Summary:
Somewhere in Konoha, a father falls into a drunken frenzy, and a daughter cries while a mother screams.
Akimichi Chouji doesn't know who she is, where she came from, or why she cries. He just knows that she needs him, and it's up to him to figure out what's going on.
Rating: U
Category: OC-centric
Characters: Chouji Akimichi
Genres: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Dark
Challenge: None
Series: None
Chapter: 2 Completed: No
Words: 1432 Read: 2773
Published: 25/07/07 Updated: 29/07/07
1. When by Archaic Aphorism [Reviews - 3]
(903 words)Inspired by one of my random urges just to cry my eyes out, and the need to be held by someone substantial- not just someone in my mind.
This isn't much of a substitute.
2. Secrets by Archaic Aphorism [Reviews - 1]
(529 words)Rrgh... I want to change the title... but I can't think of anything better. Does anyone have any ideas? I'm serious, my head is about to 'splode from all this thinking. I'm not made for thinking, dangit!
Also... the chapter isn't exactly what I wanted it to be, but... I don't know. It's been bothering me for a while now. I want to write, I really really really want to write, but... it's so hard to make myself write. And I'm never happy with the outcome. Eh... well... I'm trusting you'll be honest with me. If it's not great, don't tell me it's great. If it's not good, don't tell me it's good. If it sucks... well... don't be mean about it, but do tell me.
Yay! But this one is 500 words, too (except for the italicized phrase, as usual) so... at least I got that right.