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Here ya go
Age: 20
bday: 12/16/94
height: i dunno like 5 foot 6
Favorite anime: Naruto
Favorite manga: Naruto
video games: call of duty, halo, skyrim, battlefield, naruto shippuden: ultimate nina storm (1,2,generations, and 3)
movies: all the naruto movies, saving private ryan, I am legend, red tails, lets go to prison, half baked, how high, friday, Super Troopers, Juice
Story progress: well about 4 years ago when i was 13 i began writing my story about Shizake Uchiha. After a year or so of writing my computer crashed and I lost the story entirely which crushed me because i worked so hard on that. Alas, about 4 months ago i found the story in an email i sent to a friend and started re-writing the story. As the story progresses my grammar and maturity of the lines get's better (you can probably tell). For now Shizake is my main story i am working on.
Likes: Music, food, video games,
Dislikes: stupid people, liars, cheaters, shit talkers,
About me: Not much. I'm pretty laid back. I don't get angered easily. I can be sensitive or tough whenever the time is right. I like making friends who are chill and don't bombard me with continuous bullshit. I tell it how it is and if you don't like it then fuckkkk you.
Music: Metallica,Megadeth,Judas Priest,Eminem,Dr.Dre,N.W.A, Biggie Smalls, Tupac, The Juliet Massacre, Job for a Cowboy, Skirllex, Doctor P, Flux Pavillion, pretty much everything except country (I dont hate it i just dont listen to it).
Jeesus H. Christ, Tupac is the best rapper to have ever walked the face of the earth. May his soul rest in peace..
Jeez the first time I watched Naruto I was so fascinated by it. I dont know why. It caught my attention maybe because of the well developed characters, and drama that was played throughout the series. I would spend hours watching all the episodes If I could. I really didnt like anime or manga up until that point.
Nicknames given to me
Shizake-san - Sasaui Uchiha, Silverwolf1213, and pretty much everyone else
Zhake-san - RowanRose
Shizake-senpai - JubileeofPuppies
ReaperES (reaper of evil souls) - RowanRose also :P
Shi-chi - UzumakiMasumi
Shi-nii - UzumakiMasumi
Itoko-san - Sasaui Uchiha
Nii-san - Silverwolf1213
Nicknames i've given
Sasaui-chan - Sasaui Uchiha
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Wolf-chan - Silverwolf1213
Haiena-chan - JubileeofPuppies
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Nee-chan - Silverwolf1213
Itoko- Sasaui Uchiha
If I left you out tell me and i'll add :)
Stories:
Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening
Random writings that involve my first OC Shizake Uchiha. A bunch of adventures that don't have anything to do with the main story.
Shadow of Vengeance
A child's destiny is carved for revenge. He travels through all the lands, and all the villages searching for answers as well as how to control his abilities.
Relapse into Illusion
The sequel to Abysmal. Again a collaboration with Hazard. Hayai and Gatsuuga are allowed back into the normal world. Can they fit back in? Or will the madness tear them up once more?
From the Ashes of War and Tragedy
A fusion story between Naruto and the Four Horsemen. Follow each Horsemen as they journey to put a halt to the Apocalypse. Four guardians guard the keys to the gates of hell and heaven. Will they be able to complete their task?
Retribution
A collaboration I am doing with Itoko (Sasaui Uchiha). Two ninja venture to shadow country to unravel a story of their own. Will they survive the madness going on within the village?
Completed Stories:
A Legacy in the Dust
The third and final story in the series, "The Path Each Takes. It is about Zuzake Uchiha, the grandson of Shizake Uchiha and the son of Kuzake Uchiha. Follow him on his quest to discover the legacy that his ancestors left behind.
Black Fire through Lightning
The first installment in the series, "The Path Each Takes. Shizake Uchiha (My first OC). His journey begins in the Nine-Tailed Fox village as he acquires new powers and learns new things about himself. Watch as he struggles to come to peace with his cousin Sasuke.
A Shadow in the Light
The second installment in the series. It picks up with Shizake recovering from a year long coma from his fight with his cousin who is now imprisoned. Continuing to find his place in the world, he continues to learn new things about his self.
Abysmal
A collab with my good friend Hazard. Two ninja journey to southern fire country to complete a mission. What they find out shocks them as they unravel a whole mystery of it's own. Internal and external problems plague the two on their mystery.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 16]
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 27947 | Read count: 7974 [Report This]
Published: 23/06/13 | Updated: 02/08/14
Date: 04/02/15 Title: Chapter 9: Rescue Mission
Yo! This was another awesome chapter. I really liked how you had the characters handle things like Naruto doing a henge to hide himself and I really liked how you had him replace the guards with clones to take over the camp. I hope Akira can save Naruto as well but it seems like Naruto has a hold on things so we'll see. Update soon.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 10]
Uchiha Sasaui only wanted to become a great Konoha kunoichi and make her family proud.
Mokushi Hikaru fought to simply feel what her own heart told her.
Gisei Kataki became caught up in a fate given to him by his family before he was even born.
Ueda Takao wanted to know what it was like to have a soul.
None knew just what the taint had planned for their own paths.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Pre-Series
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 17313 | Read count: 4644 [Report This]
Published: 27/06/13 | Updated: 24/08/15
Date: 12/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Little Lights
Just as I expected. Awesome the second time around. It was sweet too, I think you portrayed the strong relationship between the three even better than last time, so good job for that! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can somewhat see how it's stronger this time. I'm glad that you liked it, Itoko-san, and I hope it continues to be awesome.
Date: 27/06/13 Title: Tainted Hearts
:D I'm so glad your bringing this story back like I literally jumped out of my bed. It'll be like reading it for the first time again :) I'm super excited update soon!
Author's Response: Haha. I'm still laughing just from reading that. I knew you'd be excited, but didn't know you'd be that excited. I'm eager to see your thoughts again and hope you enjoy.
Date: 14/01/14 Title: Chapter 2: One Word
That was a good chapter :) heartwarming to say the least also. I would say sasaui is a bit more mature for her age but in a good way so don't think you did a bad job. It sucks that her father banned her ability, is it a precursor to the sharingan? Is that why he banned it? Well not much else to say except good job and update soon
Date: 11/12/14 Title: Chapter 3: Uchiha Pride
Awesome chapter! Like before you portrayed Sasaui's caring relationship. I cant remember if you put this in the last version of TG about the Uchiha pride thing? Anyways I thought it was good to see how protecting the clan and protecting Naruto was a tug of war in her mind. I liked the ending though ;) I can't wait for the next chapter though. Update soon!
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 7]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: Danzou Shimura, Ibiki Morino, Ino Yamanaka, OC, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 6185 | Read count: 4048 [Report This]
Published: 04/07/13 | Updated: 02/08/13
Date: 11/07/13 Title: Chapter 2: Delve Deeper
Very nice. I'm excited to see what Ibiki will tell Ino about her real father. Nice update!
Date: 08/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Passing the Torch
wassup man. Nice start! It seems like it's going to be a great mystery. It was a nice way to set things up so I can't wait for more.
Date: 03/08/13 Title: Chapter 3: Sociopath
Very nice. I really like Urami's personality. the story is going real smooth Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Rated: U [Reviews - 6]
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1247 | Read count: 3342 [Report This]
Published: 10/07/13 | Updated: 09/09/13
Date: 10/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Save Our Site
I agree that this site is dying but I still love to post things. Idk maybe one day all those people will come back :/
Rated: U [Reviews - 1]
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 420 | Read count: 1180 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/13 | Updated: 15/07/13
Date: 15/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Fears
I've seen this before... I swear this poem was posted a while back. I remember it because I remember he was afraid of the lightning. very nice
Author's Response: Indeed You Have. Im Happy My Work Has Been Remembered. :)
Im The Same Author, (The Story Was Originally Posted Under The Penname Tragedy)And Alot Of My Previous Work Will Be Revisited Here, Along With New Ones And Hopefully Finished Stories.
Rated: U [Reviews - 2]
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: C, Darui, Hinata Hyuuga, Killer B, Team Kakashi
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 280 | Read count: 1471 [Report This]
Published: 24/07/13 | Updated: 24/07/13
Date: 25/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: I: How It Started
I would have to agree with Hazard. I liked the idea it's a nice twist but after everything they've been through I don't think Bee and Naruto could fight each other the connection with being a Jinchuriki is too strong. But still it was a nice idea that the nations are pitted against each other.
Author's Response: Im not quite finished yet, but thanks for the review. I hope you keep an eye out for the story and continue to feed me your thoughts an insight. Happy readings.
Rated: PG [Reviews - 8]
It's time to find out who will reign superior in the Chuunin Exams.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 5930 | Read count: 3953 [Report This]
Published: 20/07/14 | Updated: 23/07/14
Date: 20/07/14 Title: Even Flowers Have Thorns
Not bad for the first chapter. I guess it's a whole different take though. Sakura doesn't seem to be the rival anymore, team asuma isn't ino shika cho, and it doesn't seem like their leader is as ima anymore. Ok I can dig it.
One thing that bothered me was that the scenes seemed a bit jumpy, there wasn't exactly transitions and I was a bit confused as to where they were. Perhaps take more time to explain the things around them to set up the scene and also explain how they travel from place to place or even have an immediate scene change and like I said before explain where they are.
Other than that, interesting start I'll keep reading along to see where you take this.
Date: 20/07/14 Title: Chapter 2: Ready or Not
Again, not bad. Short but not bad.
Try making larger paragraphs, it seems your jumping around from thought to thought really quickly. Take time to explain everyone's thoughts especially Mai since she is the main character.
Another thing that confused me, it seemed Ino and the rest of the team just magically appeared. First she was talking to lee and tenten then next thing you know she was getting chewed out by ino.
It kind of surprised me how the team leader already recommended them for the chunin exams, they haven't even done anything yet haha.
Well I think with a few fixes this story can be great. I hope you don't see my criticism as harsh or mean I just want to help you. Please don't let it deter you from writing. We all need help with our writing sometime, even me. Keep writing because I'll keep reading :)
Author's Response: I appreciate your constructive criticism.
Date: 21/07/14 Title: Chapter 3: Mai's Potential
Very nice very nice.
Towards the end I was a little confused. Who killed who? You made it seem like Shikamaru was the one that was getting his ass kicked by (whom im assuming was Neji) the person but it wasn't so that left me a little confused. Also I don't think that person would get away with just killing a person right there.
Mai still has me curious, i'd really like to see some more of her personality which i'm sure you'll show more of later on.
One thing I suggest is reading some of the other fan fiction on here to get a gist of how to set up scenes, use transitions, and clearly explain everything to help the story flow nicely and to give a better understanding to the reader. There are tutorials that people have written which i'm sure would come in handy.
Again, not bad. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: I revised the last chapter a bit, again I appreciate the feedback it has helped.
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 8]
One Shot based on Chapter 3 of Reverse This Curse.
When Rayne returns to Konoha after three years to speak to Tsunade, she runs into Izumo on the way. Now sixteen, the age Izumo had given her permission to ask him out, Rayne gains the nerve to ask him to dinner after his shift.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Iruka Umino, OC
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9353 | Read count: 2336 [Report This]
Published: 03/10/14 | Updated: 03/10/14
Date: 05/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)
Hello! It was really nice to see something written by you. I feel like it's been a lifetime. I'm no good with words when it comes to this romantic stuff... but this was sweet. I think you captured the emotions really well and you created a really vivid picture. Heh I wish I could find a better way to express my thoughts. It was a really great one shot, and I mean really really great. It makes me miss the romantic stuff sometimes because as you have shown in your story, romance like this can be used to get away from everything and truly enjoy happiness for a while... Sorry if none of this made sense. It was awesome Tink. Incredible
Author's Response: Hey there!! It certainly has been a lifetime! I actually really enjoyed writing this, more so than I thought I would when I originally came up with the idea for it. After I read it myself, I realized how sad it actually is because it is just a momentary escape from everything.. I put Rayne through so much shit :'D Thank you for still being around to read and review for me (: Xoxo
Rated: 15 [Reviews - 9]
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Genma Shiranui, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tsunade
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 15886 | Read count: 8174 [Report This]
Published: 14/11/14 | Updated: 10/07/15
Date: 11/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hello there! I liked this quite a lot. Your descriptiveness flows nicely and you set up the setting pretty well. Don't apologize for a slow start, stories do need to develop first. I like Saya she seems pretty laid back and adventurous and pretty friendly too. I noticed you mispelld Temari as Tamari sometimes but I assume thats a common typo. I'm gonna stick with this story and see where it goes so expect more reviews from me :D
Rated: PG [Reviews - 2]
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: OC
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 752 | Read count: 1202 [Report This]
Published: 24/12/14 | Updated: 24/12/14
Date: 26/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That wasn't bad at all. It was a bit on the short side though and didn't really give us a background on Minami. I suppose you'll reveal that through the actual story though. I saw a couple of run on sentences in the beginning but nothing too bad. Her father seems like a dick but I suppose a lot of fathers in Naruto are well dicks. If you update, I'll read it. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I did happen to notice that I had some run on sentences, I didn't actually notice until I published it though, and yes I do plan on giving you some more background on Minami. This was only the prologue so yeah it was kind of just a slight introduction. Thank you very much!