Uzumaki, a young man with a big heart and courage like a lion. He'd throw himself into danger to save any of his comrades in arms, especially his tentmate, Sasuke Uchiha. But his bravery-- or is is lack of caring for his own life?-- is his way of atonement. Because there was one person that he just couldn't save...

There's Sasuke Uchiha, a raven-haired, strong young man who refuses to talk about his family or past. He has a secret. Someone's out to get him and finish a job they couldn't complete. Sasuke would do anything to escape his fate, even if it meant joining the army. Unfortunately, now has a tentmate that he's desperate to protect form his past...

There's Sakura Haruno, who is disguised as her brother, Kei, in order to help him escape from the fate of joining the army in the draft that came to her village. She's in s very sticky situation: she's a girl, so there's the job of keeping her identity a secret, especially from her tentmate, Izumi...

And there's Izumi Togu, a sensible young man who's caught up in the fact that his tentmate is a girl. Intrigued by this, he struggles between protecting her-- finding a way to send her home without having her killed because she's female-- or protecting her wishes of preventing her brother from ending up where she is...

In the end, they're all united by one thing: a common enemy that they'll have to defeat to save everything that's precious to them, especially each other.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Other, Het Romance > Fluff, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Sasuke and Naruto
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Death, OOC, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 73284 | Read count: 67212 [Report This]
Published: 19/07/09 | Updated: 01/11/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 29/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

Oh; Shikamaru's definitely going to find out soon.
I just know it.
And I can't wait until you post a new chapter! I really want to see how Izumi and Sakura progress further with their relationship.

Author's Response: Yup. Shikamaru\'s gonna figure it out. I\'m thinking of several different ways of him finding out, but unfortunately, all of them include things that would make Izumi seethe with rage, grab his precious Kei, and storm away with her, fuming and cursing Shikamaru and wishing he\'d been in his place.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 15: Light

I love how Izumi is such a dumbass.
It's like, *heart heart* whenever Sakura's unconscious, and he either pisses her off or puts her on an assasination team whenever she's awake.
Haha, I love you, Izumi.

Author's Response: Izumi\'s not just a dumbass, though-- he\'s a dumbass in love, and that makes him a lot worse. But whatever. Though it\'s not mentioned in the story yet, when he\'s in a normal sort of mood (like, he\'s not obsessing over Kei) he\'s one of those guys who is sort of quiet but is quietly amused by all the craziness around him and stuff.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 16: Bathhouse

Oh, hot damn.
Shikky's gonna see through that, definitely, haha.
She's going to look so gorgeous; it's such a pity that she will never have her long, pink hair.
Izuuuumi's gonna gaaaape! ^__^
That general will be butter by the time she says 'Hello.' haha! I love you! Update soon!

Author's Response: This, I think, might be my favorite chapter yet! Mostly because we\'ve got Izumi with that sly smile. In Germany, the word for \"sly smile\" is \"schmunzel\", did you know? Izumi was doing a lot of schmunzeling...



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 17: Girl

Blee.
That was so short.
But at least we got some progress going on; Izumi's butter and Shikky's figured it all out.
To be honest, in previous chapters, I thought that Shikamaru liked Sak- damn, Kei.
BTW, you typed '...how cold I protect her now?'

Author's Response: I\'ll fix the \"cold.\" Thanks for letting me know.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 12/08/09 Title: Chapter 22: Kei Has Nice WHAT?!

Hanataro = epic fail.
The guy's probably going to be the biggest douche I've ever seen you write about. (And this is counting the Arisaka Kenshin fangirl club... *shudders*)

Author's Response: He\'s a bastard, isn\'t he? I just had to make a character that would be like that, though-- I had to, for the sake of...okay, I won\'t spoil anything...and it\'s nice to have you back!!! I missed you, ha ha ha. Thanks for adding this story to your current top stories!!!! <3 <3 <3



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 13/08/09 Title: Chapter 25: Shuuji

o.o

Author's Response: Well said.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 13/08/09 Title: Chapter 25: Shuuji

What... what happened while I was gone?
Alright, so Captain Hiro found out from Monsieur Douchebag that Kei's a girl...
Izumi totally blew her off...
And she's betrothed to a guy she hasn't even met while she's thinking about going back to join the assassination team.
Wow. I think the surprise killed me a bit.

Author's Response: Surprise can do that a bit, can\'t it? So yes, you\'ve got it right so far-- Kei was found out. She was spared by Captain Hiro because she was a favorite of his. Izumi did blow her off, but it was to save her, but nobody\'s really sure of how it helped either of the star-crossed lovers. And now she\'s betrothed to Shuuji because she feels she can\'t find a place in Izumi\'s heart. She was thinking about going back, but now she\'s stopping because she has Shuuji now. A part of her accepting Shuuji also lies in the fact that her mom wanted her to get married for so long, and now someone has willingly come to HER with an interest, instead of her mother introducing her to all the bachelors. Shuuji will be beneficial to their family, and because of this, she knows she should do this, to help her family.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 15/08/09 Title: Chapter 27: Story of an Angel

Akira's mother is disgusting. I hate people like that. Her daughter is thirteen years old, and she sold him to a pedophile. Fucking twat.

Author's Response: Seriously. Sosuke\'s a creeper.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 18/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

Yeah, I agree; it's a difficult situation, but truth be told, I'd rather live on the streets than sell my daughter to a perverted old guy to be sexually abused for the rest of her life. That's just so selfish. She'd be in so much better hands with her mother; even if they were penniless. She'd be happier, no friggin' doubt. I still hold no respect for her mother, and I'm sure she doesn't, either.

Author's Response: I agree. She wasn\'t thinking straight. And in my response to ontuva, I told her that Sosuke was making a lot of problems for them and stuff. I\'m not sticking up for her mom, I\'m just explaining her reasoning. Oh yeah, I made a Bleach video for you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VzU_gTI238



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

LMFAO.
Well, thank you, Sarah, for the special video.
xD I can't stop cracking up. "I guess I got you pretty good!"
What's that song called?!
Damn, haha... xP (Sarah - 1, Christina - 0.)

Author's Response: Ha, I\'m glad you liked it! My favorite line is, \"I can\'t belieeeeve you fell for that! You\'re so gullible!\" and \"I really love you...NOT!\" The song is called \"I Was Only Kidding\" by Weird Al Yankovic.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 21/08/09 Title: Chapter 28: Second Place

Shuuji's such a great guy. He understands her situation, and he's not forcing her to do anything.
Plus the fact that he likes her for who she is.
That having been said, WHY DID YOU KISS HER, SHUUJI?! You know damn well she's still in love with Izumi!

Author's Response: He kissed her because he couldn\'t hold himself back! He loves her-- he said so! Ah, young love-- it sucks! So, how are you? I\'m doing all right. Exhausted from school, but all right. It\'s your birthday soon, right? (I think you might\'ve mentioned it...) I\'ll make you another AMV. Ho-hum, I\'m so bored and on a weird high from nothing...and I\'m trying to master the piano version of \r\n\"Bratja\"...it\'s not turning out very well...



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 22/08/09 Title: Chapter 30: Loved

Well, holy balls, that was so unexpected and random.
Hanatarou is in love with Izumi. What the shit. That's like, Beauty and the Douchie Thing from Hell.
Go, Sakura, go! Holy crap, what if she meets up with Douchie? Eh, she'll pound the crap out of him. Or spare his life, because she's so noble.
Update soon! Really soon!

Author's Response: I LOVE IT! \"Beauty and the Douchie Thing from Hell\"!!!!! That\'s hilarious!!!!!!!! Also, I\'m not planning on them meeting-- but if they did, she\'d pound the crap out of him, but spare his life anyway. Like what Izumi said-- she wouldn\'t want him dead.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 22/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

Ah; freshman year's already started for you? I've got a good week before mine.
Yeah, haha, my birthday's on Sept. 12. Thank you for noticing/remembering. ^__^
I'm so excited for school to start. xP How's your school year so far?

Author's Response: Yup, I started on August 20th. My school year so far is...ridiculous. I have a teacher who treats me like I\'m her child, another who has yet to even notice me (she\'s kinda spacey), a teacher who thinks I\'m a lot better than I really am, another teacher who was an instant favorite, a teacher who hasn\'t spoken a lick of English to me yet (though I can translate what she\'s saying as fast as she talks), and another teacher who has let us know-- many times now in the first two days-- that she doesn\'t give a damn about any of us. Yup-- that\'s my year so far. And I KNEW it! I KNEW your birthday was in September! I kept thinking the 12th, too, and I was like, \"Could that be right?\" but I wasn\'t sure. I think you mentioned it in one of your reviews on \"Sakura\'s Angel.\" Yeah, I\'ll make you an AMV. Any requests? (I don\'t do yuri, so if your birthday is balanced on a yuri AMV, you\'re outta luck, pal.) You can request a couple and a song, or a couple and have me surprise you with the song. Your pick. (I\'m still trying to get a program that will let me use anime episodes, so for now it will just have to be pictures or manga scenes...)\r\n



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 23/08/09 Title: Chapter 31: Homecoming

Haha! YES! I feel like jumping up and doing the Caramelldansen.
Dans, send med oss, Sakura and Izumi!
Sorry. That was stupid.
Well, at least, I felt like that until I read the last two paragraphs; then I was smacked in the face with reality.
It's not good to have emotional ties when you're a soldier. That's why ninja have Shinobi Guidelines that restrict the show of emotion. God, if this story were real, Kei and Izumi have less than a 10% chance of living, and that's given their awesome swodsmanship.
Update soon!

Author's Response: What is the Caramelldansen? It sounds like a Dutch pastry. And \"dans, send med oss\"? I only speak English, Spanish, and Gaelic! Help me out here, Christina!!! Anyway, yeah-- I wanted to sort of emphasize the fact that now that Izumi and Kei are together and every thing\'s all happy and they\'re finally able to love each other freely, suddenly there\'s the fact that they\'re SOLDIERS. They\'re probably going to die. (By the way, I\'ve already decided who lives and who dies. It will make you cry.) Kei and Izumi are in great peril, as is there relationship. But when a person dies, it doesn\'t mean a bond dies too. And, even though everyone says to never give your heart to a soldier, I\'ve gotta think that they hold onto hearts with all their soul.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 23/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

Damn. Your teachers don't sound very promising, haha. Not a lick of English? How the hell did she get a job in the States? (I'm only assuming you live in the States, so if you don't sorry, haha.)
One of our teachers last year was a right-winged nutjob. I mean, really. I'm so lucky I didn't have him as a teacher.
Another one that I actually get in freshman year is a Math teacher that doesn't teach you shit, and expects you to do everything. This, I'm mad about, because I suck at Math.
I hope you pass through freshman year without any problems. You sound like the ultra-smart genius type, so it should be no problem.
And for the AMV, you can choose what you'll do. It's your present for me, and I can't be picky about it, right? ^__^ I trust ya.

Author's Response: I mean, the teacher does speak English, but she just hasn\'t spoken English to us yet. (And yeah, i live in the States-- Ohio, in fact. What an awesome state-- I used to not like it, but now there\'s no place I\'d rather live!) I suck at math too-- I repeated prealgebra and squeaked by in algebra because I got a perfect score on the final exams last year. Now I\'m in geometry and praying I do all right. I\'m actually not the extra-smart genius type...except in world history and English. I\'m an ace in English-- already the teacher\'s favorite. I\'ll make you an awesome AMV. Just give me a manga or a couple or something to work with...anything you want! :) And don\'t be mean and give me a couple like IchiRuki or NaruHina...please!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'ll do any other couple, just not those two!!!!!!



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 24/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Son

Well, I'd imagine that you were the Literature teacher's favourite. Your stories are... amazing; especially for a freshman. If you were in my Literature class, you'd automatically replace me as the teacher's favourite. ^___^
Caramelldansen? You don't know what that is? Okay, you've GOT to search it up on YouTube. It's in Swedish, btw, haha.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRs8dMZpIAI
About character deaths, I had that looming in the back of my head, but I just dismissed it as unthinkable and just tried to ignore my raising suspicion. If Izumi dies, Sakura will go on living, because that's just who she is, right? But if Sakura dies, Izumi's grief will just kind of consume him to the point in which he'll take his life. I also think that the Sasuke/Naruto pairing is in danger. >.<
DAMMIT, I will not cry.
Well, that's not very nice of your teacher. She refuses to speak English?
GAELIC? Dude, that's epic. The only languages I know are French and Japanese, haha.
As for the AMV, my favourite anime couples have got to be Neji/Hinata and Naruto/Gaara. A lot of people shoot me down for this at my school. ("Ew! Incest!" or "Ew! Gay!")
God, you know how much it sucks to go to school with a load of narrow-minded, bigoted, ignorant people every day? And then, you've got to admit to yourself, these are the people we graduate with. People like you and me are hard to come by, sadly.

Author's Response: Well, I\'m my literature teacher\'s favorite because I impressed her by saying I was \"sanguine\" on the first day of school, and then telling her that my favorite book when I was six was Wuthering Heights (the question was, \"When you were in 1st grade, what was your favorite book?\"). I\'ll have to check out the Caramelldansen. (Also, if you ever wonder why I can\'t ever reply on a new line is that I just get funny symbols when I press enter and it shows up on the reply...) Okay, on character deaths: I can give you spoilers if you want, but they\'ll only make you very unhappy. My goal is to kill off at least one main character because it\'s a weakness of mine to let them live. And you\'re right about Izumi-- he would just get swallowed in his grief. And it\'s not jsut the Sasuke/Naruto pairing in danger-- this is a war story, Christina-- everyone is in danger. And on the topic of my Spanish teacher, it\'s just so that we learn to speak Spanish and be able to translate as quick as possible. Also, your favorite couples-- thanks for the info. I\'ll be thinking up some songs and stuff to fit those pairings. I think I\'ve got just the song for NejiHina. I\'m lucky to have people around me who are totally okay with the gay and incest thing, and I totally am open about it too-- to tell you the truth, I\'m the girl who sits daydreaming about her class prez and vice prez in a yaoi story...lol.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 16/09/09 Title: Chapter 33: Restraint

And I'd be the crazy worshipper girl that studies black magic in order to let him live forever.
O.O
Damn, I think I just fell in love with Izumi.

Author's Response: Yup-- I\'d let you sit in the back of the club room, chanting, lighting incense, and making love potions. Yeah, I fell in love with him too. Isn\'t he just the greatest, though?! I\'m not even kidding you-- what if a guy like Izumi really existed?! I\'d marry him in 0.0000001 seconds. Dude, when he was telling her just how much he wanted give in but he never did, I just about died. AND I WROTE IT!!! I am SOOOO proud of myself for making a character quite so incredible as Izumi. Now, who do you like better: Izumi from \"Firefly Tears\", or Kenshin from \"You Found Me\"? That\'s a bit of a food-for-thought one, but I think in the end I\'d pick Izumi...he\'s just a stronger sort of character. Like if Kenshin was Tamaki, then Izumi is Inuyasha, and I\'d pick Inuyasha over Tamaki, but only by a sliver...



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 19/09/09 Title: Chapter 34: Target

First of all, that was so awesome. You must teach me that sometime.
XD LMAO! I love this Sasuke.
Dude, this'll be so awkward. "You're a dude and you slutted up against me!" "What? I'm not a dude!" "Oh... you're not? Nevermind, then. Troops! Head back to China!"

Author's Response: I LOVED THAT LINE!!!! That and, \"Man, I\'m gonna get fat on all this rice, Sasuke...\" and also, \"Score, Kei. Add ten points.\" And I have everything planned out involving the Chinese troops and all, so it\'s not gonna be awkward, but your scenario made me snort with laughter. <3



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 24/09/09 Title: Chapter 35: Lieutenant Colonel

I am and always will!! (Love this chapter.)

Author's Response: \"I am and always will\"? Sorry, I feel stupid, I missed the joke. :( Whatever, I\'ll figure it out.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 25/10/09 Title: Chapter 45: You Are My Love

Jesus Christ. Izumi and Naruto are taking it really hard; Izumi, especially. Poor guy. He's probably going to find her half-dead. And Sasuke? I think he's going to be the character death.
Either Sasuke, Izumi, or Sakura. You've been focusing on them more vigourously during the past few chapters.
Oh, God, I hope Izumi finds out Sakura's name before she (maybe) dies. It would make me cry if he never found out her name.

Author's Response: It would really make you cry if he never found out her name??? Maybe I\'ll do that...just to see you cry. Well, not see it personally, but you know. See, I\'ve already decided on the character deaths, and you\'ll be finding them out soon enough. Killing Sasuke is extremely cruel, no? Because Naruto is obsessed with the idea, \"I couldn\'t protect one precious person...I have to die trying if it means protecting this one.\" ...Killing Sasuke with that in mind would so be my style, wouldn\'t it? I am so cruel.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 28/10/09 Title: Chapter 47: Finish What We've Started

DAMN STRAIGHT.
Sarah, make at least one good thing happen at the end.
DESCRIBE WEI-RONG'S PAIN AS HE DIES. AND MAKE IT AGONIZING FOR EVEN THE READER.
God... Naruto... AND Izumi.
He didn't even get to find out her name.
Dear God, I'm so distraught.

Author's Response: Christina, I promise you that I will make at least one good thing happen at the end. :) I promise-- I will right several wrongs.



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 30/10/09 Title: Chapter 50: You Bring Light Into My Life

OH, thank GOD.
I was just about to buy a plane ticket over to Ohio to beat the crap out of you.
Almost killing Izumi... what's wrong with you?!
Ah... it's sad that Naruto's dead, but I guess it's for the best. It would seem like an overly-happy fic if he turned up alive.
But this isn't over yet, I know. The assassin that you mentioned several chapters ago... she's not gone.
And Izumi still doesn't know Sakura's real name.

Author's Response: Ha ha ha, maybe I should have kept him dead just to get you to come over here, Christina. And actually, there\'s only one chapter left. Isn\'t that sad?



Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 02/11/09 Title: Chapter 51: Star Shower

Cute, fluffy ending. Nice in contrast to the gruesome army time, I'll give it that, haha.
I love how everybody's together... it kind of gives me hope. Like, no matter how shitty your life is, you can always turn it around, changing it for the better. Just with the right people.
So Ageha has Naruto's spirit? Like how Yuuri had Julia's spirit in Kyou Kara Maou?
I've got to say, the only thing I disliked about this chapter was the assasin. She stopped following him around? I was really hoping for more depth, especially with the cliffhanger you left about Sosuke, the freaking CREEPER...
But, as I said, this was the only flaw. I laughed, cried, and fell in love with the characters you portrayed in this story. Well done, Sarah-hime.

Author's Response: Ha ha, yeah-- but I had to wrap things up!! I was like, \"GYAAH-- Christina\'s gonna have my head for all the stories I left out of this involving the assassin and stuff,\" but I really had to wrap this up. There was not much room to do it. Honestly, the story I was really looking forward to writing was Naruto finding out about the death of Akira-- I mean, that Sosuke ended up killing her, how he got this complex about protecting people, etc. But thank you, and thank you for becoming my friend and being such an amazing reviewer and person-- I\'ve had so much fun with you. Please continue to look for my stories in the future. :)



Title: Kokoro Uchiha by Rowanrose
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Kokoro-DO NOT READ

Any of you have not read Kokoro Uchiha before, a new version called Cygnus Olor is up, so don't spoiler yourselves. =_=. For those of you who have and have been waiting for an update, please go ahead and read the latest chapter; it's an announcement. (no i'm not dropping Kokoro Uchiha) Thank you~
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: Kokoro Uchiha
Chapters: 43 | Completed: No | Word count: 86283 | Read count: 63827 [Report This]
Published: 21/07/09 | Updated: 23/06/12


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 24/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Memories and the New Life

XD
I love Sasuke in this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! :)



Title: Trains by kathlaidaprincess
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Summer is upon the Ninja World after peace has come, and the Kazekage is invited to spend it with his hyperactive best friend as well as his companions. But the presence of so many other people there (a certain dark-haired boy included) makes Gaara think that maybe he will be the one left out... GaaNaru Fluff, Shounen-Ai and Yaoi too (and Sasuke will play a good role)
Category: Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Fluff (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Warned (Shonen-ai/Yaoi), General Fiction > Post-Naruto, Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance > Top Pairings > Naruto and Gaara
Characters: Gaara, Hidden Leaf Ninja, Naruto Uzumaki, Pair NaruGaa, Team Asuma, Team Gai, Team Kakashi, Team Kuranai, Team Rookie Nine, Team Sand Siblings
Genres: Graphic lemon, Humor, Romance, WAFF
Warnings: Sexual Themes, Yaoi
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 33939 | Read count: 3999 [Report This]
Published: 23/07/09 | Updated: 08/08/09


Reviewer: Miki Everless Signed Liked
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Warm Invitation

First off, I love the way you write. It's descriptive and it does the job well, but it's got humour and sarcasm intricately laced through it, and I just think that it's beautiful. It makes me want to read more.

Secondly, I am so frickin' excited to see the second chapter on the 'Most Recent' boards.
Thirdly, I really like how you portray Gaara. You make his character intriguing and describe him well, and we still see him as our beloved Sabaku no Gaara.
I love Naruto and Gaara as a couple. ^_^ And you seem like you could write an amazing story between them.
Please update soon. Please!

Author's Response: Thank you, I do try to make those three vertents well, so I\'m glad you think so!\r\n\r\nWell, I have this story completed and posted on other sites already, but yeah, I\'ll be posting the second chapter here right away :D Then, just let me know when I can post the third (and last) one (which is my personal favorite and the longest).\r\n\r\nI like to think Gaara will grow that way after the series ends, so I\'m happy you can still like him like this!\r\n\r\nI LOVE this two as a couple too :) In fact, among the many couples I like only this one and another one made the OTP status.\r\n\r\nThanks again for the very lovely review! :D I hope the rest of the story is to your liking too!