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Penname: Shizake Uchiha [Contact]
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Membership status: Member
Member since: 22/02/12
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Here ya go

Age: 20
bday: 12/16/94
height: i dunno like 5 foot 6
Favorite anime: Naruto
Favorite manga: Naruto
video games: call of duty, halo, skyrim, battlefield, naruto shippuden: ultimate nina storm (1,2,generations, and 3)
movies: all the naruto movies, saving private ryan, I am legend, red tails, lets go to prison, half baked, how high, friday, Super Troopers, Juice

Story progress: well about 4 years ago when i was 13 i began writing my story about Shizake Uchiha. After a year or so of writing my computer crashed and I lost the story entirely which crushed me because i worked so hard on that. Alas, about 4 months ago i found the story in an email i sent to a friend and started re-writing the story. As the story progresses my grammar and maturity of the lines get's better (you can probably tell). For now Shizake is my main story i am working on.

Likes: Music, food, video games,
Dislikes: stupid people, liars, cheaters, shit talkers,

About me: Not much. I'm pretty laid back. I don't get angered easily. I can be sensitive or tough whenever the time is right. I like making friends who are chill and don't bombard me with continuous bullshit. I tell it how it is and if you don't like it then fuckkkk you.


Music: Metallica,Megadeth,Judas Priest,Eminem,Dr.Dre,N.W.A, Biggie Smalls, Tupac, The Juliet Massacre, Job for a Cowboy, Skirllex, Doctor P, Flux Pavillion, pretty much everything except country (I dont hate it i just dont listen to it).

Jeesus H. Christ, Tupac is the best rapper to have ever walked the face of the earth. May his soul rest in peace..

Jeez the first time I watched Naruto I was so fascinated by it. I dont know why. It caught my attention maybe because of the well developed characters, and drama that was played throughout the series. I would spend hours watching all the episodes If I could. I really didnt like anime or manga up until that point.

Nicknames given to me
Shizake-san - Sasaui Uchiha, Silverwolf1213, and pretty much everyone else
Zhake-san - RowanRose
Shizake-senpai - JubileeofPuppies
ReaperES (reaper of evil souls) - RowanRose also :P
Shi-chi - UzumakiMasumi
Shi-nii - UzumakiMasumi
Itoko-san - Sasaui Uchiha
Nii-san - Silverwolf1213

Nicknames i've given
Sasaui-chan - Sasaui Uchiha
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Wolf-chan - Silverwolf1213
Haiena-chan - JubileeofPuppies
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Nee-chan - Silverwolf1213
Itoko- Sasaui Uchiha

If I left you out tell me and i'll add :)

Stories:

Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening

Random writings that involve my first OC Shizake Uchiha. A bunch of adventures that don't have anything to do with the main story.

Shadow of Vengeance

A child's destiny is carved for revenge. He travels through all the lands, and all the villages searching for answers as well as how to control his abilities.


Relapse into Illusion

The sequel to Abysmal. Again a collaboration with Hazard. Hayai and Gatsuuga are allowed back into the normal world. Can they fit back in? Or will the madness tear them up once more?


From the Ashes of War and Tragedy

A fusion story between Naruto and the Four Horsemen. Follow each Horsemen as they journey to put a halt to the Apocalypse. Four guardians guard the keys to the gates of hell and heaven. Will they be able to complete their task?

Retribution

A collaboration I am doing with Itoko (Sasaui Uchiha). Two ninja venture to shadow country to unravel a story of their own. Will they survive the madness going on within the village?

Completed Stories:

A Legacy in the Dust

The third and final story in the series, "The Path Each Takes. It is about Zuzake Uchiha, the grandson of Shizake Uchiha and the son of Kuzake Uchiha. Follow him on his quest to discover the legacy that his ancestors left behind.


Black Fire through Lightning

The first installment in the series, "The Path Each Takes. Shizake Uchiha (My first OC). His journey begins in the Nine-Tailed Fox village as he acquires new powers and learns new things about himself. Watch as he struggles to come to peace with his cousin Sasuke.

A Shadow in the Light

The second installment in the series. It picks up with Shizake recovering from a year long coma from his fight with his cousin who is now imprisoned. Continuing to find his place in the world, he continues to learn new things about his self.

Abysmal

A collab with my good friend Hazard. Two ninja journey to southern fire country to complete a mission. What they find out shocks them as they unravel a whole mystery of it's own. Internal and external problems plague the two on their mystery.

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Stories by Shizake Uchiha [16]
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Reviews by Shizake Uchiha


Title: Shinobi Diaries: The Golden Sage Chronicles by crimson sun06
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 16]
Summary: The end of the 4th war heralded the dawn of a new age. An age of peace and cooperation between the nations. But underneath the facade of peace lies a new threat. The turmoil and chaos of change allows it to pass unnoticed...or does it?
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Naruto Uzumaki
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: No | Word count: 27947 | Read count: 7974 [Report This]
Published: 23/06/13 | Updated: 02/08/14


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 04/02/15 Title: Chapter 9: Rescue Mission

Yo! This was another awesome chapter. I really liked how you had the characters handle things like Naruto doing a henge to hide himself and I really liked how you had him replace the guards with clones to take over the camp. I hope Akira can save Naruto as well but it seems like Naruto has a hold on things so we'll see. Update soon.



Title: Tainted Hearts by Sasaui Uchiha
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Taint is a dangerous poison. Once it begins, it spreads without limit. It will swallow everything in its path if it is not stopped. Such as all poisons, taint begins somewhere.

Uchiha Sasaui only wanted to become a great Konoha kunoichi and make her family proud.

Mokushi Hikaru fought to simply feel what her own heart told her.

Gisei Kataki became caught up in a fate given to him by his family before he was even born.

Ueda Takao wanted to know what it was like to have a soul.

None knew just what the taint had planned for their own paths.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Het Romance > Fluff, General Fiction > Pre-Series
Characters: Itachi Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki, OC, Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 | Completed: No | Word count: 17313 | Read count: 4644 [Report This]
Published: 27/06/13 | Updated: 24/08/15


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 12/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Little Lights

Just as I expected. Awesome the second time around. It was sweet too, I think you portrayed the strong relationship between the three even better than last time, so good job for that! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I can somewhat see how it's stronger this time. I'm glad that you liked it, Itoko-san, and I hope it continues to be awesome.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 27/06/13 Title: Tainted Hearts

:D I'm so glad your bringing this story back like I literally jumped out of my bed. It'll be like reading it for the first time again :) I'm super excited update soon!

Author's Response: Haha. I'm still laughing just from reading that. I knew you'd be excited, but didn't know you'd be that excited. I'm eager to see your thoughts again and hope you enjoy.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 14/01/14 Title: Chapter 2: One Word

That was a good chapter :) heartwarming to say the least also. I would say sasaui is a bit more mature for her age but in a good way so don't think you did a bad job. It sucks that her father banned her ability, is it a precursor to the sharingan? Is that why he banned it? Well not much else to say except good job and update soon



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/12/14 Title: Chapter 3: Uchiha Pride

Awesome chapter! Like before you portrayed Sasaui's caring relationship. I cant remember if you put this in the last version of TG about the Uchiha pride thing? Anyways I thought it was good to see how protecting the clan and protecting Naruto was a tug of war in her mind. I liked the ending though ;) I can't wait for the next chapter though. Update soon!



Title: Schizophrenia by Hazard
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Set 1 year before Naruto’s return and start of Shippuden. Ino Yamanaka is in a for a wake up call. Her father Inoichi is diagnosed with an incurable disease and on his death bed reveals to Ino that her actual birth father is not him, and actually locked away in Konoha’s highest security sector, and with his release soon to be pending Ino must face her true father and the darkness of her true heritage.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeskip
Characters: Danzou Shimura, Ibiki Morino, Ino Yamanaka, OC, Sakura Haruno, Tsunade
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: AU, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 6185 | Read count: 4048 [Report This]
Published: 04/07/13 | Updated: 02/08/13


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/07/13 Title: Chapter 2: Delve Deeper

Very nice. I'm excited to see what Ibiki will tell Ino about her real father. Nice update!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 08/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Passing the Torch

wassup man. Nice start! It seems like it's going to be a great mystery. It was a nice way to set things up so I can't wait for more.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/08/13 Title: Chapter 3: Sociopath

Very nice. I really like Urami's personality. the story is going real smooth Can't wait to see the next chapter.



Title: S.O.S by Sasaui Uchiha
Rated: U Round robin Liked [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Basically just my thoughts and kind of a plea. So those of Tonfa, please read it.
Category: Non-Naruto Fiction
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 | Completed: No | Word count: 1247 | Read count: 3342 [Report This]
Published: 10/07/13 | Updated: 09/09/13


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 10/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Save Our Site

I agree that this site is dying but I still love to post things. Idk maybe one day all those people will come back :/



Title: Fears by Reign of Tragedy
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 1]
Summary: This one-shot explores the fears that made Sasuke who he is.
Category: General Fiction > Character-Centric
Characters: Sasuke Uchiha
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 420 | Read count: 1180 [Report This]
Published: 15/07/13 | Updated: 15/07/13


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: Fears

I've seen this before... I swear this poem was posted a while back. I remember it because I remember he was afraid of the lightning. very nice

Author's Response: Indeed You Have. Im Happy My Work Has Been Remembered. :) Im The Same Author, (The Story Was Originally Posted Under The Penname Tragedy)And Alot Of My Previous Work Will Be Revisited Here, Along With New Ones And Hopefully Finished Stories.



Title: Back To War by Reign of Tragedy
Rated: U Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Directly After The Fourth Great Shinobi War, The Ninja World Is Thrown Into Disarray. For As Much As Things Change, They Remain The Same.
Category: General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: C, Darui, Hinata Hyuuga, Killer B, Team Kakashi
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: Death, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 280 | Read count: 1471 [Report This]
Published: 24/07/13 | Updated: 24/07/13


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/07/13 Title: Chapter 1: I: How It Started

I would have to agree with Hazard. I liked the idea it's a nice twist but after everything they've been through I don't think Bee and Naruto could fight each other the connection with being a Jinchuriki is too strong. But still it was a nice idea that the nations are pitted against each other.

Author's Response: Im not quite finished yet, but thanks for the review. I hope you keep an eye out for the story and continue to feed me your thoughts an insight. Happy readings.



Title: Even Flowers Have Thorns by NinjaRace
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Lovable but cruel Ino, collaborates with two unexpected team mates. A flurry of light. Crimson thread kisses the earth.You can't kill a monster simply.

It's time to find out who will reign superior in the Chuunin Exams.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Character-Centric, General Fiction > Naruto
Characters: Ino Yamanaka
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: No | Word count: 5930 | Read count: 3953 [Report This]
Published: 20/07/14 | Updated: 23/07/14


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/07/14 Title: Even Flowers Have Thorns

Not bad for the first chapter. I guess it's a whole different take though. Sakura doesn't seem to be the rival anymore, team asuma isn't ino shika cho, and it doesn't seem like their leader is as ima anymore. Ok I can dig it.

One thing that bothered me was that the scenes seemed a bit jumpy, there wasn't exactly transitions and I was a bit confused as to where they were. Perhaps take more time to explain the things around them to set up the scene and also explain how they travel from place to place or even have an immediate scene change and like I said before explain where they are.

Other than that, interesting start I'll keep reading along to see where you take this.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/07/14 Title: Chapter 2: Ready or Not

Again, not bad. Short but not bad.

Try making larger paragraphs, it seems your jumping around from thought to thought really quickly. Take time to explain everyone's thoughts especially Mai since she is the main character.

Another thing that confused me, it seemed Ino and the rest of the team just magically appeared. First she was talking to lee and tenten then next thing you know she was getting chewed out by ino.

It kind of surprised me how the team leader already recommended them for the chunin exams, they haven't even done anything yet haha.

Well I think with a few fixes this story can be great. I hope you don't see my criticism as harsh or mean I just want to help you. Please don't let it deter you from writing. We all need help with our writing sometime, even me. Keep writing because I'll keep reading :)

Author's Response: I appreciate your constructive criticism.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed
Date: 21/07/14 Title: Chapter 3: Mai's Potential

Very nice very nice.

Towards the end I was a little confused. Who killed who? You made it seem like Shikamaru was the one that was getting his ass kicked by (whom im assuming was Neji) the person but it wasn't so that left me a little confused. Also I don't think that person would get away with just killing a person right there.

Mai still has me curious, i'd really like to see some more of her personality which i'm sure you'll show more of later on.

One thing I suggest is reading some of the other fan fiction on here to get a gist of how to set up scenes, use transitions, and clearly explain everything to help the story flow nicely and to give a better understanding to the reader. There are tutorials that people have written which i'm sure would come in handy.

Again, not bad. Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response: I revised the last chapter a bit, again I appreciate the feedback it has helped.



Title: A Lesson In Romantics by xXxTiNkxXx
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 8]
Summary:  photo 9b6ee5b7-fbda-4716-8304-24a0f8b24ee3_zpsddfe6226.png

One Shot based on Chapter 3 of Reverse This Curse.
When Rayne returns to Konoha after three years to speak to Tsunade, she runs into Izumo on the way. Now sixteen, the age Izumo had given her permission to ask him out, Rayne gains the nerve to ask him to dinner after his shift.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden
Characters: Iruka Umino, OC
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 9353 | Read count: 2336 [Report This]
Published: 03/10/14 | Updated: 03/10/14


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed
Date: 05/10/14 Title: Chapter 1: Champagne's For Celebrating (I'll Have A Martini)

Hello! It was really nice to see something written by you. I feel like it's been a lifetime. I'm no good with words when it comes to this romantic stuff... but this was sweet. I think you captured the emotions really well and you created a really vivid picture. Heh I wish I could find a better way to express my thoughts. It was a really great one shot, and I mean really really great. It makes me miss the romantic stuff sometimes because as you have shown in your story, romance like this can be used to get away from everything and truly enjoy happiness for a while... Sorry if none of this made sense. It was awesome Tink. Incredible

Author's Response: Hey there!! It certainly has been a lifetime! I actually really enjoyed writing this, more so than I thought I would when I originally came up with the idea for it. After I read it myself, I realized how sad it actually is because it is just a momentary escape from everything.. I put Rayne through so much shit :'D Thank you for still being around to read and review for me (: Xoxo



Title: Saya of the Sand by mst88
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Saya considers her mission with Temari to start the planning of the next Chunin exams, to be held in the Hidden Leaf, boring. Once there she finds that it is anything but boring.
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Genma Shiranui, Kiba Inuzuka, Shikamaru Nara, Temari, Tsunade
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 15886 | Read count: 8174 [Report This]
Published: 14/11/14 | Updated: 10/07/15


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 11/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hello there! I liked this quite a lot. Your descriptiveness flows nicely and you set up the setting pretty well. Don't apologize for a slow start, stories do need to develop first. I like Saya she seems pretty laid back and adventurous and pretty friendly too. I noticed you mispelld Temari as Tamari sometimes but I assume thats a common typo. I'm gonna stick with this story and see where it goes so expect more reviews from me :D



Title: Below Average: Teaser by Kleptomaniac
Rated: PG Liked [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Minami never wanted to become a shinobi. She enjoyed learning different types of jutsu, enjoyed knowing that she knew things. However, she never did very well in school mainly because: she didn't want to be a shinobi; too bad it was kind of required.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: OC
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 | Completed: No | Word count: 752 | Read count: 1202 [Report This]
Published: 24/12/14 | Updated: 24/12/14


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 26/12/14 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That wasn't bad at all. It was a bit on the short side though and didn't really give us a background on Minami. I suppose you'll reveal that through the actual story though. I saw a couple of run on sentences in the beginning but nothing too bad. Her father seems like a dick but I suppose a lot of fathers in Naruto are well dicks. If you update, I'll read it. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I did happen to notice that I had some run on sentences, I didn't actually notice until I published it though, and yes I do plan on giving you some more background on Minami. This was only the prologue so yeah it was kind of just a slight introduction. Thank you very much!