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Penname: Shizake Uchiha [Contact]
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Member since: 22/02/12
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Here ya go

Age: 20
bday: 12/16/94
height: i dunno like 5 foot 6
Favorite anime: Naruto
Favorite manga: Naruto
video games: call of duty, halo, skyrim, battlefield, naruto shippuden: ultimate nina storm (1,2,generations, and 3)
movies: all the naruto movies, saving private ryan, I am legend, red tails, lets go to prison, half baked, how high, friday, Super Troopers, Juice

Story progress: well about 4 years ago when i was 13 i began writing my story about Shizake Uchiha. After a year or so of writing my computer crashed and I lost the story entirely which crushed me because i worked so hard on that. Alas, about 4 months ago i found the story in an email i sent to a friend and started re-writing the story. As the story progresses my grammar and maturity of the lines get's better (you can probably tell). For now Shizake is my main story i am working on.

Likes: Music, food, video games,
Dislikes: stupid people, liars, cheaters, shit talkers,

About me: Not much. I'm pretty laid back. I don't get angered easily. I can be sensitive or tough whenever the time is right. I like making friends who are chill and don't bombard me with continuous bullshit. I tell it how it is and if you don't like it then fuckkkk you.


Music: Metallica,Megadeth,Judas Priest,Eminem,Dr.Dre,N.W.A, Biggie Smalls, Tupac, The Juliet Massacre, Job for a Cowboy, Skirllex, Doctor P, Flux Pavillion, pretty much everything except country (I dont hate it i just dont listen to it).

Jeesus H. Christ, Tupac is the best rapper to have ever walked the face of the earth. May his soul rest in peace..

Jeez the first time I watched Naruto I was so fascinated by it. I dont know why. It caught my attention maybe because of the well developed characters, and drama that was played throughout the series. I would spend hours watching all the episodes If I could. I really didnt like anime or manga up until that point.

Nicknames given to me
Shizake-san - Sasaui Uchiha, Silverwolf1213, and pretty much everyone else
Zhake-san - RowanRose
Shizake-senpai - JubileeofPuppies
ReaperES (reaper of evil souls) - RowanRose also :P
Shi-chi - UzumakiMasumi
Shi-nii - UzumakiMasumi
Itoko-san - Sasaui Uchiha
Nii-san - Silverwolf1213

Nicknames i've given
Sasaui-chan - Sasaui Uchiha
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Wolf-chan - Silverwolf1213
Haiena-chan - JubileeofPuppies
Rose-chan - RowanRose
Nee-chan - Silverwolf1213
Itoko- Sasaui Uchiha

If I left you out tell me and i'll add :)

Stories:

Shizake Chronicles: The Awakening

Random writings that involve my first OC Shizake Uchiha. A bunch of adventures that don't have anything to do with the main story.

Shadow of Vengeance

A child's destiny is carved for revenge. He travels through all the lands, and all the villages searching for answers as well as how to control his abilities.


Relapse into Illusion

The sequel to Abysmal. Again a collaboration with Hazard. Hayai and Gatsuuga are allowed back into the normal world. Can they fit back in? Or will the madness tear them up once more?


From the Ashes of War and Tragedy

A fusion story between Naruto and the Four Horsemen. Follow each Horsemen as they journey to put a halt to the Apocalypse. Four guardians guard the keys to the gates of hell and heaven. Will they be able to complete their task?

Retribution

A collaboration I am doing with Itoko (Sasaui Uchiha). Two ninja venture to shadow country to unravel a story of their own. Will they survive the madness going on within the village?

Completed Stories:

A Legacy in the Dust

The third and final story in the series, "The Path Each Takes. It is about Zuzake Uchiha, the grandson of Shizake Uchiha and the son of Kuzake Uchiha. Follow him on his quest to discover the legacy that his ancestors left behind.


Black Fire through Lightning

The first installment in the series, "The Path Each Takes. Shizake Uchiha (My first OC). His journey begins in the Nine-Tailed Fox village as he acquires new powers and learns new things about himself. Watch as he struggles to come to peace with his cousin Sasuke.

A Shadow in the Light

The second installment in the series. It picks up with Shizake recovering from a year long coma from his fight with his cousin who is now imprisoned. Continuing to find his place in the world, he continues to learn new things about his self.

Abysmal

A collab with my good friend Hazard. Two ninja journey to southern fire country to complete a mission. What they find out shocks them as they unravel a whole mystery of it's own. Internal and external problems plague the two on their mystery.

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Reviews by Shizake Uchiha


Title: Three Little Words by Mikagami39
Rated: R18 Liked [Reviews - 69]
Summary: Its amazing how three simple words can alter a person's destiny. See what happens when a certain unpredictable ninja recalls and acts on a battlefield confession
Category: Het Romance > Angst, General Fiction > Naruto Shippuuden, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU, Het Romance > Top Six Pairs > Naruto and Hinata
Characters: All
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: AU, Sexual Themes
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 | Completed: No | Word count: 133131 | Read count: 6145 [Report This]
Published: 13/03/12 | Updated: 18/07/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 10/04/12 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Ok...This was the most amazing chapter by far. Sure i'm very disappointed that Naruto isn't a chuunin but you definitely didnt waste his oppurtunity and made him have a good reason to withdraw. The fights were epic, the emotion was so very apparent and everything was just awesome. Incredible story! Was this the last chapter? I hope not, I like this story way too much.

Author's Response: You have no idea how much your response means to me. I was kinda worried that the fights would seem one sided so to speak. But to answer your question: by no means is this the end of the story. And I think you will enjoy what happens next very much.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/05/12 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay you double updated :) God this is so suspenseful...I want to know what's wrong! Damn cliffhanger -.- Oh well. Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: gotta love it. there is always something new on the horizon. ;P Glad you are enjoying the story thus far!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 04/04/12 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Two amazing chapters. I really like how the story is developing. Naruto is intensifying his training and Hinata is teaching him more and more. And its getting more and more sexy ;) Great job keep up the good work!

Author's Response: A little bit of heat never hurts, ya know? ;) I am glad you enjoyed them. Wait til the Chuunin Exams!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 29/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah as expected. Naruto's training just keeps getting more and more intense. Awesome! Lol how to seduce Naruto haha this is going to be interesting :P Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I just hope you enjoy what he is going to have to go through when the Chuunin Exams take place. Think he'll need it. And I felt it important that Hinata grow as a woman and in the process gain more in terms of understanding her own inner power as a woman and not just a Shinobi. Just hope my ideas turn out good on paper. Just also wanted to say thank you for your encouragement. I almost quit after the first couple of chapters til you and one other started submitting responses. Now I can't stop! Hope you continue to enjoy what comes next....



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 23/04/12 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! That was amazing. Naruto totally kicked ass. Tsunade put up an amazing fight but Naruto has improved beyond anyone in the village I swear. Great chapter, great fight scene and great cliffhanger too. I want to know what this power is. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: thank you. I can't say it enough. But here's a thought: Its obvious he held back his killing jutsu's. Which implies, he didn't fight at full strength or with full conviction. What would it have been like if he HAD?



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 16/04/12 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What?! That was awesome! I never expected a fight of that magnitude! Dammit I hope you update soon I want to see the fight against Tsunade!!!

Author's Response: Heh....they did say he didn't have to hold back...and even so, he made sure to not use his Rasen Shuriken, which would have killed.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh damn disowned? Intense. I wonder what Hiashi is going to do about it in the future. He's probably so pissed that Hinata is staying at Naruto's. Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks! I can say that while he can't do anything to interfere, he is not happy about it. But in time things will work out. I am glad you are continuing to enjoy the story!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 18/03/12 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Whoa this chapter was full of intensity! The Kyuubi part was my favorite! I like the fox even if he is just pure evil. Sometimes I forget just how powerful he is. Awesome chapter I really enjoyed it! I cant wait to see the fight between Naruto and Hiashi. It's all so epic! Great work!

Author's Response: I glad you are enjoying the story thus far. There will more Kyuubi moments as the story progresses.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 23/03/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter. I really like the relationship between Hinata and Naruto. And it's getting a bit sexy ;). Cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work!

Author's Response: think you'll enjoy what happens next.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 21/03/12 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sweet chapter! I really enjoy everything that's going on right now. It'd be cool to see the romance between Temari and Shika be elaborated on. You probably have a plan for that :P Keep up the good work! I am really really really enjoying this story!

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Hope your enjoyment continues as the story progresses!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 19/03/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ah closure...for now. That was a great chapter. I like how everyone is reluctant to talk about sexual things. hehe. Great chapter. Amazing story too, cant wait to see more

Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 19/03/12 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whoa...I am just speechless. That battle was absolutely amazing. People say i'm good at action scenes. But no no no your amazing at them. This was filled with such emotion I was dying to read the next paragraph. This was an amazing chapter. Great job!!

Author's Response: I appreciate that. I really really do. To say I was nervous about this chapter is an understatement. I didn't want to drag it out, yet not make Hiashi a pushover. Plus how to take im out without killing him in a way that no one expected. I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story as it progresses.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 17/03/12 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was an epic moments with Naruto busting in. I cant wait to see the fight against Hiashi it to will be epic! Great chapter, keep up the good work

Author's Response: thank you! I really appreciate the review! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 15/03/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OO I really like this story. It may be weird but Hinata is one of my favorite characters. I cant wait to see how Naruto battles it out for Hinata. Itll be epicccccccc

Author's Response: I truly appreciate your review and response! I am happy you are enjoying the story thus far! I think what I have ready is gonna be a bit of a shocker.



Title: Three Days by silverwolf1213
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 36]
Summary:
I always thought death was quick. Painless. Merciful. That's how it should be. I would never wish an agonizing death on anyone.

And yet, someone must have asked Kami to curse my grandfather with a slow and drawn out death. Because when I watched him in the hospital for those three days, there was nothing merciful about it.

It wasn't fair to him. He was a good man.

It was the worst three days of my life.

Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Timeless
Characters: OC
Genres: Dark, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: AU, Dark, Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 14779 | Read count: 5122 [Report This]
Published: 20/03/12 | Updated: 13/04/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 13/04/12 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

What an amazing ending to an amazing short story. Honestly it was incredible. I really can't find the correct words to describe it besides amazing. Good work wolf-chan :)

Author's Response: Despite the whole depressing nature of this story, there's a big cheesy grin on my face because of this review. I'm glad you liked the ending. Thanks for sticking with this all the way, Shizake-san! You're awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 09/04/12 Title: Chapter 4: The Third Day

Well I'm sitting here at school depressed. I'm not sure why I'm not crying, though it takes a lot to make me cry. All I can say is that my heart aches after reading this. It was beautifully written. An amazing story filled with such sorrow. Don't think I'll be cheerful the rest of the day, but that's what I get for reading at school. I can tell that your grandfather was a great person. May his soul rest in peace. Incredible story wolf-chan. Incredible.

Author's Response: Gah, why would you read this at school?! I didn't want you to be so sad during the day, now the rest of your day is going to seem terrible :( Well, at least you're not crying, that might be a little difficult to explain if your friends or teacher saw you.... But I guess I am happy that I was able to make you so upset, it means my writing really did improve in creating depressing atmospheres. Thank you for the sympathy, and I'm glad you liked this. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope the rest of your day isn't too saddening after reading this.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 3: The Second Day

You do really great with going from sorrow to high tension, This was great. I was already in a depressed mood and now i'm even more depressed. Don't worry it's not a bad thing I really did enjoy this. Keep up the incredible work.

Author's Response: Thanks... I guess? I mean, I know it's a compliment and all, but since this is based on true events, I wonder just how much credit I can take for writing from depressing to tense. And you already depressed? Then why on earth would you read this now?! Now I feel really bad, I'm sorry :( I hope you feel better. Thanks for reading and reviewing as always, Shizake-san! You're awesome!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 25/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

This keeps getting more and more emotional. Your really good at portraying her type of sadness. This is great I hope you continue to write more and I know you will.

Author's Response: As the whole ordeal continues on, things do get more and more emotional. I'm glad I am able to portray the sadness throughout this story. I'm glad you found this good to read. I will update, hopefully sometime this week. Thanks for the review, Shizake-san!



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 20/03/12 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Aw, Im sorry this happened to you wolf-chan :( This had a good balance of despair and rage...I sort of did the same thing here that Takako did...Now I'm a bit depressed, not that it's a bad thing. I like reading stories that make you dwell on the wonders of life. Good story. I hope you continue to write this.

Author's Response: Wow, my first review for this story.... :) I'm always happy to get that first review, even if it is for a story like this. I appreciate your condolences, but stuff likes this happens. I've never read something that I could relate to or something that had events similar to what I went through. Perhaps that is just me. I'm sorry to hear that you experienced something like this though. I feel bad for making you so depressed now :( But I'm glad you liked how this was written so far. I do plan to continue this; I wanted to have it done before April 1st, though with my update routine, it probably won't happen. But anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing, Shizake-san! I appreciate it!



Title: The Begining by mkgirl10
Rated: 12/12A Liked [Reviews - 16]
Summary: This about a famous team in the Hidden Leaf Village and how they began. The team is made up! This is my first fan fiction so don't die or something.
Category: Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: All
Genres: Humor
Warnings: OOC
Challenge: None
Series: The Begining, Middle, and End
Chapters: 34 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 29844 | Read count: 32273 [Report This]
Published: 03/04/12 | Updated: 15/12/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 05/04/12 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The new Team 7 and 12

Ok well I have some constructive criticism if you will. I'm not bashing I promise. First off I would like to say that this is pretty good for your first time as a script author. But the scenes are just too short. You need to drag them out longer and explain all that is going on. This would also help the jumping around from scene to scene. The story is just all over the place. Also I think you should give a bit more background on who "Me" is. Or use a name or something. It would help with the character development. I would recommend checking out my storie(s) but that would sound to needy of me. I just want to help you is all and see this story blossom into something amazing. Hope you continue to write :)

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me! I changed the story using those comments.:]



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 22/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow you definitely have improved. All the scenes are more drawn out which makes it flow better. The "Me" person still bothers me with no name but i'll get over it. Now it's just up to you to perfect this :)

Author's Response: I am turning "Me" into Makkenji. Makkenji was her name before but it was her narrating. Well thanks and more chapters are coming I'm typing on notepad right now.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 03/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet! Another author that writes in script format! Well this is good for starting out! I definitely see a lot of myself in this writing :P If you need any pointers feel free to contact me!

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! Luckily you didn't die. I told everyone that they wouldn't die when they reviewed. Maybe.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 22/04/12 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The battle

Sweet! You keep improving every chapter. I like how you've incorporated your team into the mission. I felt like all the events happened a bit too quick but that's what happens when your write script. You can't draw out all the events as long as you'd like, but oh well I go through the same thing. Are team 7 and team 12 going to be deployed together a lot? That would be kinda cool to seem them do a lot of joint missions.

Oh btw Kakashi calls his chidori, lightning blade. Though it's the same thing.

Which Jutsu do you want for each person? Coz everyone has a different chakra nature which would help in developing their jutsu's. Fire,water,wind,earth, and lightning. Just tell me which characters are which Nature and I'll submit some jutsu :)

Keep up the great work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for responding! Makkenji is water, moria is earth, jeikobu is wind, rogan(his team is back!) fire, kyashi is lightning, and matto earth. This will all be in the next author ch notes.



Title: Impervious by Hazard
Rated: 15 Liked [Reviews - 137]
Summary: A mysterious man that ventures through the shinobi world with a very intricate past. Follow him how impacts those around him and the past.
Category: OC-centric, General Fiction > Naruto, Alternate Universe & Crossovers > Minor AU
Characters: OC
Genres: Action/Adventure, General, Humor
Warnings: Death
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 | Completed: No | Word count: 101450 | Read count: 36581 [Report This]
Published: 16/04/12 | Updated: 20/11/12


Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 24/04/12 Title: Chapter 6: Wrong Place, Wrong Time

Sweet. As usual Yushin kicks some ass. Nice chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, but I don't think this will always be the trend in the future, and remember he was facing team Gai(before chunin exams), which is a cake walk for someone like him. I'm glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Shizake Uchiha Signed Liked
Date: 29/07/12 Title: Chapter 30: School of Hard Knocks

I see the relationship between Zakaru and Yushin is developing nicely. Nice filler chapter, can't wait to see what goes on next.

Author's Response: It will be a bit more exciting, that I can assure you.